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8th June 2002, 12:40 AM
Kuch log dur hoke bhi paas rehte hai,
ye hum nahi kuch beete huye pal kehte hai......
Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......
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wah -
8th June 2002, 01:07 AM
Kash humbhi appki tarah likh pate
Kash hum bhi kisi ko pyare ho jate
Kash hota pyar unhe bhi humse
Kash hum bhi unki jaan kehlate...
Keep it up 
"Jina jisne sikhaya, usi ne abb mar diya
Majboori ka naam leker, khanjar sine mien uttar diya"
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8th June 2002, 04:50 AM
na istmaal karo tum kaash shab ko
nafrat ho gayi hai hame is sey
pehle chahte the hum bhi ho jaan kisi ki
ab nafrat ho gayi hame muhobbat se
Luv Priya......
Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......
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8th June 2002, 09:06 AM
Kitna bhi chahe hum bhool nahi sakte unko
Jaan se jayada chaha tha humne jisko
Woh chahe ya na chahe yeh marji hai unki
Hum kaise bhool jaye humari to jaan thi woh...
thanks
"Jina jisne sikhaya, usi ne abb mar diya
Majboori ka naam leker, khanjar sine mien uttar diya"
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hi -
8th June 2002, 03:00 PM
pata-pata buta-buta haal humara jaane hai,
jaane na jaane gul hi na jaane bagh to sara jaane hai.....
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sanamji -
8th June 2002, 10:46 PM
sanamji bhulta koyi bhi nahi kabhi ksiko
bas kch log hote hai khaas jo hai dil ke paas
par ab jaanaa humse bhi ik raaj
duniya mejeena hai to na laanna kisi ko bhi dlil ke paas.....
Luv Priya..>>
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sundeepji -
8th June 2002, 10:48 PM
sundeepjithanks for repy
aapne sahi kaha
pata pata buta buta aal hamarajaane hai
jaane najaane gul hi na jaane baag to sara jaane hai
i would say
janame bhar ko hamari tabiyut ki khabar hai
agar anjjaan haito bas ik "VOHI" hai......
Luv Priya
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9th June 2002, 01:39 AM
waise kissi ke pvt maamlaat main to main ghusna nahin chahta par ek baat zaroor kahonga.....
kitna hai intezaar mohabbat main hum bhi jaante hain
par mohabbat karne wale bekhabar nahin ek doosre ko pehchante hain
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mohsinji -
9th June 2002, 04:08 AM
mohsin ji thanks fr adding ur lines.....
kitna hai intzaar muhobbat mein ye humse pucho o yaarraa
hum bhi sochte the ki hum unhe pehchaaante hai
par dhoka hi hota hai kar shahs ke piche
ab har kisi ko bas hum khud ko na pehchaante hai.....
Luv Priya......>>
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hi -
12th June 2002, 02:38 PM
hello priya ji,
hume aapki shayri pasand aayi,good
Hum jaante hein haale dil unka magar woh nahi jaante,
K- zamane mein aur bhi gum hein mohabat ke siva...... 
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sundeepji -
13th June 2002, 05:37 AM
dear sundeepji
thanks for liking my posts 
u say ki aur bhi gum kaafi hai u r right but
hum na jaane kisi aur dard ko ab
muhobbat dekhne hi nahi deti kisi aur taraf
Luv Priya>>
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hai -
13th June 2002, 08:11 PM
 hai apki shayri bhut psand aayi ........kuch hum bhi kehne ke shokeen hai to suniyega.....
wo jo mehfil main hmse pare-pare bethe hai
wo yeh na samjhe ki hum un per mare-mare bethe hai
yeh todil aane ki baat hai jalim youn to
mehfil main unse bhi khare- khare bhethe hai
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dil ki hasti bikher ke reh gayi hoti
dil ke arma beh gaye hote
yeh jindgi aapki amant hai verna
hum keb ke mer gaye hote........
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hi -
14th June 2002, 02:40 PM
hello priya ji,
how r u? Ihope must fine.
bahuat khoob,masha alaah,subhaan alaah kya maqool jaaab diya hai to mohterma arz kiya hai....
ishq ne "galib" nikkama kar diya,
varna thhe aadmi hum bhi bahaut kaam ke.....
aadab arz hai..
