ahistaa-ahistaa

NiGhTwAlKeR · **ahistaa-ahistaa -** 17th August 2004, 12:24 PM

Nibhaaye jaa nazar se nazar ka rishtaa,
Baaki sab kuch hogaa Ahistaa-Ahistaa

Darogey jitnaa ye duniyaa utnaa darayegi,
Chalaaye ja Teer-e-Nazar Ahistaa-Ahistaa

Abhi wo arjj meri suney jaa rahe hain,
Gorr karengey meri arjj per wo Ahistaa-Ahistaa

Naa is kadar maayus ho Ishq mein ''JAI'',
Jagah banaati hai Mohabbat Dil mein Ahistaa-Ahistaa

arjj=prathna

Jitne Gunaah karne hai yahan karlo ''JAI''
Kaun jaane Mulk-e-Adam mein Sazaa kya hogi

Chaand · **Bahut Achchhe -** 17th August 2004, 12:57 PM

Nibhaaye jaa nazar se nazar ka rishtaa,
Baaki sab kuch hogaa Ahistaa-Ahistaa

Bahut achchhe

Darogey jitnaa ye duniyaa utnaa darayegi,
Chalaaye ja Teer-e-Nazar Ahistaa-Ahistaa

Ji sahi farmaya aapne

Abhi wo arjj meri suney jaa rahe hain,
Gorr karengey meri arjj per wo Ahistaa-Ahistaa

ji yahaaN bhi to yahi aalam hai...

Naa is kadar maayus ho Ishq mein ''JAI'',
Jagah banaati hai Mohabbat Dil mein Ahistaa-Ahistaa

Aameen

Jai Saahab aapki is rachna ne bada hausla diya hai mere zehen me uthte khayaaloN ko....

Shukriya.

NiGhTwAlKeR · 17th August 2004, 11:00 PM

hello chand kaise ho shukriya dost

soni_sonal · 18th August 2004, 08:14 PM

hi

bahut khoob likha hai aapne
aise hi likhte rahiye

sonal

NiGhTwAlKeR · 18th August 2004, 11:04 PM

hi sonal how r u i'm very glad 2 know that ppl appriciate my feeling of love and thanks for your opinion

Parul · **Keep it up! -** 19th August 2004, 02:16 AM

***very nice! keep writing ***[/COLOR]