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Tuu gila naa kar - 27th September 2009, 03:52 PM

Ahl-e-Bazm ko Salaam,

Beh'r ke riyaaz ki ek aur nayii peshkash aap sabke nazar. Is ghazal ka beh'r hai 2122,2122,1222. Is ghazal ko maine Mukesh sahab ke ek umda giit ke tarz par tarannum meiN baNdha hai. Giit ke bol haiN " AasmaaN pe hai Khuda aur zamiiN pe hum, aajkal wo is taraf dekhtaa hai kum". http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KL14oNFOk8M Ga kar dekheN aur apni rai aur tabsiirat se nawazeN.

-2--1-2---2/--2-1---22/-1--2--2---2
Zindagii hai bewafaa tuu gilaa naa kar
-2--1--2-2/---2--1--22/-1--2---22
Maut hi hai baawafaa tuu hilaa naa kar

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hasratoN ke zakhm haiN naa inhey kuured
-2--1-2--2/--2--1--2-2/--1---2---2---2
Yaad ke chhure se isey chhilaa naa kar

-2---1----2--2/2--1---22/-1--2--2--2
Humko kya milaa nahiiN soch cho.D dii
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Tuu magar shokhii se humey milaa naa kar

-2---1-2--2/2-1-2-2/-1--2-2--2
Tuute dil kii aah ko sun le bereham
-2---1--2-2/-2--1----22/-1--22---2
Naa sahii to bol de zubaaN siilaa naa kar

-21--2-2/-21--2-2/-1--2--2--2
Bair mujhse hai jo to nazar fer le
-2--1--2---2/-2-1--2-2/--1---22---2
Ghair kii baahoN meiN par khilaa naa kar


Zindagii hai bewafaa tuu gilaa naa kar,
Maut hi hai baawafaa, tuu hilaa naa kar.

HasratoN ke zakhm haiN, naa inhey kuured,
Yaad ke chhure se, isey chhilaa naa kar.

Humko kya milaa nahiiN, soch cho.D dii,
Tuu magar shokhii se, humey milaa naa kar

Tuute dil kii aah ko, sun le bereham,
Naa sahii to bol de, zubaaN siilaa naa kar.

Bair mujhse hai jo to, nazar fer le,
Ghair kii baahoN meiN, par khilaa naa kar.

Aap sab ki rai ka muntazir,
Shyam



"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.

वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
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Ahl-e-Bazm ko Salaam,

Beh'r ke riyaaz ki ek aur nayii peshkash aap sabke nazar. Is ghazal ka beh'r hai 2122,2122,1222. Is ghazal ko maine Mukesh sahab ke ek umda giit ke tarz par tarannum meiN baNdha hai. Giit ke bol haiN " AasmaaN pe hai Khuda aur zamiiN pe hum, aajkal wo is taraf dekhtaa hai kum". http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KL14oNFOk8M Ga kar dekheN aur apni rai aur tabsiirat se nawazeN.

-2--1-2---2/--2-1---22/-1--2--2---2
Zindagii hai bewafaa tuu gilaa naa kar
-2--1--2-2/---2--1--22/-1--2---22
Maut hi hai baawafaa tuu hilaa naa kar

-2--1-2---2/--2---1---2-2/-1--2---2---2
hasratoN ke zakhm haiN naa inhey kuured
-2--1-2--2/--2--1--2-2/--1---2---2---2
Yaad ke chhure se isey chhilaa naa kar

-2---1----2--2/2--1---22/-1--2--2--2
Humko kya milaa nahiiN soch cho.D dii
-2---1----2--2/--2--1---22/-1--2---2---2
Tuu magar shokhii se humey milaa naa kar

-2---1-2--2/2-1-2-2/-1--2-2--2
Tuute dil kii aah ko sun le bereham
-2---1--2-2/-2--1----22/-1--22---2
Naa sahii to bol de zubaaN siilaa naa kar

-21--2-2/-21--2-2/-1--2--2--2
Bair mujhse hai jo to nazar fer le
-2--1--2---2/-2-1--2-2/--1---22---2
Ghair kii baahoN meiN par khilaa naa kar


Zindagii hai bewafaa tuu gilaa naa kar,
Maut hi hai baawafaa, tuu hilaa naa kar.

