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Meri Pehli Gazal -
2nd September 2002, 04:03 PM
HAMARI PEHLI GAZAL
GIRTI BIJLIYAN MERA AASHIYANA DHOONDH HI LETIN HAI, WAQT BEWAQT GHAM MERA THIKANA DHOONDH HI LETI HAI JAANE KITNE HAI GARK-e-GHAM KE SHOWKIN EK NA EK RIND HAR MAIKHANA DHOONDH HI LETI HAI HAR HASEENA KO JAB HOTI HAI MEHSOOS AARJOO AAPNE YAAR MEIN WOH MIZAZ-e-AASHIKANA DHOONDH HI LETI HAI KITNI BHI PAAK HO MOHABBAT IS JAHAN MEIN DUNIYA ISMEIN FARIYAD-e-JISMANA DHOONDH HI LETI HAI BAITHTA HAI JAAB KABHI DILJALON KE BEECH 'SAFIR' JUBAN-e-FASURDA KOI NAYA FASANA DHOONDH HI LETI HAI ----------------SAFIR-----------------[/FONT] HAMARI PEHLI GAZAL [B] |
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Welcome -
3rd September 2002, 03:23 PM
Safirji, aapki pehli ghazal parhi sachmuch bahut aachha likha hai aapne, likhte rahiyega...
Regards Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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hello.... -
29th September 2002, 12:36 AM
hi
 safirji aap ki pehli ghazal padhee padh kar bahut achha hi achha laga. aap bahut hi khub likhte hain. aap aur achha likhen iske liye all the best. |
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beautiful -
29th September 2002, 10:41 AM
bahut khoob!!!!!!!
aur pehali hone ke nate iski khoobsoorti padhte hi banti i wonder "aagaaz aisa hai to anjaam kya hoga" ___________________________________________ aviral(allahabadrptds) |
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