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Meri ghazal ka roop nikhara tumne - 21st September 2014, 08:01 PM

Main jo kuch bhi likhta hun ...sab yahin se seekha hai ...aap sab se.
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Zainy ji ne sikhaya ki Adab kya hai ,
Sunita ji ne bataya Sanjeedgi kaisi hai.

Zidd sahib seekha Shayri ka itihaas ,
Mujeeb sahib ne bhi kabhi li thi hamari class.

Sukanya ji se seekhi chandni ki chamak,
Arvind ji se mili tasavur mein likhne ki jhalak.

Shaad ji se churaya kuch shayri ka ilam ,
Hasan ji ne bataya ki kya hai luthf e bazm.

Naaz ji ki shayri se seekha thora jazoon ,.
Shaan ji se thora rishta nibhane ka usool

Madhu ji ne daali meri shayri mein ada ,
Yasmeen ji ke ehsaas pe hue hum fida.

Rajeev ji mela humein likhne ka josh ,
Mast aur Masti.ji ne bin pilaye kiya madhosh.

Ahmad ji se mila English poetry ka gyan ,
Zarra ji se seekha kaise choona aasman.

Aadil Sahib se mila tazafuv aur itehad ,
Bahhut se logon ne milke di humein Daad.

Pari ji se seekhi.pankh farfarne ki chah ,
Anant ji seekha dosti nibhane ka silsila.

Dhaval bhai se seekha khilna kamal ki tarah ,
Milte hain kum humse hai unki alag pehchan.

Aap sab logon ka kate hai dil se dhanyvaad ,
Bus aap logon ki badaulat seekh paya kuch Aaj.


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Main jo kuch bhi likhta hun ...sab yahin se seekha hai ...aap sab se.
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Zainy ji ne sikhaya ki Adab kya hai ,
Sunita ji ne bataya Sanjeedgi kaisi hai.

Zidd sahib seekha Shayri ka itihaas ,
Mujeeb sahib ne bhi kabhi li thi hamari class.

Sukanya ji se seekhi chandni ki chamak,
Arvind ji se mili tasavur mein likhne ki jhalak.

Shaad ji se churaya kuch shayri ka ilam ,
Hasan ji ne bataya ki kya hai luthf e bazm.

Naaz ji ki shayri se seekha thora jazoon ,.
Shaan ji se thora rishta nibhane ka usool

Madhu ji ne daali meri shayri mein ada ,
Yasmeen ji ke ehsaas pe hue hum fida.

Rajeev ji mela humein likhne ka josh ,
Mast aur Masti.ji ne bin pilaye kiya madhosh.

Ahmad ji se mila English poetry ka gyan ,
Zarra ji se seekha kaise choona aasman.

Aadil Sahib se mila tazafuv aur itehad ,
Bahhut se logon ne milke di humein Daad.

Pari ji se seekhi.pankh farfarne ki chah ,
Anant ji seekha dosti nibhane ka silsila.

Aap sab logon ka kate hai dil se dhanyvaad ,
Bus aap logon ki badaulat seekh paya kuch Aaj.


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Waah waah sanjay ji....bahut hi pyare zazbaat se piroyi hai aspki ye nazm...apni nazm me mera naam liya aapne...bahut shukraguzar hoon main...bahut kuch seekhna baki hai aBhi to mujhe...aap sab k samne to student hoon main...........
Yoon hi likhte rahiye...
Khush rahiye.....



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Main jo kuch bhi likhta hun ...sab yahin se seekha hai ...aap sab se.
-----------------------------------------------+-----------------+------------
Zainy ji ne sikhaya ki Adab kya hai ,
Sunita ji ne bataya Sanjeedgi kaisi hai.

Zidd sahib seekha Shayri ka itihaas ,
Mujeeb sahib ne bhi kabhi li thi hamari class.

Sukanya ji se seekhi chandni ki chamak,
Arvind ji se mili tasavur mein likhne ki jhalak.

Shaad ji se churaya kuch shayri ka ilam ,
Hasan ji ne bataya ki kya hai luthf e bazm.

Naaz ji ki shayri se seekha thora jazoon ,.
Shaan ji se thora rishta nibhane ka usool

Madhu ji ne daali meri shayri mein ada ,
Yasmeen ji ke ehsaas pe hue hum fida.

Rajeev ji mela humein likhne ka josh ,
Mast aur Masti.ji ne bin pilaye kiya madhosh.

Ahmad ji se mila English poetry ka gyan ,
Zarra ji se seekha kaise choona aasman.

Aadil Sahib se mila tazafuv aur itehad ,
Bahhut se logon ne milke di humein Daad.

Pari ji se seekhi.pankh farfarne ki chah ,
Anant ji seekha dosti nibhane ka silsila.

