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Dosto mahfil-e-ishq ki tarj par main ek mahfil-e-dard ka silsila suru karna chahta hoon. or aap sabka isme swagat hai.
Isko apni manzil par pahuchane ke liye mujhe aapka saath chahiye.
To phir is silsile ki suruaat main khud hi karta hoon
Mat pooch in aakho me kitna dard samay rakha hai
Mere ashko se tere haath bhi jal sakte hai
##@@ Jab hum na honge kaya rang-a-mahfil hogi &&&&
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22nd July 2009, 02:19 PM
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Mat pooch in aakho me kitna dard samay rakha hai
Mere ashko se tere haath bhi jal sakte hai
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Nice Try Sir........ Reps +++ added
I'll continue what u wrote.....
Mat pooch in aakho me kitna dard samay rakha hai
Mere ashko se tere haath bhi jal sakte hai
Itni aag hai tere seene mein mohabbat ki "Ehsaas"
Ke Mom hi nahin is jwala se, pathhar bhi pighal sakte hai
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22nd July 2009, 02:55 PM
Hai dard ke hi gubar kyun har insaan ki zindagii mein
Aye Khuda kya khushiyan ka sifr naam hi raha bakhi
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22nd July 2009, 03:05 PM
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Hai dard ke hi gubar kyun har insaan ki zindagii mein
Aye Khuda kya khushiyan ka sifr naam hi raha bakhi
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Zindagi bas utni hai, jitna Sadaksh Nazariya
Aur kuch bhi nahin mohabbat hai aur aashiqui ka dariya
Jeene ke liye ik zindagi hi nahin aur bhi kuchh hai baaki
Ik unki aankhon ka jaam ik mashooq-e-saaki
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22nd July 2009, 03:06 PM
Ek maqta meri janib se,
Garchey yeh imtihaan hai mere sabr-o-karar ka “shyam”
To labey-tabassum liye zehrey-bewafai bhi nigal sakte hain,
Aadab,
Shyam
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22nd July 2009, 03:09 PM
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Hai dard ke hi gubar kyun har insaan ki zindagii mein
Aye Khuda kya khushiyan ka sifr naam hi raha bakhi
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sameer jee aapko aage ka sher kahna tha
usi zameen per .............
aapne alag sher pesh kar diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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22nd July 2009, 03:11 PM
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Ek maqta meri janib se,
Garchey yeh imtihaan hai mere sabr-o-karar ka “shyam”
To labey-tabassum liye zehrey-bewafai bhi nigal sakte hain,
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Yun toh imtihaan bahut hain raah-e-mohabbat "Ehsaas"
Ik teri Muqaddas ibadat, ka fakat mehboob Sarmaya hai
Kabhi jhuka nahin ye sheesh, dar-e-khudaya bhi kabhi
Dekh n.ilaahi noor tera, maine bhi sir jhukaya hai......
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22nd July 2009, 03:12 PM
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Dosto mahfil-e-ishq ki tarj par main ek mahfil-e-dard ka silsila suru karna chahta hoon. or aap sabka isme swagat hai.
Isko apni manzil par pahuchane ke liye mujhe aapka saath chahiye.
To phir is silsile ki suruaat main khud hi karta hoon
Mat pooch in aakho me kitna dard samay rakha hai
Mere ashko se tere haath bhi jal sakte hai
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nice thread
is tarah sab milke ek achhi ghazal banayenge
fir puri ghazal mahfil mein post hogi
magar aapne suruwat hi ghalat kar diye
aapko pahle matlaa kahna tha
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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22nd July 2009, 03:17 PM
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nice thread
is tarah sab milke ek achhi ghazal banayenge
fir puri ghazal mahfil mein post hogi
magar aapne suruwat hi ghalat kar diye
aapko pahle matlaa kahna tha
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Kyu rules mein padti hai. Just continue the thread.. sher likhe Ja..... ye mehfil-e-ishq se alag hai yaar.....
