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7th June 2014, 08:38 PM
Mere pass sirf tum ho aur hai tera payam
Tumhi ho dharti tumhi ho mera aasmaan .
Tumhi se tau sajta hai mera sara gulistan ,
Ek tere aane ke baad basa mera baghbaan .
Sir tumhi se mukammal hai mera jahan.
Phir bhi tum mujse poochti ho apni pehchan.
Mere dil ki dharkano pe hai bus tera hi naam,
Jeeta hun tere sadke yun subah aur shaam.
Mana ki do jism hai hum per basi ek jaan ,
Chahat meri ho tum kabhi na kar paya bayan.
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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7th June 2014, 09:35 PM
Waah!! Bahaut achhhe Hamdam ji !!
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7th June 2014, 11:00 PM
Bohat khoob sanjay ji..
Ek baat kehna chahungi.. aapne ghazal me kayi jagah "tum" lafz ka istemaal kiya hai. .aur saath me "tera" lafz istemaal kiya hai. ..mere khayal se yeh ghalat hai..
"Tum" ke saath "tumhara" aur "tu" ke saath "tera" use karna chahiye if I am not wrong. .
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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8th June 2014, 09:24 AM
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Originally Posted by Hamdam
Mere pass sirf tum ho aur hai tera payam
Tumhi ho dharti tumhi ho mera aasmaan .
Tumhi se tau sajta hai mera sara gulistan ,
Ek tere aane ke baad basa mera baghbaan .
Sir tumhi se mukammal hai mera jahan.
Phir bhi tum mujse poochti ho apni pehchan.
Mere dil ki dharkano pe hai bus tera hi naam,
Jeeta hun tere sadke yun subah aur shaam.
Mana ki do jism hai hum per basi ek jaan ,
Chahat meri ho tum kabhi na kar paya bayan.
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Sanjay saahab..... bahot waqt baad aapne bazm me dastak dii is khoobsurat kalaam ke saath.... mujhe bahot pasand aapke khayaal o jazbaat... behad ummdah peshkash ke liye daad ke phool pesh karta hoon kubool kijiyega..
Shaad...
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9th June 2014, 11:34 AM
bahot khub, Sanjayji.......
waah hi waah nikaltee hai iss khubsurat qalaam pe...
aate rahiye
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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11th June 2014, 11:39 AM
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Originally Posted by Hamdam
Mere pass sirf tum ho aur hai tera payam
Tumhi ho dharti tumhi ho mera aasmaan .
Tumhi se tau sajta hai mera sara gulistan ,
Ek tere aane ke baad basa mera baghbaan .
Sir tumhi se mukammal hai mera jahan.
Phir bhi tum mujse poochti ho apni pehchan.
Mere dil ki dharkano pe hai bus tera hi naam,
Jeeta hun tere sadke yun subah aur shaam.
Mana ki do jism hai hum per basi ek jaan ,
Chahat meri ho tum kabhi na kar paya bayan.
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bht khoob
HAMDAM SB
Mohabbat o ulfat se bharpoor. Dilkash andaaz bht acha laga aap ko padh kar
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Dil jalaa ke poochhte haiN badii masoomiyat se woh.
Shamaa ka hi kyuN muqaddar hai raat bhar jalnaa.
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22nd June 2014, 10:48 AM
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Waah!! Bahaut achhhe Hamdam ji !!
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Zarra bhai shukriya , thora der se reply dene ke liye mafi chahunga
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
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22nd June 2014, 10:51 AM
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Bohat khoob sanjay ji..
Ek baat kehna chahungi.. aapne ghazal me kayi jagah "tum" lafz ka istemaal kiya hai. .aur saath me "tera" lafz istemaal kiya hai. ..mere khayal se yeh ghalat hai..
"Tum" ke saath "tumhara" aur "tu" ke saath "tera" use karna chahiye if I am not wrong. .
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Zainy ji ,
Bahut shukriya jo aapne apna samay diya and special thanx ki
aap ne mera dhyan meri galti pe dala aur use rectify kar ke samjhaya
bhi.
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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22nd June 2014, 10:53 AM
Sameer bhai apki sarahna ke liye tahe dil se shukriya.
