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Sad """"darr""""" - 5th February 2003, 09:20 AM

dosto pesh hai

Duniya me mera dil nahi lagta, har koyi paraya lagta ha,
darr aur koyi nahi mujhey par kisi ko apnane se darr lagta hai,

duniya me shaamil hokar bhi jaane hu duniya se dur,
ab to mujhe jaane apne aap se darr lagta hai,

kaun deta hai yaha saath kisi ka yaaro barso ki duri tak,
tanha si rehti hu ab mein, bas bheer se darr lagta hai,

har koyi ek jaisa, jaise kisi ka koyi imaan nahi,
hai har shaks beyimaan is baat se darr lagta hai,

himaat bhi itni nahi ab ki aur dhoke bardaash kar ley hum,
pehley kehtEy they kaasH sapne pure ho, ab to Kaash kehne se darR lagta hai,


Ro bhi nahi saktey duniya ke saamne aur muskaan bhi raas aati nahi,
Chupaye kya muh apna tanhayo mein. mujhe ab har saath se darr lagta hai,


khud se hi ghabraati hu, aur bechain bhi hua karti hu,
areey dukhi hi rehne do Yaaro ab to Chaain se bhi darr lagta hai,

dekhne waley bhi dete hai marne ki hi dua hi dosto.
maut bhi apna le to shikwa na kare, mujhe Jeene se darr lagta hai,

khwaab kameyaabi ko chuney ke kabhi mere bhi hua karte they,
ab arzu rahi hi nahi aur tarRakki se bhi darr lagta hai,

Dushman koyi hai nahi aur dost bhi ab banati nahi,
kya nibhayun rasme riwajain aur in juthi rasmo se darr lagta hai!!

Kisi ka na hai bharosa is dil ko, kisi se na hi aas,
Hua kuch aisa mere saath, kisi par vishwaas karne se darr lagta hai,


Priy.a...


P.S.( Kayi baar there is nothing that we are scared of par hame apna aap hi chaan nahl lene deta aur tarpata hai rulata hai! sometimes things n people around us make us feel unconfortable and something ITS US OURSELVES THAT IS A REASON FOR FEELINGS OF UNFORTABLENESS! )


Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......

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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!


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5th February 2003, 09:32 AM

ache lambe-khaase sher likhe haiN aapne
dard ka ehsaas hua, aur ek la-pataa rooh ka bhi..
taareef ke qaabil har sher hai, magar jis taraH aap mujhe kaha karte the.. "smile for me," aaj maiN aapko keh raha huuN..
taareef phir se karta huuN!

likhte rahiye,
aman



"je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa,
te bibba saada dil moD de..!"


kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN..
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aapki tareef ab karoon kaise......darrrr lagata hai.
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aapki tareef ab karoon kaise......darrrr lagata hai. - 5th February 2003, 02:51 PM

Hi Priya,
Kya baat hai.....bahoot hi maqbul ban padi hai.Sabhi sher ekdam duroost hai...tum to yaar shayraa ban gayee....autograph please....

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5th February 2003, 05:51 PM

Duniya me mera dil nahi lagta, har koyi paraya lagta ha,
darr aur koyi nahi mujhey par kisi ko apnane se darr lagta hai
kaun deta hai yaha saath kisi ka yaaro barso ki duri tak,
tanha si rehti hu ab mein, bas bheer se darr lagta hai

himaat bhi itni nahi ab ki aur dhoke bardaash kar ley hum,
pehley kehtEy they kaasH sapne pure ho, ab to Kaash kehne se darR lagta hai,


Lagta hai aise karte karte main aapke sabhi sher uttar daloonga..Sach mein is kalaam ka ik ik sher Kabil-e-tareef hai..Bahut hi umda aur dil ki gehrai se nikla hua hai ye kalaam..

Aur haan aapne pen mein thodi si ink hame Autograph dene ke liye bacha ke rakhiyega
Chalta huun
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kyon zindagi ki raah mein akele chalta hai dost
chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai...
   
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6th February 2003, 12:42 AM

HI Priya,

Duniya me mera dil nahi lagta, har koyi paraya lagta ha,
darr aur koyi nahi mujhey par kisi ko apnane se darr lagta hai,

Bhuat khoob kahaan hai aapne..kaafi dard bhari hai..

Intezar rahegi aapki agli kavitha ki..

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thanks - 6th February 2003, 12:46 AM

dear aman shahab! aapke liye BADHI SI SMILE
( glad to know by ur words that there is still someone in this world at this present moment of life jiski khatir smile kar lete hai hum varna arsa beta smile aati hi nahi yaar!)
tahe dil se shukriya..haan lamba khasa likh diya hehe, kya karu abhi to aadhi battain likhi hi nahi aap itne se hi pareshan ho gaye?
shukriya yaar luv ya Priya

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paplu ji aap khush huye aur mujhe kya chahiye , auto grapah to aapka lena hai yaar, aap itni ache shab jo kehtey hai hamare liye!!

luv Priya

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varinder shahab! thodi se ink kya yaar one full pen is here for u hehe, khushi huyi aapne alfaaz e beyaan itne pasand kiye,aapke pasand karne se hi to aaj tak zinda hai yaar...shukriya

luv priya

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Bijili ji, kaisi hai? sukriya aapne is dard to samjh aaur kya chahiye is nachez ko

Luv Priya


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6th February 2003, 05:10 AM

priya ji roz ki tarah yeh bhi dil ko bahut bhaaya...bas kya kahe mast ko aapka har sher pasand aaya..lol

khud teri hi kwaashish thi duniya mein sab kuch chahne ki
kabhi humpe bhi nahin duniya ki bewaafai pe to khauff kiya hota

hai nahin yeh rutba ki tere darr, tere sunepan ko aapna kar le
magar kabhi aapno ko to aapna yeh ahel-e-jigar diiya hota....



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thanks - 6th February 2003, 06:15 AM

ji shukriya janab mast shahab aapko har sher paasand aya kya khoob kaha hai aapne bhi taarife kaabil kaha hai aapne par

humney to apna dard apno ko bataya tha.
.aur unhone hame aaj tak rulaya tha..
ab kya kare hum bhu mast shahb kiska bharosa,
jab diya karte hai log apna banke hi dhoka

shukriya

priya


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hi - 24th February 2003, 05:38 AM

bahut dard hai iss shayari mein...
nicely written, shayri is good way of expressing feelings.
accha likha hai.. good work keep writin
love riddhi


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27th February 2003, 02:06 AM

hey there riddhi ji how r u > thanks yaar for being here and the words..i am so glad that u liked the poems so much....

luv priya


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