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Vo rishta tera mera hai - 9th August 2010, 10:46 AM

VO RISHTA TERA MERA HAI



Kisi geet ka jo kavi man se
Chiriyon ka jo neel gagan se
Door desh ka ghar aangan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Bhaon ka jo hota man se
Pratimaon ka jo poojan se
Aur aatma ka is tan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Aansoo ka jo kisi nayan se
Boondon ka jo hai sawan se
Doooor kchitij par dhara gagan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Dil ki ganthen khol ke dekho
Man ki aankhen khol ke dekho
Chatak sa VISHWAS hai krishna
wo rishta tera mera hai.

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Good post. Thanks for sharing............


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Good post. Thanks for sharing............

aapne samay diya,pasand kiya.bahut-bahut shukriya

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bahut khoob.........................!


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Kya baat hai rachana bahut hi khoobsurat hai, bahut khoob aise hi likhate rahiyega..


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VO RISHTA TERA MERA HAI



Kisi geet ka jo kavi man se
Chiriyon ka jo neel gagan se
Door desh ka ghar aangan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Bhaon ka jo hota man se
Pratimaon ka jo poojan se
Aur aatma ka is tan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Aansoo ka jo kisi nayan se
Boondon ka jo hai sawan se
Doooor kchitij par dhara gagan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Dil ki ganthen khol ke dekho
Man ki aankhen khol ke dekho
Chatak sa VISHWAS hai krishna
wo rishta tera mera hai.

krishna

BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA
YAH BAHUT HI DIL KO CHOO GAYI LINES

Dil ki ganthen khol ke dekho
Man ki aankhen khol ke dekho

Chatak sa VISHWAS hai krishna
wo rishta tera mera hai.


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bahut khoob.........................!

sunita ji,aapne rachna pasand ki mujhe bahut hausla mila aapka bahut-bahut shukriya.

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Krishna Ji

Kya baat hai rachana bahut hi khoobsurat hai, bahut khoob aise hi likhate rahiyega..
aapne samay diya rachna pasand ki aapka bahut-bahut shukriya,ham jaroor likhte rahenge aur ummeed rakhenge ki aapke kuchh keemti lamhe hame jaroor milenge

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BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA
YAH BAHUT HI DIL KO CHOO GAYI LINES

Dil ki ganthen khol ke dekho
Man ki aankhen khol ke dekho
Chatak sa VISHWAS hai krishna
wo rishta tera mera hai.

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SADA KHUSH RAHE
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VO RISHTA TERA MERA HAI



Kisi geet ka jo kavi man se
Chiriyon ka jo neel gagan se
Door desh ka ghar aangan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Bhaon ka jo hota man se
Pratimaon ka jo poojan se
Aur aatma ka is tan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Aansoo ka jo kisi nayan se
Boondon ka jo hai sawan se
Doooor kchitij par dhara gagan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Dil ki ganthen khol ke dekho
Man ki aankhen khol ke dekho
Chatak sa VISHWAS hai krishna
wo rishta tera mera hai.

krishna
Very Impressive ... Very Nice Poetry ... Krishna Ji !

dili daad ... ! khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !




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Very Impressive ... Very Nice Poetry ... Krishna Ji !

dili daad ... ! khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
mehra sahib namaskar, aapko ye rachna achchhi lagi jankar mai bahut khush hun.aapne hamesha mera hausla badhaya hai shayad isiliye mai aage kuchh aur likh pata hun.aapki daad aur duaon ka bahut bahut shukriya
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originally posted by Krishna



Kisi geet ka jo kavi man se
Chiriyon ka jo neel gagan se
Door desh ka ghar aangan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Bhaon ka jo hota man se
Pratimaon ka jo poojan se
Aur aatma ka is tan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Aansoo ka jo kisi nayan se
Boondon ka jo hai sawan se
Doooor kchitij par dhara gagan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Dil ki ganthen khol ke dekho
Man ki aankhen khol ke dekho
Chatak sa VISHWAS hai krishna
wo rishta

how nice it is ........very nice.
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VO RISHTA TERA MERA HAI



Kisi geet ka jo kavi man se
Chiriyon ka jo neel gagan se
Door desh ka ghar aangan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Bhaon ka jo hota man se
Pratimaon ka jo poojan se
Aur aatma ka is tan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Aansoo ka jo kisi nayan se
Boondon ka jo hai sawan se
Doooor kchitij par dhara gagan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Dil ki ganthen khol ke dekho
Man ki aankhen khol ke dekho
Chatak sa VISHWAS hai krishna
wo rishta tera mera hai.

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jaankar achcha laga ki apne hi sahar mein ik sdc user
itni khoobsoorat aur dil ko chujane wali kavita likh raha hai....
kya baat hai!!.......

jo tune na jana jo maine na jana
wo rishta tera mera hai...........

khush rahe , swasth rahe.
aapka prem anjana........


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Kisi geet ka jo kavi man se
Chiriyon ka jo neel gagan se
Door desh ka ghar aangan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Bhaon ka jo hota man se
Pratimaon ka jo poojan se
Aur aatma ka is tan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Aansoo ka jo kisi nayan se
Boondon ka jo hai sawan se
Doooor kchitij par dhara gagan se
Vo rishta tera mera hai.

Dil ki ganthen khol ke dekho
Man ki aankhen khol ke dekho
Chatak sa VISHWAS hai krishna
wo rishta

how nice it is ........very nice.
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rajinderseep ji namaskar,apko kavita achchhi lgi apne saraha to mera pryas safal hua.america me rhkar bhi hindi kavita ko apne samay diya iske liye mai khush bhi hun aur aabhari bhi. THANK YOU.



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krishna ko prem anjana ka salaam
jaankar achcha laga ki apne hi sahar mein ik sdc user
itni khoobsoorat aur dil ko chujane wali kavita likh raha hai....
kya baat hai!!.......

jo tune na jana jo maine na jana
wo rishta tera mera hai...........

khush rahe , swasth rahe.
aapka prem anjana........
anjana ji namskar,bahut bahut dhnyvad aapko kavita achchhi lgi aur shukriya SDC ka ki ek shahar k do anjano ko mila diya
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