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Ek baar kehkaar tu dekho........... -
16th January 2003, 12:47 AM
Aadaab apni pyari p ke naam ek ghazal ya unka jawab peshta karta hoon umeed hai ap logon ki raye zaroor naseeb hogi inshalalh p apka reply chahiye..............
Hamari mohabbat ko kabhi dil main basakaar dekho bhula dogi sare ghum kabhi gale laga kaar tu dekho Nahi milega tuhmain shahry jaisa koi dewana 'payal' bara hai yeh manjhdaar tum nazar uthakar tu dekho Ho jaogi tum bhi pyar ki daulaat se mala maal 'payal' shahry ke dil ka dia apni kutiya main jalakar tu dekho Kabse teri chukhaat pe yeh ghareeb pare hain 'payal' kabhi tu mahal ke darwazon se bahar akaar tu dekho.. Haar sawal ka jawab tumain dil se mil jayega 'payal' kabhi hamari ghaazlon ko dil se parhakaar tu dekho Is dil main tum sanson main tum darpan pe tum payal. mil jaye tumain bhi chain ruh se ruh milakaar tu dekho. Zindagi sanwar deinge hum apni moahbaat se 'payal' karti ho humse pyar tum ek baar yeh kehkar tu dekho Waise tu sabke kehtein hain 'payal' ko apna beshaak. paar payal kiski hai yeh 'payal' se puchkaar tu dekho.... its only 4 my beloved wife payal plz reply me...................... in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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16th January 2003, 07:26 AM
Salman bhai,
Payal ji ke liye pyaar ke khaatir, bahot pyaar se ghazal likhi hai  Taareef karne ke liye baaqi log bahot hai, lekin ek cheez ajeeb lagi.. jis taraH aapne raadeef se pehle 'tu' lagaaya hai -- example dikhaata huuN Haar sawal ka jawab tumain dil se mil jayega 'payal' kabhi tu hamari ghazlon ko dil se parhakaar tu dekho pata nahiiN dost lekin mujhe woh second 'tu' ajeeb laga, kyooN ki aapne pehle 'tu' ka isthimaal kiya hai  maiN to bas aise hi bakwaas karta rehta huuN, baatoN ka buura na maaniye.. paya ji isko paD kar behad khush hoyeN ge, mujhe yakeeN hai! Likhte rahiye, Aman "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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salam amaan sahab -
16th January 2003, 08:41 PM
sabse phale tu mere bahi kaise hain aap allah se dua hai ache hoon aur ghazal pasand farmane ka bahut shukriya amaan yaar maine bahut jaldi main lihki thi trust me sirf 15 minutes main is liye kia likha woh kudh abhi parha haan yaar mistake tu hai chalo sahi kardete hain apke kehne pe janab aur suanyega kaisi guzaar rahi hai life aur thanx hamari ghalti batane ka amaan apna khayal rakhna aur duaon main yaad rakhna plz ok kudha hafiz....................
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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salam meri jaan p |
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salam meri jaan p -
16th January 2003, 08:46 PM
kaise hain aap allah se dua hai hamesha kush rahein hamari kushiyan bhi allah apko naseeb kare inshallah amin jaan apka bahut bahut shukriya jo apne phir se apne salman ki ghazal pasand farmai jaan thanx alot aur yeh kia pagal moon tor jawab dushman ka dia jata hai apnon ka nahi apka tu yeh bahut pyar se jawab dia hai sir jhuka ke jawab dia hai sirf yeh kehna chah hai ke s apka hai aur marte daam taak apka rahega jaan love u very much payal se puchne ki waise zaroorat nahi hai humain pata hai payal sirf hamari haia ur kissi ki nahi phir puchte kiuyn thanx alot meri shayri pasand farmane ka p yeh bus apke pyar ka karaam hai jo aj shahry itna kuch bhi likh leta hai warna hum kahan aur yeh shayri kahan hum tu iske bahut chotte hisse bhi nahi kasam se bus apki dosri ghazal ka wait bahut bekarari se hai plz its my rqest p apni dsori ghazal bhi dena acha ek kaam kijiye apni ghazal dijiye aur haar sher main mera naam hona chahiye phans gayi na hahahaha ab dekhte hain ap yeh kuaish pori karti hai ya nahi thanx once again jaan apna khayal rakhna plz sirf aur sirf mere liye ok ab ijazat chahonga mail me aur massege me plz ok kudha hafiz love u very much apka aur sirf apka s ..............iam proud of u to darling wifii.............................
