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diwaanaa dil - 26th November 2013, 12:34 PM

ye dil kaisaa deewaanaa hai, ye ishq usee se kartaa hai
jo usko toR ke jaataa hai, ye usee ki aahe’n bhartaa hai

kaun eese samjhaaegaa kaun eese manaaegaa
ye apnee zidd pe kaayam hai, naa kiseeki baate’n suntaa hai

koee eese kitnaa bhee kahe, wo rehtaa hai begaanaa saa
naadaa’n hai wo, ulfat me, din raat khud hi machaltaa hai

usko jo roz taDpaataa hai jo ho gayaa uss se judaa
wo usee ke dam pe jitaa hai aur usee ki yaad me martaa hai

usko “Safeer” kuchh aur kehtaa, uskaa hai aur hi afsaanaa
wo kyaa sunegaa baat apnee, bas dil hi dil me jaltaa hai


~ Safeer



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अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता



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26th November 2013, 03:10 PM

Waaahhh kyaa khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aapne Aadeil saahab...... mazaa aa gayaa...

sabse acchi baat is kalaam me rawaani bahot hai, jaise bahtaa huaa paani.... likhte raheN

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26th November 2013, 04:30 PM

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Waaahhh kyaa khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aapne Aadeil saahab...... mazaa aa gayaa...

sabse acchi baat is kalaam me rawaani bahot hai, jaise bahtaa huaa paani.... likhte raheN

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Thank you very much janaab. aapki daad qbul hai.



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26th November 2013, 04:49 PM

aadiel bhai aaapne kya hi in aaashar
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27th November 2013, 10:42 AM

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aadiel bhai aaapne kya hi in aaashar
ko sajaya hai
bahut khub likhte rahiye
Thank you Shakir bhai.............



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30th November 2013, 07:44 PM

waah waah...bahut hee khoob.....keep it up



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1st December 2013, 07:49 AM

Wah bhai bahut acha likha apne dil.ka haal ..

Ispe apni likhi do lines aap ki nazar ...........

Yeh dil tou bechara hai ,ranjo gam ka mara hai ;
Khud ko behla nahi sakta ,isliye dhoondta sahara hai.

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khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
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2nd December 2013, 02:21 PM

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Wah bhai bahut acha likha apne dil.ka haal ..

Ispe apni likhi do lines aap ki nazar ...........

Yeh dil tou bechara hai ,ranjo gam ka mara hai ;
Khud ko behla nahi sakta ,isliye dhoondta sahara hai.

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Thank you very much. Aur Sanjay ji, aapne bhi khub kahii. Uspe daad.
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waah waah...bahut hee khoob.....keep it up
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Bhoot achi gazal likhi aapne janab tahe dil se daad..
   
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Bhoot achi gazal likhi aapne janab tahe dil se daad..
Aapka tah-e-dil se shukriya tabaah ji.
Aadaab........



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