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26th November 2013, 12:34 PM
ye dil kaisaa deewaanaa hai, ye ishq usee se kartaa hai
jo usko toR ke jaataa hai, ye usee ki aahe’n bhartaa hai
kaun eese samjhaaegaa kaun eese manaaegaa
ye apnee zidd pe kaayam hai, naa kiseeki baate’n suntaa hai
koee eese kitnaa bhee kahe, wo rehtaa hai begaanaa saa
naadaa’n hai wo, ulfat me, din raat khud hi machaltaa hai
usko jo roz taDpaataa hai jo ho gayaa uss se judaa
wo usee ke dam pe jitaa hai aur usee ki yaad me martaa hai
usko “Safeer” kuchh aur kehtaa, uskaa hai aur hi afsaanaa
wo kyaa sunegaa baat apnee, bas dil hi dil me jaltaa hai
~ Safeer
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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26th November 2013, 03:10 PM
Waaahhh kyaa khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aapne Aadeil saahab...... mazaa aa gayaa...
sabse acchi baat is kalaam me rawaani bahot hai, jaise bahtaa huaa paani.... likhte raheN
Shaad...
Shaad...
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26th November 2013, 04:30 PM
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Waaahhh kyaa khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aapne Aadeil saahab...... mazaa aa gayaa...
sabse acchi baat is kalaam me rawaani bahot hai, jaise bahtaa huaa paani.... likhte raheN
Shaad...
Thank you very much janaab. aapki daad qbul hai.
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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26th November 2013, 04:49 PM
aadiel bhai aaapne kya hi in aaashar
ko sajaya hai
bahut khub likhte rahiye
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27th November 2013, 10:42 AM
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aadiel bhai aaapne kya hi in aaashar
ko sajaya hai
bahut khub likhte rahiye
Thank you Shakir bhai.............
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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30th November 2013, 07:44 PM
waah waah...bahut hee khoob.....keep it up
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चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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1st December 2013, 07:49 AM
Wah bhai bahut acha likha apne dil.ka haal ..
Ispe apni likhi do lines aap ki nazar ...........
Yeh dil tou bechara hai ,ranjo gam ka mara hai ;
Khud ko behla nahi sakta ,isliye dhoondta sahara hai.
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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2nd December 2013, 02:21 PM
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Wah bhai bahut acha likha apne dil.ka haal ..
Ispe apni likhi do lines aap ki nazar ...........
Yeh dil tou bechara hai ,ranjo gam ka mara hai ;
Khud ko behla nahi sakta ,isliye dhoondta sahara hai.
Sanjay Sehgal
Thank you very much. Aur Sanjay ji, aapne bhi khub kahii. Uspe daad.
~ Safeer 'Adil'
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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2nd December 2013, 02:24 PM
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waah waah...bahut hee khoob.....keep it up
Thank you, Aru ji. Aapki daad qbul hai hamein
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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20th December 2013, 02:12 PM
Bhoot achi gazal likhi aapne janab tahe dil se daad..
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23rd December 2013, 10:13 AM
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Bhoot achi gazal likhi aapne janab tahe dil se daad..
Aapka tah-e-dil se shukriya tabaah ji.
Aadaab........
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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