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Khoob sher share kiya madhu ji....

Apne dil ke kuch ehsaas aaj is tarah hai

Main bhi wahin hoon voh bhi wahiN haiN
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Waaah! Waaah! kya khoob ehsaas hain mast ji.....bahut shaandar.



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waaaahhh bahut khub ek se bhad kar ek sher kahe aap sabhi ne.. padh ke dil kush ho gaya bahut..

aaj ka sher..


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Waaaaaahhh! Tabaah jii aur sunita dii bahut khoob sher share kiye aap dono ne....



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Baat karni mujhe mushkil kabhi aisi to na thi..
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waah SuNita ji, Shaad bhai, or Madhu ji bahut ache sher pesh kiye apne..
har ek sher apne aap m kimti hai

aaj ka sher..

Talash sirf sukunn ki hoti hai,
naam rishtey ka chahe kuch bhi ho..

तलाश सिर्फ सुकून की होती हैं,
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Dil waloN ki mehfil me hai kisko sukooN hasil,
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Bhushan joshi
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Aaj ka sher - 10th June 2015, 08:56 AM

Doston,

Aaj ka sher.....

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Waaaaaaaahhhhh....kya khoob sher kahe bhushan ji aur mast ji.....bahut khoob!!



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bahut bahut shukrguzaar hoon aap sabkaa jo aapne mere sher ko pasand kiyaa.......

aur aage badhte hi jaise nazar gayee Bhushan ji aur mast bhai ke sher pe to yaqaayaq hi waahhhh nikal gaya...... bahut khoob sher hue hain.. likhte arhiyee


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Mast bhai, Sameer bhai aur Madhu ji....aap sab ki housala afazai ka tahe sil se shukriya....

Mast ji bohot hi joshila sher likha aapne....aur Sameer bhai mausam jaroor badlega



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[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';479491]Aaj kaa sher.....

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gar tumko taras aa rahaa hai haal par mere,
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"mohabat ke baad mohabat mumkin hai "Faraz"
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