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14th June 2002, 11:53 PM
dearest vnniji
thanks for liling my posts 
i loved what u said too..
wo jo mehfil main hmse pare-pare bethe hai
wo yeh na samjhe ki hum un per mare-mare bethe hai
yeh todil aane ki baat hai jalim youn to
mehfil main unse bhi khare- khare bhethe hai
aaj mehfil me humse vo dur dur rehte hai
dil ki dharkan hai hamari par ab kisi aur ke dil me baste hai
ye to hai dilon ki baat na jaane kab kis par aa jaaye
apni apni kismat ki baathai hamare dil ko tod kar aaj vo haste hai.....
Luv Priya...
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sundeepji -
15th June 2002, 12:00 AM
sundeepji
very very well said
ishq ne "galib" nikkama kar diya,
varna thhe aadmi hum bhi bahaut kaam ke.....
ishq ne ab kar diya hai nikkamma
hum bhi the bare hi kaam ke
vo dillagi karte rahe aur hum sajhe hai ye unka pyar
shayad the vo hamare saathi sirf naam ke......
Luv Priya
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hi -
15th June 2002, 02:58 PM
hello priya ji,
kya khoob kaha aapne ki,
ishq ne ab kar diya hai nikkamma
hum bhi the bare hi kaam ke
vo dillagi karte rahe aur hum sajhe hai ye unka pyar
shayad the vo hamare saathi sirf naam ke......
hume tumse pyar kitna,yeh dil mein uter kar dekh lo,
agar yakeen na aaye to, dil se dil badal kar dekh lo..
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sundeepji -
15th June 2002, 11:19 PM
dil se dil badal kar hum dekh lete
agar yakkeen hota vo saath na chodenge
par hua kuch aisa hai ki
socha bhi na tha ki hume vi is tarha raahon me chodenge...
Luv Priya.>>
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hi -
17th June 2002, 02:40 PM
hello priya ji,
very well said,
dil se dil badal kar hum dekh lete
agar yakkeen hota vo saath na chodenge
par hua kuch aisa hai ki
socha bhi na tha ki hume vi is tarha raahon me chodenge...
but i think...
Pyar pani ki woh woh boon hai,Jo lagatar ek sakhat se sakhat pather per bhi girti rahe to ek din uske bhi aar-paar ho jaati hai..
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SUNDEEPJI -
18th June 2002, 02:16 AM
SUNDEEPJI KAISE HO? THANKS FOR ADDING SOME LINES HERE AGAIN
BUTI DONT KNOW I FEEL THAT PYAR JIS PAR GIRTA HAI PATHAR ME SE BHI RAAASSTA NIKAL LETA HAI...BUT THE THING IS FOR THAT U NEED TO BE IN CONTACT WITH THE PERSON..WHEN THERE ARE NO MORE CONTACTS...PANI TO GIRTAHAI PAR SIRF AUR SIRF AANKHO SE............
LUV PRIYA..>>>
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18th June 2002, 02:38 PM
hello priya ji,
shayri aap khoob kar leti hein subhan aalah
Teri aankh ka aanso ban jaaun aisi meri takdir kahan.
Kahi sher - o - nagma bankar
Kahi aanso o me dhalkar
Woh mile hain har jagah par
Kayi surate badalkar
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20th June 2002, 05:51 AM
thanks a lot for the compliment am honored buddy!!
hum unko hontho ki muskrahat ban sakte aisi meri takdeer kaha
khushi unhe de sakte aisi meri takdeeerr kaha
chaar lamhe gujaaaraana chahte the unke saath
par khud ko majur kuch aur hi tha...
AISI MERI TAKDERR KAHA
CHAAR LAMHE KHUSHI SE JEE JAAYU
AISI MERI TAKDERR KAHA
LUV PRIYA..>>
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hi -
20th June 2002, 02:30 PM
hello priya ji,
khuda ki kasam aap jo bhi likhti hein woh kabil-e-tarif hota hai,bahuat aache
arz kiya hai..
1 bu-e-vafa hai inme,bahaut kaam aayegi,
le jao char phool, humare majar se....
2 shart aandhion se lekar charaga kiya humne,
woh bhujati gayi hum jalate gaye...