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22nd July 2009, 03:20 PM
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Kyu rules mein padti hai. Just continue the thread.. sher likhe Ja..... ye mehfil-e-ishq se alag hai yaar.....
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chal thik hai tumne kaha to maan lia
aur koi chahat na tha tuje paane ke baad
tera hi intezaar kiya tere jaane ke baad
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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22nd July 2009, 03:24 PM
Ruthe koii ek shakz to koi baat nahi,
Ruthe jo Rab to dushwar hai zindagii
Hai to bahut nazuk yeh ihtemad ka dhaga
Tode jo yeh doar to gunahgar hai zindagii
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22nd July 2009, 03:26 PM
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chal thik hai tumne kaha to maan lia
aur koi chahat na tha tuje paane ke baad
tera hi intezaar kiya tere jaane ke baad
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Kaash Mere jaane ka gum kiya hota tune
Tanha khada kaheen main Laut aane ko betaab tha
Dekh meri badshahat muflisi ke dauraan
Mere hatheli mein lakeeron ke siwa ik tera gulaab tha
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22nd July 2009, 03:30 PM
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Kaash Mere jaane ka gum kiya hota tune
Tanha khada kaheen main Laut aane ko betaab tha
Dekh meri badshahat muflisi ke dauraan
Mere hatheli mein lakeeron ke siwa ik tera gulaab tha
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wah wah
jo Guzar raha hai dil per tuje bataau kaise
daastaa yeh zindagi ki tujhe sunaau kaise
gairoN k baatooN se kab huaa taklif hume
apne hi diye jo zakham woh dikhaau kaise
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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22nd July 2009, 03:34 PM
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wah wah
jo Guzar raha hai dil per tuje bataau kaise
daastaa yeh zindagi ki tujhe sunaau kaise
gairoN k baatooN se kab huaa taklif hume
apne hi diye jo zakham woh dikhaau kaise
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Bhaad mein jaaye zamana, isse thukrana seekh
Gairon ko anjuman mein apno ko apnana seekh
Nahin sunaaya jaata dard jisse dil ka rishta ho
Unhe pehchano jinke liye tum ek farishta ho....
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22nd July 2009, 03:35 PM
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Kaash Mere jaane ka gum kiya hota tune
Tanha khada kaheen main Laut aane ko betaab tha
Dekh meri badshahat muflisi ke dauraan
Mere hatheli mein lakeeron ke siwa ik tera gulaab tha
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Nice One Bro..
Koi kisi ke jane ka ghum nahi karta pyare
Laut aane ke intezaar bhi fuzul rehta pyare
Yahan sab hai apne hi mugam mein gum
Bichade se milne ko koi nahi kehta Pyare
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22nd July 2009, 03:37 PM
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Bhaad mein jaaye zamana, isse thukrana seekh
Gairon ko anjuman mein apno ko apnana seekh
Nahin sunaaya jaata dard jisse dil ka rishta ho
Unhe pehchano jinke liye tum ek farishta ho....