HasratoN ke zakhm haiN, naa inhey kuured,
Yaad ke chhure se, isey chhilaa naa kar.

Humko kya milaa nahiiN, soch cho.D dii,
Tuu magar shokhii se, humey milaa naa kar

Tuute dil kii aah ko, sun le bereham,
Naa sahii to bol de, zubaaN siilaa naa kar.

Bair mujhse hai jo to, nazar fer le,
Ghair kii baahoN meiN, par khilaa naa kar.

Aap sab ki rai ka muntazir,
Shyam


namaste Shyam ji

bahot khub likha hai aap ne
ek achchi peshkash par daad qabul kare
mahefil ke ronak yuhi bane rahe

Regards


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Shyam ji......ek naya andaaz dikha.... aapki iss ghazal mai.....bahut taazgi bhi rahi aapki soch, kahaayl, bayaani aur shabdon mai....sabhi sher ache bane hai........

Yeh do sher aapke... mere jiyada aziz bane....

HasratoN ke zakhm haiN, naa inhey kuured,
Yaad ke chhure se, isey chhilaa naa kar.


Humko kya milaa nahiiN, soch cho.D dii,
Tuu magar shokhii se, humey milaa naa kar


aise hi likhte rahiye....khush rahiye.....bazm ki raunak badhate rahiye.....

dil se daad detaa hu......kabul kare.....

aur apna khayaal rakhiye....






YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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namaste Shyam ji

bahot khub likha hai aap ne
ek achchi peshkash par daad qabul kare
mahefil ke ronak yuhi bane rahe

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Praneeta Ji Namashkar aur Dushehra ki shubhkamnayeN,

Aapki daad sar aanknoN par. Aapki nawaazish ki liye tah-e-dil se shukriya. Sharminda na kareN hume mehfil ki raunaq keh kar. Khaaksar ka bhala kya wajuud itni ba.Dii hastiyoN ke biich meiN. Bas tho.Di bahot koshish kar leta huuN.

Aap ke waqt aur izzat afzai ke liye fir se shukriya.

Saath banaye rakhiyega aur khush rahiye.
Shyam


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HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
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nadaan jee
aapki ghazal padh kar achha laga
saare aashar dil ke kareeb rahe
youn hi kahte rahiye
apne soch ke saath ru ba ru karate rahiye

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Shyam ji......ek naya andaaz dikha.... aapki iss ghazal mai.....bahut taazgi bhi rahi aapki soch, kahaayl, bayaani aur shabdon mai....sabhi sher ache bane hai........

Yeh do sher aapke... mere jiyada aziz bane....

HasratoN ke zakhm haiN, naa inhey kuured,
Yaad ke chhure se, isey chhilaa naa kar.


Humko kya milaa nahiiN, soch cho.D dii,
Tuu magar shokhii se, humey milaa naa kar


aise hi likhte rahiye....khush rahiye.....bazm ki raunak badhate rahiye.....

dil se daad detaa hu......kabul kare.....

aur apna khayaal rakhiye....

Naresh Sahab Namashkar,

Aap humesha waqt nikalte haiN naachiiz ki hausla afzai ke liye, is baat ke liye maiN aap ka tah-e-dil se shukraguzar huuN. Aapki dili daad dil se qubuul sarkar. Aur humaari kahaN aukaat ke mehfil ki raunaq ba.DhayeN, bus timtima lete haiN kabhi kabhar.

Aap ke waqt ke liye fir se shukriya,
Khayal rakhiyega aur khush rahiyega,
Shyam


"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.

वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
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nadaan jee
aapki ghazal padh kar achha laga
saare aashar dil ke kareeb rahe
youn hi kahte rahiye
apne soch ke saath ru ba ru karate rahiye

subha bijoya
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Diya Ji, Shubho Bijoya to you too,

Hausla Afzaai ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriya. Apni rai se nawazteN raheN to aage bhi behtar kalaam pesh karta rahuNga.

Aapke waqt ke liye fir se shukriya,
Khush Rahiye,
Shyam


"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
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shaym ji

aap ki ghazal ka har sher bahot khubsurat hai

daad...

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Shayam Sahab Aadaab....

Kya baat hai sahab aapne aapni is gazal se humari yaaden taza kar dii.. bahut hi khoob behad sahiN lage kisi ek sher ko choos karun to nahi kar paya but sabhi sher ek se badh ker ek hai...

Jii Dil se daad kabool kijiye,,
Aur aisi behtreen gazalen kahete rahiye....

Khush rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...


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shaym ji

aap ki ghazal ka har sher bahot khubsurat hai

daad...

purvi
Purvi Ji Aadab,

Nawazish aapki jo aap mere thread par aaNii aur kalaam aapko pasand aaya. Meherbaani aapke waqt ke liye aur shukriya aap ki daad ka.

Saath banaye rakhiyega,
Khush rahiye,
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HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.

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Ahl-e-Bazm ko Salaam,

Beh'r ke riyaaz ki ek aur nayii peshkash aap sabke nazar. Is ghazal ka beh'r hai 2122,2122,1222. Is ghazal ko maine Mukesh sahab ke ek umda giit ke tarz par tarannum meiN baNdha hai. Giit ke bol haiN " AasmaaN pe hai Khuda aur zamiiN pe hum, aajkal wo is taraf dekhtaa hai kum". http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KL14oNFOk8M Ga kar dekheN aur apni rai aur tabsiirat se nawazeN.

-2--1-2---2/--2-1---22/-1--2--2---2
Zindagii hai bewafaa tuu gilaa naa kar
-2--1--2-2/---2--1--22/-1--2---22
Maut hi hai baawafaa tuu hilaa naa kar

-2--1-2---2/--2---1---2-2/-1--2---2---2
hasratoN ke zakhm haiN naa inhey kuured
-2--1-2--2/--2--1--2-2/--1---2---2---2
Yaad ke chhure se isey chhilaa naa kar

-2---1----2--2/2--1---22/-1--2--2--2
Humko kya milaa nahiiN soch cho.D dii
-2---1----2--2/--2--1---22/-1--2---2---2
Tuu magar shokhii se humey milaa naa kar

-2---1-2--2/2-1-2-2/-1--2-2--2
Tuute dil kii aah ko sun le bereham
-2---1--2-2/-2--1----22/-1--22---2
Naa sahii to bol de zubaaN siilaa naa kar

-21--2-2/-21--2-2/-1--2--2--2
Bair mujhse hai jo to nazar fer le
-2--1--2---2/-2-1--2-2/--1---22---2
Ghair kii baahoN meiN par khilaa naa kar


Zindagii hai bewafaa tuu gilaa naa kar,
Maut hi hai baawafaa, tuu hilaa naa kar.

HasratoN ke zakhm haiN, naa inhey kuured,
Yaad ke chhure se, isey chhilaa naa kar.

Humko kya milaa nahiiN, soch cho.D dii,
Tuu magar shokhii se, humey milaa naa kar

Tuute dil kii aah ko, sun le bereham,
Naa sahii to bol de, zubaaN siilaa naa kar.

Bair mujhse hai jo to, nazar fer le,
Ghair kii baahoN meiN, par khilaa naa kar.

