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***Ab To Tumhare Pass Bhi Tanhaee Hai*** -
15th March 2004, 10:37 AM
Dosto ek adna sa gazal peshe khidmat hain, umeed hain pasand aaegi jo ki maene shayad apne dil se tayyar kiya hain aur *****
jiske hamare shayari.com ki BELA shah SAGAR ji ne chek kar sahi alfazoon me dhala hain. BELA JI aap ka shukria , is ahsaan ke lie. zindagi main mere abb sirf tanhaee hai tumharee yaad mujhey kis moar par le aee hai na ajj tum ho aur na tumhara saya hai bas isi sooch main mere ankh bhar aee hai tumharee tammana mere dil main har waqat rehte hai tumharee ass iss dil ne kiyon lagaee hai woh aik bar bhi palatne ko razi hi nahen kese musafir ko awaz hum ne lagaee hai har aik zakham jinka hum ne hans kar saha na jane kiyon , inki har baat abla paee hai tumharee gham hameen kehte hain , hum see dosti karlo kee ab tu tumharee pass bhi tanhaee hai..... reply ka intizaar rahega . sukria ............shoaib_love , bela sagar |
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15th March 2004, 11:49 AM
salam shoaib sahab..........
 hmm app ne bhi manoj ji ki tharhaan yahan meree zara si help par mera naam show kardiya...........but friend plz dont do it next time..........otherwise i will mind it. b/c we r shayri.com fellows n we can help of 1 another.........there is no need to thanks n mention it at all. plz becarefull next time. hamaree fellow main manoj ji ko GOD ne ye fun diya hai ke woh buhat achi images banatee hain ....well unhoon ne mujhko bhi aik image mere pasand ka gift kiya.........but it is only b/c of friendship na..........so plz no need of thanks. take care friend.........n ya koshish tu saree apki hi thee main tu bas is poetry ko touch hi kiya hai. keep writting.  |
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aesi koi baat nahi |
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aesi koi baat nahi -
15th March 2004, 01:36 PM
salam belaji
dekhie aap ne mere lie apna waqt jaya kiya agar main aap ko ek sukria bhi nahi kahoon to mujh se bada kamjarf kaon hoga par agar aap ko agar bura laga to next time se aesa nahi hoga . par please mind mat kiziega khuda hafeez |
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15th March 2004, 04:04 PM
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This are my fav lines! Nice poem Shoaib. Keep it up! It Goes On..." |
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thanx -
15th March 2004, 04:16 PM
alisha ji
thanx for yours reply and i think the lines also touch a bit urs life na....... |
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15th March 2004, 04:27 PM
yup...the express wat i am going through these few days...a heartbreak!
It Goes On..." |
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15th March 2004, 05:59 PM
"tumharee tammana mere dil main har waqat rehte hai
tumharee ass iss dil ne kiyon lagaee hai " waah yaar Shoaib....bohat achi gajal hai Carry on yaar --------------------------------------------------------- Hi Alisha tumahra heart abhi tak break hii hai...kaho to Fevicol bheju... vaise yaar tumahra heart-break hai ya Earthquake kitne din ho gaye abhi bhi us sadme ko nahi bhuli tum.... Bhool jayo usko.....  |
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15th March 2004, 07:16 PM
Sorry Mohit
Na mera dil jura hai aur naa hi jurega... I can never forget him... i have tried so hard..no use... It Goes On..." |
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16th March 2004, 12:58 PM
no no plz shoaib ji asa mat kaheen appp?
well app thanks keh kar khush hain tu ok its all right n main ne koi time waste nahen kiya its my pleasure keep writting friend n bye |
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