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Haal-e-din sunata hoon, khud hi faisla karna
Ya to tor dena dil, ya dard dil ka dawa karna
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22nd July 2009, 04:07 PM
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Haal-e-din sunata hoon, khud hi faisla karna
Ya to tor dena dil, ya dard dil ka dawa karna
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Tu bolti ja main sunta jau, yun hi zindagi guzaar du
Aa mere aagosh mein aa, aa tujhe pyaar du
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22nd July 2009, 04:08 PM
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Haal-e-din sunata hoon, khud hi faisla karna
Ya to tor dena dil, ya dard dil ka dawa karna
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Dawa hoti hai zakhmon ki nasoor ki nahi
Ab to aye mehboob ya fir maut, ye dua karna
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22nd July 2009, 04:19 PM
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Dawa hoti hai zakhmon ki nasoor ki nahi
Ab to aye mehboob ya fir maut, ye dua karna
Love
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Na duwa lage na dawa lage
Aye mere Khuda kisi ko Ishq ki hawa na lage
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22nd July 2009, 04:21 PM
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Dawa hoti hai zakhmon ki nasoor ki nahi
Ab to aye mehboob ya fir maut, ye dua karna
Love
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Ek shaks gum ko bayaa.n ker raha hai hans hanskar
Bazaar-e-duniya me meri tarah luta lagta hai
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22nd July 2009, 04:23 PM
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Ek shaks gum ko bayaa.n ker raha hai hans hanskar
Bazaar-e-duniya me meri tarah luta lagta hai
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Jis shaks ko tumne dekha wahan, koi diljala hoga
Aashiqui ko koi yun hi sar-e-bazaar nilaam nahin karta
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22nd July 2009, 04:33 PM
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Jis shaks ko tumne dekha wahan, koi diljala hoga
Aashiqui ko koi yun hi sar-e-bazaar nilaam nahin karta
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Aashique nilam ho jate hai aashqui kabhi nilam nahi hoti
Aashique badnaam hote hai mohbbat badnaam nahi hoti
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22nd July 2009, 04:34 PM
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Jis shaks ko tumne dekha wahan, koi diljala hoga
Aashiqui ko koi yun hi sar-e-bazaar nilaam nahin karta
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Boli to tab lagayen jab jazbaye-mohabbat ki koi kimat ho,
Kya mol lagayen dil ke fafolon ke jo footen to maut, na footen to badtar
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22nd July 2009, 04:38 PM
dunia maiN khoob naam kamaya tu kia hua
dil ka sakoon khud hi gaNwaya tu kia hua
teri raza se tark e taalluk kia magar
ilzaam tune muj pe lagaya tu kia hua
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Boli to tab lagayen jab jazbaye-mohabbat ki koi kimat ho,
Kya mol lagayen dil ke fafolon ke jo footen to maut, na footen to badtar
Love
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Mohobbat ko kisi mol mein tola nahi karte
Nigahon se kisi ke dil ko ta-tola nahi karte
Kya lagayenge mohobbat ki kimat sodayii
Rupyon paise ke siva kuch bola nahi karte
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22nd July 2009, 04:40 PM
Lagti hai boli aur kaudiyon mein hota hai nilaam
Woh fasana jise koi Mohabbat koi Junoon kehta hai
No karo ye aashiq ye aashiqui ki baatein mujhse
Ke Tum jise kehte ho ishq usse Ehsaas khoon kehta hai
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22nd July 2009, 04:43 PM
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Mohobbat ko kisi mol mein tola nahi karte
Nigahon se kisi ke dil ko ta-tola nahi karte
Kya lagayenge mohobbat ki kimat sodayii
Rupyon paise ke siva kuch bola nahi karte
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yeh duniyan k sitam se bachna sikho kwahish
apne dil ka darwaaza youn khola nahi karte
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22nd July 2009, 04:46 PM
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yeh duniyan k sitam se bachna sikho kwahish
apne dil ka darwaaza youn khola nahi karte
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Sadiyon se soona hai khwahishon ka aasmaan
Jaane kab honge bulandiyo par tere bhi armaan
Kabhi hogi bhi baarish mohabbat ki tujhpe
Ya jalta hi rahega sulagte "Ehsaas" se aasmaan
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22nd July 2009, 04:53 PM
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yeh duniyan k sitam se bachna sikho kwahish
apne dil ka darwaaza youn khola nahi karte
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Har chaukaht khuli hai mere dil ke dehliz kii
Ismein anjaam bhi aaye kai aur ilzaam bhi
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22nd July 2009, 05:01 PM
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Mohobbat ko kisi mol mein tola nahi karte
Nigahon se kisi ke dil ko ta-tola nahi karte
Kya lagayenge mohobbat ki kimat sodayii
Rupyon paise ke siva kuch bola nahi karte
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Khwahish Sahab,
Arz Hai,
Hai mohabbat ki kimat nigahen-yaar mein,
Jo nazaren feri to chuni gayi anarkali deewar mein,
Jo nazron mein basa liyen hamesha ke liye,
To bana lajawab ek Tajmahal, hazaron shahkar mein
Love
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wah wah shyam jee -
22nd July 2009, 05:15 PM
kyooN na dil ! bazm meiN ik Hashr uThaayaa jaaye !
jo haiN be-hosh unheN hosh meiN laayaa jaaye !
