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Tere Husn Pe Karte Hain Shayari....!! -
23rd August 2014, 02:15 PM
Adaab hazireen-e-meHfil-e-ishQ,
alfaazoN ki tehmeed mujh se baandhi nahi jaati...
seedhi si baat hai mujhe tum se mohabbat hai...(nm)
Pesh-e-khidmat hai ik taaza ishQ 'koshish':-
tujhe chaand kaheN ya chaandni
tere husn pe karte haiN shayari
bikhray gi jab lafz lafz teri khusbu!
ghazal meiN bhi aa jaye gi dilkashi
phool bhi hairaaN haiN chaman meiN
baagh meiN khili jab se haseeN kali
gul-e-gulaab bhi zameeN boos hua
gulaabi aankhoN per jab nazar pad’i
Qurbat-e-yaar is jahaN toH la-haasil!
hai yaQeen us jahaN wohi apni zindagi
sir-ba-sajoood hue kayi baar din meiN!
Rab se maangi ussi ki hansi-khushi
sar-e-raaH mil jao kisi roZ hum se!
piyaase sehraa ki bhuja doH tishnagi
jamal-e-yaar pe nazar aise thehri!
dheere dheere karne lagay aashiQi
‘hSn’ kyuN madhoosh ho chala hai!
wajaH shayed ‘parStaar’ ki naazuk Pari
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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23rd August 2014, 02:33 PM
‘hSn’ kyuN madhoosh ho chala hai!
wajaH shayed ‘parStaar’ ki naazuk Pari
mindblowing PS keep it up reps pending
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
Ananthpak
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23rd August 2014, 02:44 PM
Hasan bhai ek bahut hi pyar ke jazbe sw bhara ahsaas.....
sanjay sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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23rd August 2014, 03:44 PM
wah hassan sb.
Bohut khoob.
Just avoid syntactical mistakes pl.
The correct stanza is
tujhe chand kahen ya chandi
tere husn pe karte hain shayeri
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23rd August 2014, 03:47 PM
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Originally Posted by Praneeta
‘hSn’ kyuN madhoosh ho chala hai!
wajaH shayed ‘parStaar’ ki naazuk Pari
mindblowing PS keep it up reps pending
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Pari,
I am obliged that you like my composition!
Stay happy,
Regards,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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23rd August 2014, 05:10 PM
HSN bhai.....kya baat hai, bahut romantic hue ja rhe ho bahut pyare se ahsaas hai....khush rhiye.
god bless u
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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23rd August 2014, 11:49 PM
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Originally Posted by Hassan
Adaab hazireen-e-meHfil-e-ishQ,
alfaazoN ki tehmeed mujh se baandhi nahi jaati...
seedhi si baat hai mujhe tum se mohabbat hai...(nm)
Pesh-e-khidmat hai ik taaza ishQ 'koshish':-
tumheN chaand kahoN ya chaandni
tere husn pe karte haiN shayari
bikhray gi jab lafz lafz teri khusbu!
ghazal meiN bhi aa jaye gi dilkashi
phool bhi hairaaN haiN chaman meiN
baagh meiN khili jab se haseeN kali
gul-e-gulaab bhi zameeN boos hua
gulaabi aankhoN per jab nazar pad’i
Qurbat-e-yaar is jahaN toH la-haasil!
hai yaQeen us jahaN wohi apni zindagi
sir-ba-sajoood hue kayi baar din meiN!
Rab se maangi ussi ki hansi-khushi
sar-e-raaH mil jao kisi roZ hum se!
piyaase sehraa ki bhuja doH tishnagi
jamal-e-yaar pe nazar aise thehri!
dheere dheere karne lagay aashiQi
‘hSn’ kyuN madhoosh ho chala hai!
wajaH shayed ‘parStaar’ ki naazuk Pari
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Kya baat hai ..
.hassan bhai par junoon-e-ishq sawaar hai
Sare k saare lajawaab aashaar hai
..bohat umda...excellent lines
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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24th August 2014, 09:03 AM
Bahut khoobsurat hasan ji ishq me doobi nazm.....dil se daad. ..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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24th August 2014, 09:29 PM
Bohat khoob Hassan sahab. ....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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25th August 2014, 01:05 AM
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Originally Posted by Hamdam
Hasan bhai ek bahut hi pyar ke jazbe sw bhara ahsaas.....
sanjay sehgal
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Sanjay jii,,
Pazeeraayi ke liye be-had manooN hooN!
