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Exclamation Dekho Woh Aaj Chala Gaya......Sab kuch Bhula Gaya....!! - 21st November 2005, 11:50 PM
mere pyaare azeez doston...ummeed hai aap sabhi khairiyat se honge.....aaj phir aap sabki ki khidmat mein naya kalaam pesh karrahi hoon...ummeed hai ki aap sabhi mujhe apni pasand napasand se waqif karayenge....khuda aap sabhi ko khush rakkhe....aap sabhi ki adna si dost....
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mere pyaar ko kaf-e-khaak mein aaj milaa ke chala gaya
dekho mera hum-nawaaz mujhe aaj rulaa ke chala gaya

kitni kasmein aur kitne waade kiye the khudaaya usne
sabhi kuch wo kambakht kaazib aaj bhula ke chala gaya

dhayr saare haseen khwaab dikhaaye the mujhko usne
saare mere jaage armaano ko woh aaj sulaake chala gaya

patjhad mein phool khilane ki ummeed dilayi thi usne
bahaar me saare chaman ko woh aaj jalaakar chala gaya

banaya tha ek din mujhko apna shareek-e-hayaat usne
jate jate woh mujhko apna raqeeb aaj banake chala gaya

jeene ki haseen khwaahish mujhme jagaayi thi usne
jaane kyun woh mujhko aaj zinda dafnaah ke chala gaya...........!!


"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."

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22nd November 2005, 08:31 AM
priy farhana,

Bahot achha likha hai... har shabd mein dard samaaya hai... it's very touching..... keep writting and take care!
   
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hi - 22nd November 2005, 06:36 PM
farru tumne bahut hi pyara or dard se bhara hua likkha hai... har shabd mein ik dard chipaa hai.....


jeene ki haseen khwaahish mujhme jagaayi thi usne
jaane kyun woh mujhko aaj zinda dafnaah ke chala gaya...........!!


har baar ki tarah tumse bhi wahi sawaal poochoongi... yaara aisa pyaar mein kyun hota hai... jo dil deta hai usay dard kyun milta hai....

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wo waqt suhana hota hai

uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
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kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai

jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...

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22nd November 2005, 08:01 PM
Farhana Ji,

Dardbhari aur daad key kaabil...



jeene ki haseen khwaahish mujhme jagaayi thi usne
jaane kyun woh mujhko aaj zinda dafnaah ke chala ga!

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23rd November 2005, 11:10 AM
hi parul...kaisi ho...sorry online nahi aa payi yaar aaj....hey by the way thanks tumhari tareefon ke liye.take care.bye

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23rd November 2005, 12:13 PM
Farhaana ji.. bahoot khoob likha hai but.. mujhe sabhi words ke meaning nahi samajh me aaye.. aap pls hard words ke meaning bata dijiye..its a request

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23rd November 2005, 02:55 PM
MashaALLAH bohot hi acha likha hai, Zabardast hai, bohot pasand aaya aap kaa yeh kalaam.

yoonhi likhtey rahiyeh aur khush rahiye
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23rd November 2005, 09:11 PM
dear shweta....ab pyaar mein aisa kyun hota hai yeh toh mein nahi jaanti par itna samajhti hoon kisika pyaar milna na milna sab kismat ki baat hai......uparwala pehle se hi sab faisla karke baitha rehta hai hum bas uspe amal karte hain...
aapko mera kalaam pasand aaya yeh jaanke badi khushi hui hai........aissi hi aindah bhi apni raye mujhe zaroor batana....ur friend.

"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
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24th November 2005, 08:08 AM
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bahut dard hai.....bahut dard hai.......

kabhi kabhi sochti hooN itna dard hum seh kaise lete haiN...ek wo shakhs hai jo ki humaare haalaatoN se waaqif hi nahi....aur ek hum haiN jo ki itna dard sehne ke baad bhi uske intezaar me rote rehte haiN.....shayad isliye kyunki pyar itna kamzor nahi hota...aur apka pyar sachcha hai....jaanti hooN.......ye 'dard' lafz na jaane kitne diloN ko dasega....pata nahi kab khatm hoga is jahaaN se iska naam.....shayad kabhi nahi.....kyunki ishq ka doosra naam hi dard hai....aur agar ishq nahi mit sakta to dard kaise mitega......
maiN is kalaam pe waah waah nahi karungi.....ye galat hoga.....
jaanti hooN aap kitne dard me jee rahe ho......
pal pal khuda se yahi guzaarish hai....ki wo sachcha ishq karne waaloN ko unke pyar se zaroor milaa de......
maiN apke saath humeshaa rahungi....apne aapko akelaa kabhi mat samajhna.....
bas yunhi muskuraate rehna....
shayad kuch gham kam ho jaaye,

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KasaK......

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25th November 2005, 09:01 PM
priya rajan ji....mujhe khushi hai jaanke ke aapko mera kalaam pasand aaya...yuhin aate rahiyega aur apni pasand napasand batate rahiyega...apna khyaal rakhiyega...bye

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26th November 2005, 03:59 PM
hi didi...

bahut acha likha hai didi apney...

sara dosh is dil ka hai........yeh dil hi hai jo kambakht pyar karney ki gustakhi karta hai........aur bhugatna humko padta hai............bas yehi kahunga ki yeh dil na hota to acha tha.....

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28th November 2005, 05:43 AM
dear garima...jaanke accha laga ke tumhe pasand aaya mera kalaam...jis kisi bhi lafz ke mayne tumhe samajh na aaye ho mujhe pooch lena..apna khyaal rakhna aur meri gali aati rehna..take care...bye

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28th November 2005, 05:45 AM
dear star....mujhe khushi hui jaanke ke tumhe mera kalaam pasand aaya..yuhin apni raaye aage bhi batate rehna...take care...bye

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28th November 2005, 05:47 AM
my dear sweet kasak.....tumhari kahi har baat se mein sehmat hoon......zindagi ise hi kehte hain...
tumne kalaam ko padha aur iske jazbaaton ki kadar ki jaanke accha laga..aati rehna...take care sweets...bye

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28th November 2005, 05:48 AM
my dear ballu....how are you?jaanke khushi horahi hai ke tumne kalaam ko padha aur use pasand bhi kiya...yuhin aate rehna...take care...bye

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28th November 2005, 06:20 AM
Nice farhana....

Bahut khoob likha hai tumne...

Yunhi likhti raho...

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