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8th January 2012, 11:24 AM
Aslam bhayee ke liye kuch sher hue hai bat hi baat maiN.........
_____ jab kisi se wafaa karo aslam aql se tum chala karo aslam iska matlab nahi pata fir bhi mujhko 'munshi' kaha karo aslam ye meri aakhri ho raat bachi itni si bas dua karo aslam rooh meri hai zism maiN kiske jo agar ho pata karo aslam jo mere dil maiN, karne do, mujhko tum bhale ho bhala karo aslam dekho aise bikhar na jau maiN yun na mujhko chuaa karo aslam baat maiN hi sunu sune na koe baat jab bhi kiyaa karo aslam kya hai acha, buraa hai kya... chhodo jo kahu maiN sunaa karo aslam kya sitaro ki baat karte ho chand hi choo liya karo aslam fikr ka kya rahe.. rahe .. na rahe Noor ho tum ziyaa,(jiya) karo aslam |
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8th January 2012, 04:49 PM
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  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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8th January 2012, 06:39 PM
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bahot khub vikas ji....aslam sahab ke liye kya khub advice hai Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
 Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota Ananthpak |
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8th January 2012, 08:09 PM
rooh meri hai zism maiN kiske
jo agar ho pata karo aslam jo mere dil maiN, karne do, mujhko tum bhale ho bhala karo aslam dekho aise bikhar na jau maiN yun na mujhko chuaa karo aslam fikr ka kya rahe.. rahe .. na rahe Noor ho tum ziyaa,(jiya) karo aslam namaste bhai,kaise ho? bahut acchee ghazal lekar aaye hai ho aap. aapko is khoobsurat peshqash per dili daad o mubaraqbad. khaas taur par quoted sher per...................tc |
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9th January 2012, 12:06 AM
jm ji
kya baat hai..aslam ji ke liye bhaut khub gazal kahin... daad hazir hai शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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9th January 2012, 12:39 PM
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Vikaas Bhaayi.........Aadaab Janab Boht Umdah Raha Aap Ka Ye Kalaam......... Dili Daad Qabolol Farmayen....... Sada Khush Rahiye....Likhtay Rahiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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9th January 2012, 02:03 PM
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WAH!!..Bohat khoob vikas bhai... Pehle do ashaar ke alawa baqi ghazal kaafi romantic hai...  ....Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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9th January 2012, 02:07 PM
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9th January 2012, 02:10 PM
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)))Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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12th January 2012, 07:56 PM
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Dear Vikas sabse pehle to dair se haaziri ke liyN maazrat, uske baad baat ghazal ki Yun to tumhe sdc par bhut pada hai aur tumhare khyalaat ki saraahna bhi ki hai jo khayaal laya karte ho unme bala ki nazakat hua karti hai yaani shayd baat bhut aaam si hoti magr jis taraH se usko bayaaN kia jaata hai wo usme kamaal hota hai, lakin abhse chand maah qabal jab meri tumse pehli mulaqaat huii aur tumne apna jadu dikhaana shru kia to meiN dang reh gaya tumhara ek sher jo mujhay ta hayaat yaad rahega usse maangna tum na taaroN se hargiz gira jo wahaN se mila hi nahi hai qis qadar ki sada baat hai aur kitni aam fehem magr usko taraash kar yuN itni saadgi se keh daina shayd tumhare hi bas ki baat hogi usse bad kar ye baat ke jab ye sher tumhari zabaani suna to iska lutf yaqeenan dobala tha jo andaaz e bayaaN tum rakhte ho wo qabil e daad hai, tumhari is ghazal ka sher iska matlab nahi pata fir bhi mujhko 'munshi' kaha karo aslam jab meiN tumhe sun raha tha (delhi mai) to jaane kyuN tumhare har sher par mujhay ek hi naam yaad aa raha tha "Munshi Prem chand" ajeeb sa tanz tumhare un halke halke nashtaroN mai tha jo tum apni saada si zabaan mai keh rahe they shayd tumhe khud bhi is baat ka andaza nahi ke tum mai kya sifat basera karti hai, whi maine tumhe bhut dheere se ek laqab dia "munshi" mohabbat mai dooba hua ye belos lafz maine tumhare liyN nahi kaha balke mujhay aisa laga ke jaise kisi ne kehelwaya ho mujhse shayd ab tum is naam ka matlab jaan gaye hoge, ghazal keh kar jo izzat tumhe mujhay di hai uska meiN qatii haqdaar nhi wo isliyN ke sirf sher keh laine se koi shayar nahi ho jata uske liyN ek ache insaan ki bhi zaroorat hua karti hai, tumhari mohabbat dil ki gehraaiyoN se sar e khm qubool bhut nawaazish is beshqeeti qadar ke liyN yuN hi likhte raho Allah kaamyaabiyoN se nawaaze aameen Allah kare zor e qalam aur ziyadaH * waise kaii sheroN mai mujhay kahiN na kahiN romaniyat ki boo aa rahi hai :P aslam |
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12th January 2012, 10:24 PM
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17th March 2012, 10:36 AM
Vikas, kya baat hai ASLAM jii ke naam par etni romaniyat bhari gazal
 accha to likhety hi ho aap, kahne ki jaroorat hi nahi hai...so keep writing...god bless u dear ! dekho aise bikhar na jau maiN yun na mujhko chuaa karo aslam .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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19th March 2012, 05:40 AM
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dhamaake kar diyaa rey babuwaa kamaal ho gayaa ab to ham sab yahi samajh rahe the ki apnaa chhotuwaa khaali khooli ghazal ki sawaaari kartaa hai magar aaj pata chalaa ki ye to apne qad se bahot badaa ho gayaa hai aor ab shakhsiyaat pe bhi qalam chalaane lagaa hai wo bhi baap re baap aisaa waisaa yaar jug jug jiyo yun hi dhammaal kartey raho aaj idhar se guzar huwaa to is pe nigaah paree aot tabiyat khilkhilaa gayee mokammal manzoom hi achha hai magar yaaraa tum ne RAHE ..RAHE NA RAHE baandhaa hai us pe sao jaan se nesaar aor zainy aap sunen mujhe repppppppppppppppps dene nahi aatey meree taraf se aap is kalaam pe aadhaa darjan ataa farmaa den store me na ho to plz naya order send kar den aap sab ka masood hassaas |
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19th March 2012, 08:44 AM
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Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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