31st August 2003, 11:51 PM
Ashiq ji
Likha to bohot khoob hai aaap ne.
Lekin chand ka dard,meri rai mein,may be aap ki rai aur doosron ki rai alag ho,sirf poetry mein hi ho sakta hai reality mein chand ke paas dil hi nahin hota to dard kahan se hoga.
But whatever description u gave in ur poem that was really nice.
Usey padhte hue ek pal yeh bhool sakta hai insaan ke chaand ka dil nahin hota.
Keep writing n smiling
~~~~~~~Khushiii~~~~~~~
smile n make others also smile
those sparkling eyes
A 100 watt smile
the majestic walk
the cheerful talk
truly charming personality
Guess,thats enough abt me :D
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