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qatl-e-Amritsar (Jallianwala baug massacre) - Marsiyaa -
1st August 2014, 03:41 PM
dosto.n jallianwalla baug massacre ke shahido.n ke naam mai.n ne yeh marsiyaa likha hai jo ahl-e-shayri-e-dard ko pesh karna chaahunga...
aap sabhii bazm daaro.n kii iis pe salaah kaa intezaar rahegaa... ------------------- baam-e-falak me.n noor naye din ke aane ka josh-o-Kharosh tha sharar-e-ja.ng* la.Daane ka tha mauqaa aalam-e-huu* me.n jazba dikhaane ka do nau-jawaan veero.n ko riiha karaane ka leke sadaa-e-haq thii rakhii ijtiima kii shaam kisko pataa tha wo hii banegii aduu kii daam* *[ sharar-e-jung = spark of war; aalam-e-huu = world of mist/fog; daam = trap ] bekhud sipaah-e-taish jo pandrah hazaar the laDne ko ja.ng-e-fazl baDe beqaraar the jallianwaale baag me.n sab gham-gusaar the begaano.n ke jo zulm se siina-figaar* the zinhaar!* waqt zulmii banaa maut ka safiir maasoomo.n me.n na aam the yaa thaa koii kabiir *[ siina-figaar = troubled; zinhaar! = beware!; kabiir = great ] har shakhs dayaar-e-maut me.n tha khud hi ek misaal har ek zabaa.n se niklii thii naaraao.n me.n ubaal* yaa.n thii shuroo hi jung-e-ahimsaa-e-KHuub-majaal maqqaar sipaahio.n ne chalaayii farebii chaal barse hi jaa rahii thii jahaa.n goliyaa.n hazaar ku.nve.n me.n gir rahe the kuchh zinda bane laachaar *[ ubaal = anger ] aisii kahii.n na dekhne miltii hai qatl-e-aam marte hue bhii lete the maadar watan ka naam aise shahiid bhii the jo bante na the ghulaam marne ke waqt rakhte the chehre pe ibtisaam* kaise uthaauu.n aa.nkhe.n jo maatam me.n nam huii maafee ka arzmand hoo.n jo sahv-e-qalam huii *[ ibtisaam = smile; sahv-e-qalam = slip of pen, oversight ] ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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1st August 2014, 06:18 PM
Waah.....aadeil sahib....kyaa qaabil e taarif marsiya huya hai........daad...Ka nazraana qabool kariye
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1st August 2014, 08:59 PM
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Hamaari dil-e-qalam se kii gayee iis adnaa si koshish pe aapke iis muhabbatbhare nazraane ke liye behad mashquur hoo.n ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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2nd August 2014, 12:20 PM
Aadeil bhai !!! Rongte kharhe kar dene waala qalaam kaha aap ne!! Is se gham dard gussa soz aur fakhr ye sabhi ehsaas mehsoos ho jaate hain ek saath !! Gale laga ke aap ko daad de raha hooN !!!
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6th August 2014, 11:05 AM
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meri iis pehli aur marsiya likhne kii adnaa si koshish ko itna saraahne ke liye, I am extremely thankful... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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6th August 2014, 11:06 AM
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aapkii iis zarra navaazi aur itnii muhabbat hamaarii iis chhoti si koshish pe iis ke liye aapka behad mamnoon hooN ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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6th August 2014, 11:37 AM
Aadil bhai,
Ehsasaat aur jazbaatooN se bhapoor composition...! DherooN daad qabool kijiye,, Likhte rahiye,, DuaooN ke saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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6th August 2014, 12:02 PM
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aapka behad shukr guzaar hooN iis daad aur hausla afzaaee ke liye... duago.. Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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6th August 2014, 02:11 PM
Aadil jee...its one of ur best creation......hats off to u....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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6th August 2014, 03:42 PM
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aapke iis pyar aur hausla afzaaee ke liye hamesha shukr guzaar rahunga  DuaoN ke saath.. Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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17th September 2014, 10:13 AM
Aadeil bhai..........kuch nahi hai kehne ko...ni-shabad !
aapki soch ko aapke ehsaasoN ko salaam. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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17th September 2014, 10:32 AM
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aapkii iis qadr muhabbat ne hameN bhii niH-shabd kar diya hai...... aapka behad shukr guzaar hooN............. ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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