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27th September 2009, 03:52 PM
Ahl-e-Bazm ko Salaam,
Beh'r ke riyaaz ki ek aur nayii peshkash aap sabke nazar. Is ghazal ka beh'r hai 2122,2122,1222. Is ghazal ko maine Mukesh sahab ke ek umda giit ke tarz par tarannum meiN baNdha hai. Giit ke bol haiN " AasmaaN pe hai Khuda aur zamiiN pe hum, aajkal wo is taraf dekhtaa hai kum". http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KL14oNFOk8M Ga kar dekheN aur apni rai aur tabsiirat se nawazeN. -2--1-2---2/--2-1---2—2/-1--2--2---2 Zindagii hai bewafaa tuu gilaa naa kar -2--1--2-2/---2--1--2—2/-1--2---2—2 Maut hi hai baawafaa tuu hilaa naa kar -2--1-2---2/--2---1---2—-2/-1--2---2---2 hasratoN ke zakhm haiN naa inhey kuured -2--1-2--2/--2--1--2-2/--1---2---2---2 Yaad ke chhure se isey chhilaa naa kar -2---1----2--2/2--1---2—2/-1--2--2--2 Humko kya milaa nahiiN soch cho.D dii -2---1----2--2/--2--1---2—2/-1--2---2---2 Tuu magar shokhii se humey milaa naa kar -2---1-2--2/2-1-2—-2/-1--2-2--2 Tuute dil kii aah ko sun le bereham -2---1--2-2/-2--1----2—2/-1--2—2---2 Naa sahii to bol de zubaaN siilaa naa kar -21--2-2/-2—1--2-2/-1--2--2--2 Bair mujhse hai jo to nazar fer le -2--1--2---2/-2-1--2—-2/--1---2—2---2 Ghair kii baahoN meiN par khilaa naa kar Zindagii hai bewafaa tuu gilaa naa kar, Maut hi hai baawafaa, tuu hilaa naa kar. HasratoN ke zakhm haiN, naa inhey kuured, Yaad ke chhure se, isey chhilaa naa kar. Humko kya milaa nahiiN, soch cho.D dii, Tuu magar shokhii se, humey milaa naa kar Tuute dil kii aah ko, sun le bereham, Naa sahii to bol de, zubaaN siilaa naa kar. Bair mujhse hai jo to, nazar fer le, Ghair kii baahoN meiN, par khilaa naa kar. Aap sab ki rai ka muntazir, Shyam HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai." -Anand Narayan Mulla. वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत, हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है. -आनंद नारायण मुल्ला |
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27th September 2009, 04:13 PM
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namaste Shyam ji bahot khub likha hai aap ne ek achchi peshkash par daad qabul kare mahefil ke ronak yuhi bane rahe Regards  _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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27th September 2009, 04:25 PM
Shyam ji......ek naya andaaz dikha.... aapki iss ghazal mai.....bahut taazgi bhi rahi aapki soch, kahaayl, bayaani aur shabdon mai....sabhi sher ache bane hai........  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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28th September 2009, 02:09 PM
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Aapki daad sar aanknoN par. Aapki nawaazish ki liye tah-e-dil se shukriya. Sharminda na kareN hume mehfil ki raunaq keh kar. Khaaksar ka bhala kya wajuud itni ba.Dii hastiyoN ke biich meiN. Bas tho.Di bahot koshish kar leta huuN. Aap ke waqt aur izzat afzai ke liye fir se shukriya. Saath banaye rakhiyega aur khush rahiye. Shyam HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai." -Anand Narayan Mulla. वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत, हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है. -आनंद नारायण मुल्ला |
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28th September 2009, 02:21 PM
nadaan jee
aapki ghazal padh kar achha laga saare aashar dil ke kareeb rahe youn hi kahte rahiye apne soch ke saath ru ba ru karate rahiye subha bijoya Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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29th September 2009, 01:29 PM
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Naresh Sahab Namashkar, Aap humesha waqt nikalte haiN naachiiz ki hausla afzai ke liye, is baat ke liye maiN aap ka tah-e-dil se shukraguzar huuN. Aapki dili daad dil se qubuul sarkar. Aur humaari kahaN aukaat ke mehfil ki raunaq ba.DhayeN, bus timtima lete haiN kabhi kabhar. Aap ke waqt ke liye fir se shukriya, Khayal rakhiyega aur khush rahiyega, Shyam HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai." -Anand Narayan Mulla. वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत, हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है. -आनंद नारायण मुल्ला |
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30th September 2009, 03:25 PM
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Hausla Afzaai ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriya. Apni rai se nawazteN raheN to aage bhi behtar kalaam pesh karta rahuNga. Aapke waqt ke liye fir se shukriya, Khush Rahiye, Shyam HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai." -Anand Narayan Mulla. वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत, हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है. -आनंद नारायण मुल्ला |
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30th September 2009, 03:53 PM
shaym ji
aap ki ghazal ka har sher bahot khubsurat hai daad... purvi  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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30th September 2009, 09:11 PM
Shayam Sahab Aadaab....