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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salam salman sahab -
16th January 2003, 08:57 PM
kaise hain aap mashallah apen tu bus is baar haad hi kardi kasam se mashallah bahut acha likha bahut hi zada yeh bhabbi ke pyar main ya unse dur ke hahahaha mazak kaar rahi hoon yaar acha ab ijazat chahonga bhabbi ko salam dijiyega unko maine reply kardia salman plz unko tang na karo warna acha nahi hoga plz ok kudha hafiz
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kise kahte ho dost. |
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kise kahte ho dost. -
17th January 2003, 09:42 PM
kaise kahoo kisse kahoo, kuchh bhi kaha na jaye
juda hoke yar dost se ek pal bhi raha na jaye. dost aaj kal ki ladkiya kamal karti hai kisi ko dil me rakhti hai kisi se pyar karti hai |
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salam salman sahah |
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salam salman sahah -
17th January 2003, 10:01 PM
mashallah tofaan se tez rawangi hai apke dil main pyar ki paar sirf payal ji ke liye mashallah bahut achi ghazal likhi hai mashallah plz likhte rahega kudha hafizz
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salam salman sahab |
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salam salman sahab -
17th January 2003, 11:37 PM
kaise hain aap aur sab kaise hain maslalah bahut achi likgi jhai apne kasam se bahut acha likha hai jitnui tareef ki jaye utni kaam hai mashallah bahut acha hai payal ji tu kush ho gayihongi haina ok likhte rahega kudha hafiz
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salam meri jaan |
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salam meri jaan -
18th January 2003, 12:04 AM
kaisi hain aap allah se dua hai ke aap achi hoon jaan apne tu atrif ke phool baandh diye kasam itne bhi ache nahi apke shahry jitna apne bana dia kasam se i love u very much p ap jaisi wife kismaat walon ko miltin hain bus apse ek request hai plz apne s ka intizaar karna aur is intizaar ka bhi maza lena plz s apka hai aur apko milega inshallah aur apki zaban tu hum akaar theek kareinge lolz u no dard hahahahahahahah aur sunain jaan bahut yaad ati hai apki kasam se aur abhi tu kuch ghum bhuli hain aap inshallah ane dijiye apko 24 hours hansata rahonga yeh wada raha apke shahry ka kasam se ap tu janti ho humain bus hasna aur hasana chahta hoon apni p ko jeena chahta hoon apni p ke liye i love u very much payal ji kasam se apka naam zaban paar itni izzats e ata hai ke bata nahi sakienge kabhi apko i love ur name dear bahut achi ho ap bahut kush kismaat hain aap bus aise harkartein na karna jisse shahry ka dil dhuke ap samajh gayi hogi haina i love u darling ab ijazat chahonga aur apki ghazal ka wait karunga plz dena na apne s ke liye plz jaan ok ab ijazat chahonga plz khayal rakhna mere liye ok plz apna khayal rakhna aur doctor ke pass jao plz meri kasam hai apko plz ok i love u very much kudha hafiz...............................
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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Hi SaLmAn..... -
18th January 2003, 05:44 PM
Hi salman sahab how r u hey after long time i came in this site well i was in duty so howz life with payal and hey where r u and where is she i mean are you ppl seperated well whats the reason family matter well well should not interept but how can u get seperated from your so called beautiful wife no matter but u too rite execellent thats all i have to say n i m happy that u made ur wife also rite that too using your name well teach us to rite such a wonderful poems well i m really interested in learning this stuff sometimes....keep riting byeeeeeee
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hi kahanjee -
19th January 2003, 09:16 PM
how r ya bruv thanx 4 ur corpration takecare bye bye.......by the way dost she is not larki aor girl she is ma wife thanx bye bye.....
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salam araz kia hai -
19th January 2003, 09:18 PM
thanx 4 liking ma shayri thanx once again kudha hafiz.........
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