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7th June 2015, 08:44 PM
Fasana likh raha hoon my kudrat k nazarooN ka
Baad muddat k karne chala my dedaar baharooN ka
Rangbirangi titliya, phool, panchi jahaN honge
DekhooN tay kar k aaj my wo rasta pahadoN ka
Us gaon me, log jahaN, ab bhi chat pe sote honge
Chalo ho jaaoN sang unke mai humbistar sitarooN ka
Jamoora aur madari jahaaN ab bhi khel dikhate hain
Ho jaooN mai bhi bhochakka jadoo dekh pitarooN ka
Papihaa aur koyal jahaN barish me geet gateN hoN
Badi aankhooN wala mendhak, ho raja jahaN talabooN ka
JahaaN rupaye paisoN ki, kuch ahmiyat nahi hogi
Na roke muskurane se jahaN girta bhaw bazarooN ka
Jee le, do pal khushi ko tu mohtaaj nahi duaooN ka
Na ho aisa ban k rah jaye, sab kissa ye kitabooN ka
Bhushan Joshi
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7th June 2015, 09:15 PM
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Originally Posted by bhushan
Fasana likh raha hoon my kudrat k nazarooN ka
Baad muddat k karne chala my dedaar baharooN ka
Rangbirangi titliya, phool, panchi jahaN honge
DekhooN tay kar k aaj my wo rasta pahadoN ka
Us gaon me, log jahaN, ab bhi chat pe sote honge
Chalo ho jaaoN sang unke mai humbistar sitarooN ka
Jamoora aur madari jahaaN ab bhi khel dikhate hain
Ho jaooN mai bhi bhochakka jadoo dekh pitarooN ka
Papihaa aur koyal jahaN barish me geet gateN hoN
Badi aankhooN wala mendhak, ho raja jahaN talabooN ka
JahaaN rupaye paisoN ki, kuch ahmiyat nahi hogi
Na roke muskurane se jahaN girta bhaw bazarooN ka
Jee le, do pal khushi ko tu mohtaaj nahi duaooN ka
Na ho aisa ban k rah jaye, sab kissa ye kitabooN ka
Bhushan Joshi
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Janaab tak shaad ka salaam pahuche......
waahhh kyaa kamaal ki ghazal hui hai jaise koi johree nakkshi karke gahno ko is laayaq banaa de ke duniyaa uski chamak me kho jaae....
waaahhhhhh kya kahun ke dil nikal ke baahar aa jaae....
Us gaon me, log jahaN, ab bhi chat pe sote honge
Chalo ho jaaoN sang unke mai humbistar sitarooN ka
Papihaa aur koyal jahaN barish me geet gateN hoN
Badi aankhooN wala mendhak, ho raja jahaN talabooN ka
bahut khoob janaab...... likhte rahiye.....
Shaad......
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7th June 2015, 09:35 PM
Bahut achcha likha hai bhushan ji..wakai gaaon me hee kudrat ke asli nazare dekhne ko milte hain....meri bhi kai tadein taza ho gayiin....
Dher sari daad aur duayein meri taraf se...
Aate rahiye...likhte rahiye...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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9th June 2015, 10:44 PM
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Janaab tak shaad ka salaam pahuche......
waahhh kyaa kamaal ki ghazal hui hai jaise koi johree nakkshi karke gahno ko is laayaq banaa de ke duniyaa uski chamak me kho jaae....
waaahhhhhh kya kahun ke dil nikal ke baahar aa jaae....
Us gaon me, log jahaN, ab bhi chat pe sote honge
Chalo ho jaaoN sang unke mai humbistar sitarooN ka
Papihaa aur koyal jahaN barish me geet gateN hoN
Badi aankhooN wala mendhak, ho raja jahaN talabooN ka
bahut khoob janaab...... likhte rahiye.....
Shaad......
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Sameer bhai adaab,
Aapki housala afzahi sar aankho par....is peshkash ko pasand karne k liye bohot bohot shukriya
Aapka apna
Bhushan
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9th June 2015, 10:47 PM
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Bahut achcha likha hai bhushan ji..wakai gaaon me hee kudrat ke asli nazare dekhne ko milte hain....meri bhi kai tadein taza ho gayiin....
Dher sari daad aur duayein meri taraf se...
Aate rahiye...likhte rahiye...
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Madhu ji namaste,
Aapko ye peshkash pasand aai uparwale ka karam hai......housala afzahi ke liye tahe dil se shukriya
Aapka apna
Bhushan
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9th June 2015, 10:51 PM
Bhushan bhai gaanv ki mitti ki khushboo mil rahi .bahut
acha lilkha aapne ...aise hi aate rahiye aur bazm ki raunak badate
rahiye...sanjay sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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10th June 2015, 07:39 AM
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Fasana likh raha hoon my kudrat k nazarooN ka
Baad muddat k karne chala my dedaar baharooN ka
Rangbirangi titliya, phool, panchi jahaN honge
DekhooN tay kar k aaj my wo rasta pahadoN ka
Us gaon me, log jahaN, ab bhi chat pe sote honge
Chalo ho jaaoN sang unke mai humbistar sitarooN ka
Jamoora aur madari jahaaN ab bhi khel dikhate hain
Ho jaooN mai bhi bhochakka jadoo dekh pitarooN ka
Papihaa aur koyal jahaN barish me geet gateN hoN
Badi aankhooN wala mendhak, ho raja jahaN talabooN ka
JahaaN rupaye paisoN ki, kuch ahmiyat nahi hogi
Na roke muskurane se jahaN girta bhaw bazarooN ka
Jee le, do pal khushi ko tu mohtaaj nahi duaooN ka
Na ho aisa ban k rah jaye, sab kissa ye kitabooN ka
Bhushan Joshi
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Bahut hi umdaa soch aur ehsaas huye hai mere bhai, asaan nahi itni rangineeyon ko yunhi bayaan kar dena. Aapki is rachnaa ko mast ka salaam yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
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10th June 2015, 11:48 AM
bhushan bhai khoob rahi aapki ye rachna
likhte rahen
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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25th June 2015, 09:13 AM
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Bhushan bhai gaanv ki mitti ki khushboo mil rahi .bahut
acha lilkha aapne ...aise hi aate rahiye aur bazm ki raunak badate
rahiye...sanjay sehgal
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SANJAY JI Namaste
Aapka bohot bohot shukriya....aage bhi inayaat banaye rakhiyega
Aapka apna
Bhushan
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25th June 2015, 09:18 AM
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Bahut hi umdaa soch aur ehsaas huye hai mere bhai, asaan nahi itni rangineeyon ko yunhi bayaan kar dena. Aapki is rachnaa ko mast ka salaam yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
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Mast ji Namaste
Aapke comments hamesha hi housala badhate hai....bohot bohot shukriya...inaayat banaye rakhiyega..
