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30th March 2002, 12:50 AM
naya ho is feild ...aaduri baate likh raha ho ...aappp ke comments pls likhye ga ...shayad aur accha lihk saku
sub se bada dard woh hai jab: ek jhoot se jab muskurahat aati ho ya ek shuch se aanso nikal aate ho ek dil se kisi ka naam mit jata ho ya dil mei kisi aur ka naam aajata ho maar ke bhi woh zinda rahai ya zinda reh kar bhi maar jaye. |
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30th March 2002, 05:22 AM
bohat hi achi soch hai aap ki asif jee
issey pehle i wouldnt have thought bout these things....specially Quote:
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shukriya fari -
30th March 2002, 05:44 AM
apne mere likhne ke uppar kuch kaha ...bahot accha laga
ab kuch umeed jagi ... thank u |
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