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Love Koi pal de wich dil tod jaaNda... - 23rd January 2012, 04:27 PM

Eh duniyaa tan ek mela a
Koi tur jaaNda, koi aa jaaNda

Koi fullaaN naal vi hasda ni
Te koi kNdeaa naal nibhaa jaaNda

Koi khusiyaaN manoNda ni thakdaa
Te koi dukhaa ch umar lnghaa jaaNda

Koi pal de wich dil tod jaaNda
Te koi saaNjh umraa di paa jaaNda !!





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maNzil pr nazar rakhtaa huN
zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !!

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22nd November 2014, 03:50 PM

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Originally Posted by Rajeev Sharma View Post
Eh duniyaa tan ek mela a
Koi tur jaaNda, koi aa jaaNda

Koi fullaaN naal vi hasda ni
Te koi kNdeaa naal nibhaa jaaNda

Koi khusiyaaN manoNda ni thakdaa
Te koi dukhaa ch umar lnghaa jaaNda

Koi pal de wich dil tod jaaNda
Te koi saaNjh umraa di paa jaaNda !!





=====N M======


Rajeev ji.........bahut sahi te sach keha hai tusi ki :

Koi pal de wich dil tod jaaNda
Te koi saaNjh umraa di paa jaaNda

changa lagiya tuhadi punjabi poetry padke.


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Koi pal de wich dil tod jaaNda
Te koi saaNjh umraa di paa jaaNda !!



very Nice, last line very good


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So don't live ur life without love "





   
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