Aapka apna
Bhushan
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25th June 2015, 09:20 AM
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bhushan bhai khoob rahi aapki ye rachna
likhte rahen
duaon ke saath
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Jai shri krishna Ishk sahab,
Aapne is koshish ko itni tavajjo di...aapka bohot bohot shukriya...inaayat banaye rakhiyega
Aapka apna
Bhushan
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25th June 2015, 10:18 AM
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Fasana likh raha hoon my kudrat k nazarooN ka
Baad muddat k karne chala my dedaar baharooN ka
Rangbirangi titliya, phool, panchi jahaN honge
DekhooN tay kar k aaj my wo rasta pahadoN ka
Us gaon me, log jahaN, ab bhi chat pe sote honge
Chalo ho jaaoN sang unke mai humbistar sitarooN ka
Jamoora aur madari jahaaN ab bhi khel dikhate hain
Ho jaooN mai bhi bhochakka jadoo dekh pitarooN ka
Papihaa aur koyal jahaN barish me geet gateN hoN
Badi aankhooN wala mendhak, ho raja jahaN talabooN ka
JahaaN rupaye paisoN ki, kuch ahmiyat nahi hogi
Na roke muskurane se jahaN girta bhaw bazarooN ka
Jee le, do pal khushi ko tu mohtaaj nahi duaooN ka
Na ho aisa ban k rah jaye, sab kissa ye kitabooN ka
Bhushan Joshi
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Bhushan ji namaskaar
aapki gazal padkar bahut accha lga, pahadoN ka nazara aur wahan ke logoN ka saadapan yaad aa gya aapki gazal padkar. sabhi sher tareef ke haqdaar hai. dil se daad hazir hai.
Us gaon me, log jahaN, ab bhi chat pe sote honge
Chalo ho jaaoN sang unke mai humbistar sitarooN ka
sabse khaas yeh sher lga...yu hi likhte rhiye aur bazm meiN aate rhiye.
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25th June 2015, 10:27 AM
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Fasana likh raha hoon my kudrat k nazarooN ka
Baad muddat k karne chala my dedaar baharooN ka
Rangbirangi titliya, phool, panchi jahaN honge
DekhooN tay kar k aaj my wo rasta pahadoN ka
Us gaon me, log jahaN, ab bhi chat pe sote honge
Chalo ho jaaoN sang unke mai humbistar sitarooN ka
Jamoora aur madari jahaaN ab bhi khel dikhate hain
Ho jaooN mai bhi bhochakka jadoo dekh pitarooN ka
Papihaa aur koyal jahaN barish me geet gateN hoN
Badi aankhooN wala mendhak, ho raja jahaN talabooN ka
JahaaN rupaye paisoN ki, kuch ahmiyat nahi hogi
Na roke muskurane se jahaN girta bhaw bazarooN ka
Jee le, do pal khushi ko tu mohtaaj nahi duaooN ka
Na ho aisa ban k rah jaye, sab kissa ye kitabooN ka
Bhushan Joshi
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh! Bhushan jee ..
kia baat hai ..... aap ne meHfil ko aala darjay ke kalaam inayat kiya hai ....
bohat khoob janab ... daad qabool kejiye ..
likhte rahiye..
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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25th June 2015, 01:29 PM
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Bhushan ji namaskaar
aapki gazal padkar bahut accha lga, pahadoN ka nazara aur wahan ke logoN ka saadapan yaad aa gya aapki gazal padkar. sabhi sher tareef ke haqdaar hai. dil se daad hazir hai.
Us gaon me, log jahaN, ab bhi chat pe sote honge
Chalo ho jaaoN sang unke mai humbistar sitarooN ka
sabse khaas yeh sher lga...yu hi likhte rhiye aur bazm meiN aate rhiye.
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Dii Namaste,
Aapne is peshkash ko itni tavajjo di.....aapka bohit bohot shukriya....aage bhi inaayat banaye rakheN
Aapka apna
Bhushan
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25th June 2015, 01:32 PM
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh! Bhushan jee ..
kia baat hai ..... aap ne meHfil ko aala darjay ke kalaam inayat kiya hai ....
bohat khoob janab ... daad qabool kejiye ..
likhte rahiye..
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Hassan sahab aadab,
Aapne khaksaar ki peshkash ko saraha aur itni ijjat bakshi ki kya kahoon.....zarranawazi ka tahe dil se shukriya....inayat banaye rakhiyega
Aapka apna
Bhushan
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