Aap sab logon ka kate hai dil se dhanyvaad ,
Bus aap logon ki badaulat seekh paya kuch Aaj.


sanjay sehgal


waah waaahhhhh waaahhhhh janaab aaap to chaa gaye huzoor.... dil khush kar diyaa aapne subah subah..... aaj ki bazm aaapke naam.......... cheersssss


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22nd September 2014, 10:54 AM

waaaaahhh waaaaaahhh waaaaahhh...
Sanjayji...
kya khub sajaayaa hai mehfil ko.....

hamaari dilse duaaeN.......



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Main jo kuch bhi likhta hun ...sab yahin se seekha hai ...aap sab se.
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Zainy ji ne sikhaya ki Adab kya hai ,
Sunita ji ne bataya Sanjeedgi kaisi hai.

Zidd sahib seekha Shayri ka itihaas ,
Mujeeb sahib ne bhi kabhi li thi hamari class.

Sukanya ji se seekhi chandni ki chamak,
Arvind ji se mili tasavur mein likhne ki jhalak.

Shaad ji se churaya kuch shayri ka ilam ,
Hasan ji ne bataya ki kya hai luthf e bazm.

Naaz ji ki shayri se seekha thora jazoon ,.
Shaan ji se thora rishta nibhane ka usool

Madhu ji ne daali meri shayri mein ada ,
Yasmeen ji ke ehsaas pe hue hum fida.

Rajeev ji mela humein likhne ka josh ,
Mast aur Masti.ji ne bin pilaye kiya madhosh.

Ahmad ji se mila English poetry ka gyan ,
Zarra ji se seekha kaise choona aasman.

Aadil Sahib se mila tazafuv aur itehad ,
Bahhut se logon ne milke di humein Daad.

Pari ji se seekhi.pankh farfarne ki chah ,
Anant ji seekha dosti nibhane ka silsila.

Aap sab logon ka kate hai dil se dhanyvaad ,
Bus aap logon ki badaulat seekh paya kuch Aaj.


sanjay sehgal


Sanjay sir ji........................

waaaaaaaaahh wahhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhh
aaj to aapki es shayri ne kamaal hi kamaal kar diyaa hai...........
SDC pr dhoom machaa di hai aapne ...
apni shayri me hamraa bhi naam lene ka bahut bahut shukriyaa
apnaa aashirwaad yuN hi banaaye rakheN...


likhte rahiyegaa...........
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Waah waah sanjay ji....bahut hi pyare zazbaat se piroyi hai aspki ye nazm...apni nazm me mera naam liya aapne...bahut shukraguzar hoon main...bahut kuch seekhna baki hai aBhi to mujhe...aap sab k samne to student hoon main...........
Yoon hi likhte rahiye...
Khush rahiye.....
Shukriya Madhu ji ,

Maine soch ki aap logon ka abhar prakat karun kuch is tarah.

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Sameer ji , Aadeil bhai aur Rajeev Sharma ji ...aap logon la dhanyawad jo.aap
ne humour mein bhi shirkat ki .
Shukriya dosto ..aap teeno ka



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Bilkul Zainy ji....Maine aap ko aur Sameer Shad ko.aur Aur Aru ji ko as a mod kam karte dekha hai for the last few months ...Especially your efforts brought in lot of activity ,hustle
and bustle on SDC ..I salute you all ..

Ye adab wali baat ka context hai Jab Aadeil sahib interview chor ke beech mein se se ja rahrahe tau aap n unse request / protest dono ki ...ki aap ye interviw chor ke nahin ja
sakte..

I a ppreciate your love and dedication for poetry , poets and above all SDC



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Thanks sanjay ji......I always loved this place...and it still means a lot to me...

Mere liye yeh faqr ki baat hai ke yaha ke saare members mujhse bepanaah pyar karte hain aur mere kaam se khush hain...





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Thanks sanjay ji......I always loved this place...and it still means a lot to me...

Mere liye yeh faqr ki baat hai ke yaha ke saare members mujhse bepanaah pyar karte hain aur mere kaam se khush hain...

i am also in the queue mohtarmaa.....................................


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Main jo kuch bhi likhta hun ...sab yahin se seekha hai ...aap sab se.
-----------------------------------------------+-----------------+------------
Zainy ji ne sikhaya ki Adab kya hai ,
Sunita ji ne bataya Sanjeedgi kaisi hai.

Zidd sahib seekha Shayri ka itihaas ,
Mujeeb sahib ne bhi kabhi li thi hamari class.

Sukanya ji se seekhi chandni ki chamak,
Arvind ji se mili tasavur mein likhne ki jhalak.

Shaad ji se churaya kuch shayri ka ilam ,
Hasan ji ne bataya ki kya hai luthf e bazm.

