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kab.....................mujhe yaad nahin !! |
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kab.....................mujhe yaad nahin !! -
9th September 2001, 08:00 AM
mere paas kab woh aaye
dil se dil milaaye mere hosh kab udaaye ........mujhe yaad nahin husn ke woh saaye jaane kab hue paraaye maine jaam kab utthaye ...........mujhe yaad nahin mere ishq ka tarana unke husn ka fasana kab ho gaya purana ...........mujhe yaad nahin gam ne kaise jaana mere dil ka ye thikaana hua main kab deewana ..........mujhe yaad nahin dil ke khoon se banaya maine aashiyaana unka bijliyaan giraana...... mujhe yaad nahin maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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21st June 2006, 02:17 AM
maikash ji kya khub likhte hain aap aapki shayri mein bahut dard hai bahut hi achha likhte hain keep it up
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21st June 2006, 03:02 AM
kaha to aapne sahi hain ki
chaNd saNso ke siwa yeh maut kya Le jaayegi.. maut to ulzi hui kaviTa hai, jo kab aayeGi pata Nahi hai?? maut to sulzi hui bhi hai, jo "Zindagi" ki ek "Sachchai" hai.. lol don't take my this stupid mesh... enjoy ur life with all your happiness... |
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21st June 2006, 12:45 PM
hamne bhi pehli baar padha yeh ...bohat khoob likha hai
husn ke woh saaye jaane kab hue paraaye maine jaam kab utthaye ...........mujhe yaad nahin kya baat hai... aik mutthi main kaid kar loon, yeh aasman hai jitna!" |
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21st June 2006, 03:26 PM
 aapko is tarah padh kar achha laga bhaut hi sade sabdon mai kahi aapki kalam dil ko chhu gayimuhhbat kab hoti hai kaise hoti hai sach mai kaha pata chlta hai aap likhte rahe aur hamare saath share kare taki aapko padhkar hum isi tarah achha achha feel karen shrdh 
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