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2nd December 2014, 03:55 AM
shareek-e-bazm ko aadaab,
ek Ghazal ka matlaa pesh-e-khidmat hai zabaan aur rabt ka she'r hai, buraa ho to bilaa jhijhak kahiye ke buara hai aur agar yeh do misrey aapko us jagah par nazar aayeN "jahaaN" se kahe gaye haiN to aapki tavvajo chaahta hooN dard ki gaThRee, meri, daulat se jab tolii gayi dahar ke har ikk khazaane ki gireh kholii gayi gaThRee = poTli, parcel dahar = duniya, world gireh = gaaNth, knot is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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2nd December 2014, 10:32 AM
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Masha-allah....ehsaas bahut gehre haiN, poori gazal ka intejaar hai, ab jaldi se gazal poori post kar dijiye. aapke har sher meiN bahut gehri baate hoti hai, hame accha lagta hai aapko padna. likhte rhaiye  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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2nd December 2014, 09:48 PM
Maikash ji.....ehsaas bohot gehra hai, andaz-e-bayan lajawab. Aur dard beshumar
Puri gazal ka intazar rahega Daad kubul farmayen Bhushan joshi Bhushan Joshi |
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