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
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22nd June 2014, 11:15 AM
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Mere pass sirf tum ho aur hai tera payam
Tumhi ho dharti tumhi ho mera aasmaan .
Tumhi se tau sajta hai mera sara gulistan ,
Ek tere aane ke baad basa mera baghbaan .
Sir tumhi se mukammal hai mera jahan.
Phir bhi tum mujse poochti ho apni pehchan.
Mere dil ki dharkano pe hai bus tera hi naam,
Jeeta hun tere sadke yun subah aur shaam.
Mana ki do jism hai hum per basi ek jaan ,
Chahat meri ho tum kabhi na kar paya bayan.
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lovely line Sanjay ji. thnx for sharing
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
Ananthpak
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27th June 2014, 09:39 AM
sanjay jee.......mujhe bahut accha lagta hai jb aap accha likhte ho......feeling great.......very nice....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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27th June 2014, 12:45 PM
Khoooooob Hai Hamdam Sahab...DAAAAAAAD
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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30th June 2014, 05:12 PM
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bahot khub, Sanjayji.......
waah hi waah nikaltee hai iss khubsurat qalaam pe...
aate rahiye
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Adeil Sahib aap ka tahe dil.se mashkoor hoon ..
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30th June 2014, 05:17 PM
Dr Imtiyaz ji
...Pehli baar aapse mukhatib hone ka mauka mil raha hai.
Yakeen maniye bahut acha laga ye jaan kar ki humari.ek atpati
si koshish aap ko bha gayee..
Sanjay Sehgal
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30th June 2014, 05:19 PM
Praneeta ji ,
Thanx for all the appreciation ..
Sanjay Sehgal
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sanjay jee.......mujhe bahut accha lagta hai jb aap accha likhte ho......feeling great.......very nice....
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Bahut bahut shukriya Arvind ji jo aap ko meri rachna pasand ayee
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Khoooooob Hai Hamdam Sahab...DAAAAAAAD
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Ahmad Shakil sahib ..pehle tau maafi chahunga ki aap ko jawab dene mein chook ho gayi.
Aur aap ka tahe dil se shukrguzar hun ki , aap aaye aur aapne hum pe nazar e inayat ki.
Sanjay Sehgal
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29th August 2014, 09:45 AM
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Mere pass sirf tum ho aur hai tera payam
Tumhi ho dharti tumhi ho mera aasmaan .
Tumhi se tau sajta hai mera sara gulistan ,
Ek tere aane ke baad basa mera baghbaan .
Sir tumhi se mukammal hai mera jahan.
Phir bhi tum mujse poochti ho apni pehchan.
Mere dil ki dharkano pe hai bus tera hi naam,
Jeeta hun tere sadke yun subah aur shaam.
Mana ki do jism hai hum per basi ek jaan ,
Chahat meri ho tum kabhi na kar paya bayan.
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Sanjay ji...bahut khoobsurat aur pyare ahsaas hai...hame yeh ek sher dil ke khaas kareeb lga.
Mana ki do jism hai hum per basi ek jaan ,
Chahat meri ho tum kabhi na kar paya bayan
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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30th August 2014, 04:12 AM
waaaaaaaah! Sanjay jii,
Ehsasaat se libraiz aap ki yeH peshkash khoob rahi....
DherooN daad.... with reps!
Likhte rahiye,,
DuaooN ke saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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Sanjay ji...bahut khoobsurat aur pyare ahsaas hai...hame yeh ek sher dil ke khaas kareeb lga.
Mana ki do jism hai hum per basi ek jaan ,
Chahat meri ho tum kabhi na kar paya bayan
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Sunita ji ..aap ka shukriya jo.aapne humein bhi thora samay diya.
I feel really good , thanks once again
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1st September 2014, 09:49 PM
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waaaaaaaah! Sanjay jii,
Ehsasaat se libraiz aap ki yeH peshkash khoob rahi....
DherooN daad.... with reps!
Likhte rahiye,,
DuaooN ke saath,,
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Hassan bhai pehle tau reps ke liye shukriya ..Ab ghazal pasand karne
ke liye double shukriya
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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