Naaz ji ki shayri se seekha thora jazoon ,.
Shaan ji se thora rishta nibhane ka usool

Madhu ji ne daali meri shayri mein ada ,
Yasmeen ji ke ehsaas pe hue hum fida.

Rajeev ji mela humein likhne ka josh ,
Mast aur Masti.ji ne bin pilaye kiya madhosh.

Ahmad ji se mila English poetry ka gyan ,
Zarra ji se seekha kaise choona aasman.

Aadil Sahib se mila tazafuv aur itehad ,
Bahhut se logon ne milke di humein Daad.

Pari ji se seekhi.pankh farfarne ki chah ,
Anant ji seekha dosti nibhane ka silsila.

Dhaval bhai se seekha khilna kamal ki tarah ,
Milte hain kum humse hai unki alag pehchan.

Aap sab logon ka kate hai dil se dhanyvaad ,
Bus aap logon ki badaulat seekh paya kuch Aaj.


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Main jo kuch bhi likhta hun ...sab yahin se seekha hai ...aap sab se.
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Zainy ji ne sikhaya ki Adab kya hai ,
Sunita ji ne bataya Sanjeedgi kaisi hai.

Zidd sahib seekha Shayri ka itihaas ,
Mujeeb sahib ne bhi kabhi li thi hamari class.

Sukanya ji se seekhi chandni ki chamak,
Arvind ji se mili tasavur mein likhne ki jhalak.

Shaad ji se churaya kuch shayri ka ilam ,
Hasan ji ne bataya ki kya hai luthf e bazm.

Naaz ji ki shayri se seekha thora jazoon ,.
Shaan ji se thora rishta nibhane ka usool

Madhu ji ne daali meri shayri mein ada ,
Yasmeen ji ke ehsaas pe hue hum fida.

Rajeev ji mela humein likhne ka josh ,
Mast aur Masti.ji ne bin pilaye kiya madhosh.

Ahmad ji se mila English poetry ka gyan ,
Zarra ji se seekha kaise choona aasman.

Aadil Sahib se mila tazafuv aur itehad ,
Bahhut se logon ne milke di humein Daad.

Pari ji se seekhi.pankh farfarne ki chah ,
Anant ji seekha dosti nibhane ka silsila.

Dhaval bhai se seekha khilna kamal ki tarah ,
Milte hain kum humse hai unki alag pehchan.

Aap sab logon ka kate hai dil se dhanyvaad ,
Bus aap logon ki badaulat seekh paya kuch Aaj.


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Sanjay ji....aapne jo pyar apni kalam ke madyam se ham sab tak bheja hai, uske liye ham aapke shukar guzaar hai, aapki es poetry ne hame emotional kar diya jo ehsaas aik baar kalam se kaagaz par aa jaate hai, wo hamesha ke liye dil meiN baith jaate hai, aap sab etna maan, sanmaan aur pyar detey hai, ki kai baar bahuttttt busy schdule hone ke baawjood bhi SDC par aana jaroori ho jata hai

en khoobsurat, dil ko chu lene wale ehsaasoN ke liye aap reps ke haqdaar hai

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Mohabbat ki ye inteha ho gayi..
Ki masti me tumko Khuda keh
gaya...



Bas sanjay jee ye lines aayi jubaan pe aapki shayri padkar...aapki mohabbat hai jo aapne ye likha...its amazing
Aru bhai ...

Aap ka jawab ki masti meon tum ko khuda keh baithe ...dil mein ghar kar gaya.
Bhai pyar kabhi ek tarfa nahin hota ..dil ko dil ki rah hoti hai



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Sanjay ji....aapne jo pyar apni kalam ke madyam se ham sab tak bheja hai, uske liye ham aapke shukar guzaar hai, aapki es poetry ne hame emotional kar diya jo ehsaas aik baar kalam se kaagaz par aa jaate hai, wo hamesha ke liye dil meiN baith jaate hai, aap sab etna maan, sanmaan aur pyar detey hai, ki kai baar bahuttttt busy schdule hone ke baawjood bhi SDC par aana jaroori ho jata hai

en khoobsurat, dil ko chu lene wale ehsaasoN ke liye aap reps ke haqdaar hai

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kush rhiye
duaoN ke saath
Sunita ji ..

yeh aap logon ka sneh hai ki aap itna maan dete hain sab ko.
Main oct 2012 se jura SDC se aur yakeen maniye bahut achcha
mehsoos hota hai yahan . Naye logo se jure aur ek virtual family hai
jahan apna ghum , khushi sab share kee jaati hai ..

Main Mr Gaurav ko thanx karna chahunga jinhone kabhi SDC ko conceive
kiya as a forum ...bhai aap ki is effort ke liye main Salute karta hun aapko.