Kya baat hai sahab aapne aapni is gazal se humari yaaden taza kar dii.. bahut hi khoob behad sahiN lage kisi ek sher ko choos karun to nahi kar paya but sabhi sher ek se badh ker ek hai... Jii Dil se daad kabool kijiye,, Aur aisi behtreen gazalen kahete rahiye.... Khush rahiye.. Khuda Hafez... 
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1st October 2009, 08:34 PM
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Nawazish aapki jo aap mere thread par aaNii aur kalaam aapko pasand aaya. Meherbaani aapke waqt ke liye aur shukriya aap ki daad ka. Saath banaye rakhiyega, Khush rahiye, Shyam HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai." -Anand Narayan Mulla. वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत, हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है. -आनंद नारायण मुल्ला |
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2nd October 2009, 12:20 AM
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bhaye naadaan ......... bahut dino se padh raha hun aapko..... aapka sher padhta nahi hun mafi chahta hun bas aaki takhti dekhta rahta hun .... selfish ho jata hun aapki post pe so i m sorry for that ... and thanx ki aap aise likhte ho ... jisse hum asal main seekh sake .. ye meri kamnaseebi ki mai fir bhi poora fayda nahi utha pata hun ... kya karu woqt itni jabardast giraft mai le leta hai.... aapse ek aur nibedan hai ki aap digital mai takhti ke sath words ko bhi / se devide kar de .... to aur bhi asaan ho jaye .... thoda sa confuse ho jata hun .. fir na woqt hia na sahi jagah milti hia seekhne ki .. maien aapki ek din kam se kam 10 ghazle padhi hia... reply nahi kiya .... bas but i really wana thanx for evrything what u r doing regards ur Janumanu |
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3rd October 2009, 12:25 PM
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Shukriya janab aapka, mere thread par tashriif lane ke liye. Ummidd hai agar aap ki yaadeN taaza ho gaiiN to khushfehmi waali rahii hoNgi aur agar kahiiN kisi zakhm ko che.D diya ho ta mazrat. Saath banaye rakhiye aur khush rahiye. Aadab, Shyam HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai." -Anand Narayan Mulla. वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत, हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है. -आनंद नारायण मुल्ला |
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4th October 2009, 07:28 AM
shyam ji apke likhe lafj nihayt hi pyare he, aap ko salam krta hu.
Habib Ye kya kam tha k ik mulakat ho bus, tumhari dosti me kambakht hmara dil gya, hm drd ko khuda maan bethe he ab,mere maran k bahane me sath tumhara bn gya,, Kya malum hqiqat me sath dega khuda, Khwab aya k hmara ek jakham sil gya...M |
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6th October 2009, 12:50 PM
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Aapki saadgi ba.Di pyaari lagii bhai (aapka sher padhta nahi hun mafi chahta hun bas aaki takhti dekhta rahta hun ....selfish ho jata hun aapki post pe so i m sorry for that ..) LOL. Chalen isi bahane mere thread par to aate haiN.Aapki guzaarish sar aaNkhoN par sarkar. Aaj ek nayii ghazal pesh kar raha huuN aur taktii aapke mutaabik kii hai. Dekh lijiyega. Khush Rahiye aur saath banaye rakhiyega. Namashkar, Shyam HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai." -Anand Narayan Mulla. वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत, हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है. -आनंद नारायण मुल्ला |
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6th October 2009, 09:40 PM
aaah sham bhai salam...
bhai aapki gazal ne gazab kar diya muze to sonchne pe mazboor kar diya jindagi kaya hai...... bhot mast saab bhot mast.. kya sher hai ye HasratoN ke zakhm haiN, naa inhey kuured, Yaad ke chhure se, isey chhilaa naa kar. Abed Farooqui Jalegi shammaye tere naam se qamar Parwaana hun tera naam jo liya karun |
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