Milte rahiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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Boht Umda -
25th August 2014, 07:38 PM
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Originally Posted by Hassan
Adaab hazireen-e-meHfil-e-ishQ,
alfaazoN ki tehmeed mujh se baandhi nahi jaati...
seedhi si baat hai mujhe tum se mohabbat hai...(nm)
Pesh-e-khidmat hai ik taaza ishQ 'koshish':-
tujhe chaand kaheN ya chaandni
tere husn pe karte haiN shayari
bikhray gi jab lafz lafz teri khusbu!
ghazal meiN bhi aa jaye gi dilkashi
phool bhi hairaaN haiN chaman meiN
baagh meiN khili jab se haseeN kali
gul-e-gulaab bhi zameeN boos hua
gulaabi aankhoN per jab nazar pad’i
Qurbat-e-yaar is jahaN toH la-haasil!
hai yaQeen us jahaN wohi apni zindagi
sir-ba-sajoood hue kayi baar din meiN!
Rab se maangi ussi ki hansi-khushi
sar-e-raaH mil jao kisi roZ hum se!
piyaase sehraa ki bhuja doH tishnagi
jamal-e-yaar pe nazar aise thehri!
dheere dheere karne lagay aashiQi
‘hSn’ kyuN madhoosh ho chala hai!
wajaH shayed ‘parStaar’ ki naazuk Pari
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Boht umda ghazal qalam band ki aapne....Yun hi likhte raheey
Doyaon ke saath...!!!
Yasmine
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26th August 2014, 12:10 AM
ohhh really! chalo koi baat nahi,
agle janam meiN try kareN ge!
and I'm glad that you liked my composition!
Take care,
Regards,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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26th August 2014, 09:40 AM
Bahut khub likha hassan sahab daad kabool farmaye
Regards,
Ashwani Tyagi
akela hun magar abaad karleta hun 'veeranay'
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26th August 2014, 07:53 PM
acha jee.. jo hukm mere aaQa.....
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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26th August 2014, 07:54 PM
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Originally Posted by mujib66
wah hassan sb.
Bohut khoob.
Just avoid syntactical mistakes pl.
The correct stanza is
tujhe chand kahen ya chandi
tere husn pe karte hain shayeri
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Mujib saheb,
Bohat bohat shukriyaaH pasandeedgi ke liye!
And I corrected that stanza as suggested by you!
Milte rahiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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26th August 2014, 07:58 PM
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Originally Posted by sunita virender
HSN bhai.....kya baat hai, bahut romantic hue ja rhe ho bahut pyare se ahsaas hai....khush rhiye.
god bless u
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Sunita baaji,
Aap aayiN bahar aayi...
Adna si koshish aap ko acchi lagi, meri khush-naseebi hai..
Aagay bhi aise hi saath ki umeed rahe gii,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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26th August 2014, 07:59 PM
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Originally Posted by ananthpak
Kya baat hai ..
.hassan bhai par junoon-e-ishq sawaar hai
Sare k saare lajawaab aashaar hai
..bohat umda...excellent lines
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Ananth sir,
That's indeed my pleasure to have you on my thread,
I'm, really, obliged, sir!
Take care,
Regards,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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26th August 2014, 08:00 PM
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Bahut khoobsurat hasan ji ishq me doobi nazm.....dil se daad. ..
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Madhu jii,
Khaak lafzooN ki izzat-afzaai ke liye be-had manooN hooN!
Aagay bhi aise hi saath ki umeed rahe gi,
DuaooN ke saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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26th August 2014, 08:01 PM
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Bohat khoob Hassan sahab. ....
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Zainy saheba,
Hausla afzaai ke liye bohat bohat shukriyaaH!
Take care,
Regards,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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26th August 2014, 08:02 PM
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Originally Posted by Yasmine
Boht umda ghazal qalam band ki aapne....Yun hi likhte raheey
Doyaon ke saath...!!!
Yasmine
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Yasmine saheba,
Koshish ko iss qadar pazeeraayi bakhshne ke liye be-had shukriyaaH!
Saath dete rahiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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26th August 2014, 08:03 PM
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Bahut khub likha hassan sahab daad kabool farmaye
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Ashwani jee,
Aap ko yahaN dekh kar bohat acha laga!
Koshish ko pasand karne ke liye bohat bohat shukriyaaH!
Milte rahiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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27th August 2014, 08:10 PM
Truly Romantic.
Loved it.
Bohut bohut pasand aaya.
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27th August 2014, 09:15 PM
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Originally Posted by masti
Truly Romantic.
Loved it.
Bohut bohut pasand aaya.
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Sarika jee,
Adna si koshish ko pasand karne ke liye aap ka be-had shukarguzaar hooN!
Apna khiyal rakhyie ga,
DuaooN ke saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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