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Ek bheegee see zindgee, MERI : haqiqat -
2nd February 2008, 02:57 PM
Maine kabhee sapne dekhe hee nahee
ankhon ko ansoo se fursat nahee milee jab ummeed thee ki kisee ko chah loon kisee kee hawas mujhe chootee rahtee main pyar kis jagah rakhtee main napak nazron ko bas dhotee rahee jin se ummeed thee hifazat kee wo shikaree kee soorat samne aate rahe main kisee ke choomne ka intzar kya kartee mere apne mujhe noch noch ke khate rahe maine tab bhee kaheen se kisee tarah muhabbat khud men kabhee ugayee thee mujhe khabar nahee thee us lamaha muhabbat mere liye parchayee thee mera hath jise diya gaya wo pyar nahee tha apnee duniya se nibhane me laga tha mujhe muhabbat chhaiye thee use pyar ka kuch bhee nahee pata tha wo mujh se bekhabar raha har pal aur meree kamayee men uljahta tha main mazboor bhee thee doulat ke liye wo mazbooree kahan samjhta tha aise hee tanhayee ke khayalon main maine atb kisee ke pyar ko mahsoos kiya zindgee ne pahlee baar mujhe ko jaise mera apana koyee ek lamha diya un lamhon kee mahak liye aaj bhee jee rahee hoon us musakn ko khila rahee hoon lab par wahee ansoo pee rahee hoon bas jee rahee hoon par ab duna ke badalne ka aur chalan dekha nahee jata ane wale dino ka intzar nahee beeta huya kal socha nahee jata ab khud se poochtee hoon to jawab nahee milta ye ansoo aur kitne din main peena chahtee hoon mujhe khud bhee khabar nahee ai mere dosto marna chahtee hoon ki jeena chahatee hoon |
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2nd February 2008, 03:10 PM
Speechless.!!!!!!!!
Mujhe to samajh nahin aa raha ki aapki likhawat ki tarif kaise karu....2 good..aurat ki vedna ko bahut hi sahin shabdoN mein aapne dhala hain......aurat ka dusra naam hi to samjhota haiN.........bahut acchi lagi apki tehreer..Umeed hain aap agge bhi hume yunhi acchi acchi tehreer padhne ka mauka degi.......  mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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2nd February 2008, 03:10 PM
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pyar ko samaj na mushkil nahi hai usko pana bahut hi aasan hai per darte hai pyar karne se kyu ki sabse mushkil hai usko bhool pana AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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2nd February 2008, 08:45 PM
Maine kabhee sapne dekhe hee nahee
ankhon ko ansoo se fursat nahee milee jab ummeed thee ki kisee ko chah loon kisee kee hawas mujhe chootee rahtee main pyar kis jagah rakhtee main napak nazron ko bas dhotee rahee jin se ummeed thee hifazat kee wo shikaree kee soorat samne aate rahe main kisee ke choomne ka intzar kya kartee mere apne mujhe noch noch ke khate rahe maine tab bhee kaheen se kisee tarah muhabbat khud men kabhee ugayee thee mujhe khabar nahee thee us lamaha muhabbat mere liye parchayee thee Mere hatho ke mahakte hue nagmo pe mat ja, Mere seene mein kaye or gum bhi hai, Mere chehre par dikhawe ke tabsum hai, Magar meri ankho main Udass ke diye jalte hai. well nice, dil chu liya, hum jaise dil tute hue dosto per yeh ik merham ka kaam kary hai. Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai, Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai, Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare, Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai? |
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4th February 2008, 01:36 AM
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4th February 2008, 02:43 AM
Bahot gahraai se aapne apne jazbaato ko likha hai
Daad kubool kijiye... Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi, Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
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6th February 2008, 04:48 PM
thank you dinesh dear for reading
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7th February 2008, 11:05 AM
Taru didi:
aapkii yeH rachnaa dil par geHraa asar kar gaYii.. bas YuuNhi liKhate rahiYe..! KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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7th February 2008, 06:55 PM
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Bahut khubsurti se aapne aapne ahsaas ko kalam band kiya hai or sabse jada to aapki ye line dil ko chu leti hain ab khud se poochtee hoon to jawab nahee milta ye ansoo aur kitne din main peena chahtee hoon mujhe khud bhee khabar nahee ai mere dosto marna chahtee hoon ki jeena chahatee hoon Bas aap yun hi likhte rahe mujhe intezaar rahega take care SHAAN Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah. ........Shaan...... |
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8th February 2008, 03:49 PM
great creation dear
Zindgi ko kaafi dard bhare sabdo main piroya hai...bt one qustion is in my heart thats wants to come infront of you. bt i know i hvnt any right to ask that. nyways very very very very impressive "Vo shaam bhi intzaar ki thi Ye shaam bhi intzaar ki hai aaj bhi akela hu main bas ek nazar tere pyaar ki hai" .............veryog.......... |
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13th February 2008, 04:48 PM
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15th February 2008, 03:59 PM
speechless.................aapke ahsaaso.n ko padkar aankhe bhar aaye..........kaya kahun kuch samaj nahi aa raha....bas dua kar sakti hoon ki bhagwaan aapko kushiya.n de, man ki shanti de.
duao.n ke saath aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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19th February 2008, 10:01 AM
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bas yun hi likhti rahe ab khud se poochtee hoon to jawab nahee milta ye ansoo aur kitne din main peena chahtee hoon mujhe khud bhee khabar nahee ai mere dosto marna chahtee hoon ki jeena chahatee hoon very nice mujhe aage be intezaar rahega take care SHAAN Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah. ........Shaan...... |
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kya likha hai????? |
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kya likha hai????? -
19th February 2008, 11:44 AM
kya likha hai apne sapna ji?
shubhan allah, mere rom rom khade ho gaye basyu hi likhti rahe ye dua hai hamari meet patel 9904040164. |
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19th February 2008, 03:50 PM
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Really nice flow of thoughts that also in rhythm of pain, totally absorbed in to it from beginning to end. Really very nice attempt. keep posting. meri or se is khoobsurat kalam par dad qubool kijiye regards manu |
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19th February 2008, 04:31 PM
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thank a lot for reading my haqiqat dearrrrrrrr pls dear ask |
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19th February 2008, 04:36 PM
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23rd February 2008, 01:12 AM
Sapna ji....bahut khub.....par ek gustakhi karna chahata hu..... har shabd me ek samvedna chhipi hoti hai..... agar un samvednao ki parchhayi nazar aa jaye.... to samvednao ki ahmiyat badh jati hai..... aapke shabdo me bhi samvednayein hain...... unhe ubharne ki koshish kijiega.....gustakhi ke liye muafi chahata hu..... likhte rahiye.....thx...
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23rd February 2008, 08:06 PM
dilo ke khail hai ye kitne nirale
jise ye chaye wahi us e tod dale ye dard aaj hum ko fir se sataye jise hum chaye wahi bhool jaye Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai, Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai, Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare, Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai? |
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