Aap sab ki rai ka muntazir,
Shyam


bhaye naadaan ......... bahut dino se padh raha hun aapko..... aapka sher padhta nahi hun mafi chahta hun bas aaki takhti dekhta rahta hun ....
selfish ho jata hun aapki post pe so i m sorry for that ...

and thanx ki aap aise likhte ho ... jisse hum asal main seekh sake .. ye meri kamnaseebi ki mai fir bhi poora fayda nahi utha pata hun ... kya karu woqt itni jabardast giraft mai le leta hai....

aapse ek aur nibedan hai ki aap digital mai takhti ke sath words ko bhi / se devide kar de .... to aur bhi asaan ho jaye ....

thoda sa confuse ho jata hun .. fir na woqt hia na sahi jagah milti hia seekhne ki ..

maien aapki ek din kam se kam 10 ghazle padhi hia... reply nahi kiya .... bas

but i really wana thanx for evrything what u r doing

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Shayam Sahab Aadaab....

Kya baat hai sahab aapne aapni is gazal se humari yaaden taza kar dii.. bahut hi khoob behad sahiN lage kisi ek sher ko choos karun to nahi kar paya but sabhi sher ek se badh ker ek hai...

Jii Dil se daad kabool kijiye,,
Aur aisi behtreen gazalen kahete rahiye....

Khush rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...
Sameer Saheb Aadab,

Shukriya janab aapka, mere thread par tashriif lane ke liye. Ummidd hai agar aap ki yaadeN taaza ho gaiiN to khushfehmi waali rahii hoNgi aur agar kahiiN kisi zakhm ko che.D diya ho ta mazrat.

Saath banaye rakhiye aur khush rahiye.
Aadab,
Shyam


"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
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shyam ji apke likhe lafj nihayt hi pyare he, aap ko salam krta hu.
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unko hame satane ka bahana mil gya, hme hmari maut ka thikana mil gya, hme to unke saath ki umid thi jo na mila , unko to sara jamana mil gya, hmari juban ko khamoshi ka kinara mil gya, meri ankho me ashko ka najara khil gya,
Ye kya kam tha k ik mulakat ho bus, tumhari dosti me kambakht hmara dil gya, hm drd ko khuda maan bethe he ab,mere maran k bahane me sath tumhara bn gya,,
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bhaye naadaan ......... bahut dino se padh raha hun aapko..... aapka sher padhta nahi hun mafi chahta hun bas aaki takhti dekhta rahta hun ....
selfish ho jata hun aapki post pe so i m sorry for that ...

and thanx ki aap aise likhte ho ... jisse hum asal main seekh sake .. ye meri kamnaseebi ki mai fir bhi poora fayda nahi utha pata hun ... kya karu woqt itni jabardast giraft mai le leta hai....

aapse ek aur nibedan hai ki aap digital mai takhti ke sath words ko bhi / se devide kar de .... to aur bhi asaan ho jaye ....

thoda sa confuse ho jata hun .. fir na woqt hia na sahi jagah milti hia seekhne ki ..

maien aapki ek din kam se kam 10 ghazle padhi hia... reply nahi kiya .... bas

but i really wana thanx for evrything what u r doing

regards

ur Janumanu
Namashkar Manu Ji,

Aapki saadgi ba.Di pyaari lagii bhai (aapka sher padhta nahi hun mafi chahta hun bas aaki takhti dekhta rahta hun ....selfish ho jata hun aapki post pe so i m sorry for that ..) LOL. Chalen isi bahane mere thread par to aate haiN.

Aapki guzaarish sar aaNkhoN par sarkar. Aaj ek nayii ghazal pesh kar raha huuN aur taktii aapke mutaabik kii hai. Dekh lijiyega.

Khush Rahiye aur saath banaye rakhiyega.
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HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
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aaah sham bhai salam...

bhai aapki gazal ne gazab kar diya muze to sonchne pe mazboor kar diya jindagi kaya hai...... bhot mast saab bhot mast..
kya sher hai ye
HasratoN ke zakhm haiN, naa inhey kuured,
Yaad ke chhure se, isey chhilaa naa kar.


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