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27th June 2002, 06:14 AM
dear sundeep ji
ky akhoob kaha hai aapne
shart aandhion se lekar charaga kiya humne,
woh bhujati gayi hum jalate gaye...
i thinmk
zindagi roz hame aajmaati rahi aur hum bhi ise aajmate rahe
bahut dur tak hum yuhi chalte rahe bahut dur tak vo yaad aattae rahe
luv ya priya
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27th June 2002, 08:05 PM
zamaney main muhabbat ko gul_e_nayaab kehtey hain
kuch likhney se pehley hum aapko salam kehtey hain
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27th June 2002, 08:12 PM
dear tarbez shahab
shukriya apna kallam add karne ke liye
aap ko hum bhi kehte hai sallaam dil se....... =)
Luv Priya>>
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thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
28th June 2002, 08:50 PM
 dil dhadakney lagta hai nazrey bechain ho jati hai
jab koi muhabbat karta hain duniya ko khabar ho jati hai
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tarbezji -
29th June 2002, 04:08 AM
tarbezji acha likha hai aapne but i think
duniys ko pehley aur apne hi dil ko baad me kahabr hua karti hai
ye pyar kaisa hai dewana
apne hi dil ko khabar nahi
dhadkta hai sene me har pal
aur pyar e anjaan ki kuch khabar nahi
when we luv we got no idea what the resutlt is...and thats the hard part...btu i think we must enjoy the while we have uz ma be it will never come back again...never ever
luv priya
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29th June 2002, 03:57 PM
well i don't think that"key duniya ko pehley kahber hoti hai pehley to dil bekarar ho jata hain unse milney ko dil karta hain unhey dekhaney ko dil karta hain so how can we say that duniya ko pehley khaber ho ti hain ...well waisey 100 main se kuch he loga ka duniya ko pehley pata chalta hain....
main puri tarah to inkar nahi karta per ho sakta haishayad tum harey samney koi example ho ..so mail me uyr thinking ..
uyr shayri friend shams tabrez
merey mukadder main woh nahi thi ager
kiun kudha ney fida kiya dil usper
uski yadoon key sahrey zinda hoon
chaloo yadoon ney ehsaan to kiya mujh per
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tarbezji -
30th June 2002, 04:21 AM
dear tarbez sahahab bahut khoob haha hai aapne ki...
merey mukadder main woh nahi thi ager
kiun kudha ney fida kiya dil usper
uski yadoon key sahrey zinda hoon
chaloo yadoon ney ehsaan to kiya mujh per
too good...u knw what we dont know what god hasplan for us and if he has already planned why he makes us go thru the things that arent gonna be ours....this thing i havent understood until now today..
jaaane kyu khuda ne hame unse milwayya
milwayya hi nahi phir hamara dil bhi unse lagayya
dhire dhire phir usme pyar bhi jagayaaaa
saath unhone kya dena tha hamara
ki aaj saath nahi hamare hamare saayya......????/
luv priya......
aapne theek kaha hai tarbez j pehle dil behajkar hota hai phir dil ko pata chalta hai...dekhne ko bechain hota hai.....aur AAKHIR ME SAB KUCH BAS EK SAPNA BBAN KE HI REH JATA HAI.....
Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......
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Re: Kuch Log>> -
31st March 2005, 03:11 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by LuvPriya
Kuch log dur hoke bhi paas rehte hai,
ye hum nahi kuch beete huye pal kehte hai......
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Hi Priya,
Nice lines ...nice thoughts
Lamhe to beet jaate hain
Ek nishani chod jaate hain
Dil mein kahin chubte hain
Ghav aise chod jaate hain
Thanks
Rohin
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24th August 2009, 07:43 PM
smile an ever lasting smile
a smile can bring you near to me
don't ever let me find you gone
'cause that would bring a tear to me
this world has lost its glory
let's start a brand new story
now my love
you think that I don't even mean
a single word I say
it's only words
and words are all I have
to take your heart away
talk in ever lasting words
and dedicate them all to me
and I will give you all my life
i'm here if you should call to me
you think that I don't even mean
a single word I say
it's only words
and words are all I have
to take your heart away
it's only words
and words are all I have
to take your heart away
keep smiling...
dil se nikaloge to khayalo mein chala aaunga, main koi waqt nahi jo guzar jaaounga........
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