-jia
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22nd July 2009, 05:28 PM
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kyooN na dil ! bazm meiN ik Hashr uThaayaa jaaye !
jo haiN be-hosh unheN hosh meiN laayaa jaaye !
-jia
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Jia Ji,
Soney.n dein unhey jo hain be-hosh, mad-hosh
Akeley mein yaar ke saath rehney ke, sab bahaney hain!
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23rd July 2009, 02:35 PM
Dil ki tadap ko dekho na ke zamane ki taraf
Aata hai kya khayal dekh ke diwane ki taraf
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23rd July 2009, 02:46 PM
Ashq chune jo aankho se, eisa to wo sanam na tha,
kiski parwah karta hain dil.... wo kafir tera hamdum na tha
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23rd July 2009, 03:14 PM
Koi kisi ka nahi hota jab zamane ne samjhaya
Tanha rahe aur tanha hi hum ne dil ko behlaya
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23rd July 2009, 07:16 PM
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Koi kisi ka nahi hota jab zamane ne samjhaya
Tanha rahe aur tanha hi hum ne dil ko behlaya
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Bik raha tha waqt ke bazar me mere khawabo ka kafan
Mud ke peeche dekha to apna hi pyar kharidar nikla
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Dil ki tadap ko dekho na ke zamane ki taraf
Aata hai kya khayal dekh ke diwane ki taraf
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Diwane ki taraf dekhta hoon to aata hai khayal yehi baar baar
Ki jaise Bulleshah phir se jee utha ho
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23rd July 2009, 07:30 PM
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Khwahish Sahab,
Arz Hai,
Hai mohabbat ki kimat nigahen-yaar mein,
Jo nazaren feri to chuni gayi anarkali deewar mein,
Jo nazron mein basa liyen hamesha ke liye,
To bana lajawab ek Tajmahal, hazaron shahkar mein
Love
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Nazron ka khal bahut nirala hota hai
k patthar ko bhi khuda banate der nahi lagti
agar yaar ki nazar badal jaye pal bhar ka liye
to khud ko bhi mitate der nahi lagti
tum kahte ho ki nazaro me basane se tajmahal bante hai
are wo jamane to bahut pahle gujar gaye mere dost
ab to bane banaye taj mahal ko bhi girane me der nahi lagti
##@@ Jab hum na honge kaya rang-a-mahfil hogi &&&&
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23rd July 2009, 08:06 PM
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Nazron ka khal bahut nirala hota hai
k patthar ko bhi khuda banate der nahi lagti
agar yaar ki nazar badal jaye pal bhar ka liye
to khud ko bhi mitate der nahi lagti
tum kahte ho ki nazaro me basane se tajmahal bante hai
are wo jamane to bahut pahle gujar gaye mere dost
ab to bane banaye taj mahal ko bhi girane me der nahi lagti
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Kya baat hai Vicky Bhai..
Woh besab hi ishq ki duhai dete hai yaaro
Woh wafa ke naam per jaan lete hai yaaro
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23rd July 2009, 08:28 PM
tum kahte ho ki nazaro me basane se tajmahal bante hai
are wo jamane to bahut pahle gujar gaye mere dost
ab to bane banaye taj mahal ko bhi girane me der nahi lagti
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Bahut durust farmaya aapne magar..
Taj khara mehbooba ki khaak pe, gira to fir bhi khaak,
Un hazaaron taj ka kya karengey jo ankon mein basey phirtay hain
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