Baki sab mods jo hain ya jo pehle the ..unke hard work ke karn ye site chal
rahi hai ...Aap log ek mali ki tarah is SDC ki bagiya ko seench rahe hain, hum
members tau ka nayibhi kabhi aate hai aur chale jate hai kuch der visit kar ke.

Lastly yeh ek matured logon ki forum hai aur despite some turbulances ye aage
barti rahegi aur unchayion ko chooegi



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Sanjayji the way you honoured us is very touching.......thnx a lot
Are Are Naaz bus yun hi chand lines likhi ..apke nam ke saath
Janoon word ke spelling galat ho gaye ..sorry .. Baki aajkal kum
nazar aa rahi ho ...



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Umdah bayaan kiya hai Sanjay Saheb
maza aagaya
Mujeeb Parwaaz
   
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Umdah bayaan kiya hai Sanjay Saheb
maza aagaya
Mujeeb Parwaaz

Shukriya Parwaz bhai ..bus dil ne kuch.mehsoos vo maine yahan utaar diya



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Sunita ji ..

yeh aap logon ka sneh hai ki aap itna maan dete hain sab ko.
Main oct 2012 se jura SDC se aur yakeen maniye bahut achcha
mehsoos hota hai yahan . Naye logo se jure aur ek virtual family hai
jahan apna ghum , khushi sab share kee jaati hai ..

Main Mr Gaurav ko thanx karna chahunga jinhone kabhi SDC ko conceive
kiya as a forum ...bhai aap ki is effort ke liye main Salute karta hun aapko.

Baki sab mods jo hain ya jo pehle the ..unke hard work ke karn ye site chal
rahi hai ...Aap log ek mali ki tarah is SDC ki bagiya ko seench rahe hain, hum
members tau ka nayibhi kabhi aate hai aur chale jate hai kuch der visit kar ke.

Lastly yeh ek matured logon ki forum hai aur despite some turbulances ye aage
barti rahegi aur unchayion ko chooegi


sanjay ji....SDC aik aisi shayri ki site hai ki es ke saamne kai aur site bani aur gayab ho gye...par SDC jaisi na koi shayri ki site hai na hi kabhi ho sakegi...baaki aap jaise shayar jab tak yahan hai to SDC sabse TOP par rahegi hamesha


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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
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Main jo kuch bhi likhta hun ...sab yahin se seekha hai ...aap sab se.
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Zainy ji ne sikhaya ki Adab kya hai ,
Sunita ji ne bataya Sanjeedgi kaisi hai.

Zidd sahib seekha Shayri ka itihaas ,
Mujeeb sahib ne bhi kabhi li thi hamari class.

Sukanya ji se seekhi chandni ki chamak,
Arvind ji se mili tasavur mein likhne ki jhalak.

Shaad ji se churaya kuch shayri ka ilam ,
Hasan ji ne bataya ki kya hai luthf e bazm.

Naaz ji ki shayri se seekha thora jazoon ,.
Shaan ji se thora rishta nibhane ka usool

Madhu ji ne daali meri shayri mein ada ,
Yasmeen ji ke ehsaas pe hue hum fida.

Rajeev ji mela humein likhne ka josh ,
Mast aur Masti.ji ne bin pilaye kiya madhosh.

Ahmad ji se mila English poetry ka gyan ,
Zarra ji se seekha kaise choona aasman.

Aadil Sahib se mila tazafuv aur itehad ,
Bahhut se logon ne milke di humein Daad.

Pari ji se seekhi.pankh farfarne ki chah ,
Anant ji seekha dosti nibhane ka silsila.

Dhaval bhai se seekha khilna kamal ki tarah ,
Milte hain kum humse hai unki alag pehchan.

Aap sab logon ka kate hai dil se dhanyvaad ,
Bus aap logon ki badaulat seekh paya kuch Aaj.


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Sanjay jee..

Sab se pehle to dair se jawaab dene ke liye bohat muaazrat karta hooN..
kuch masrofiyaat ki bina per haazir na ho saka meHfil meiN..

Sanjay jee.. jis andaaz se aap ne na-cheez ko izzat bakhshi hai,
us ke maiN ta-hayaat aap ka ehsaan-mand rahooN ga...
bohat bohat shukriyaaH.... mohabatoN se nawaaznay ke liye...

tamaam ashaar aik se bhaD kar aik haiN.... reps pending.

DherooN daad meri jaanib se qabool kejiye...

Likhtay rahiye,

Regards,


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Sanjay Sahaab Aadaab ... !

Wallaah Mashaa Allaah janab ... aapne to badi sanjeedgi se sundarta se sabhi ke naam apni kalaam meiN piroye haiN ...

Humaara naam na lene par hum aapko dosh nahi deNge ... par janab humne apni kalaam meiN aapka naam liya toH naaraaz na hoiyega ...

Is khoobsurat SDC guldaste par meri dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez ...



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