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3rd September 2014, 01:56 PM

inspired by the wordings of Hakim Naasir saab's sher....

hum to ayyaam kii talkhii ko bhii piiye haNs ke
ghum ko sehne ke liye baadaa-kashii kyuN karte


original sher by Naasir saab....
pii jaa ayyaam kii talkhii ko bhii haNs ke Naasir
ghum ko sehne meN bhii kudrat ne mazaa rakkhaa hai



ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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gaahe-gaahe* pitaa tha maiN shab-e-ghum-o-ruz-e-khair**
haath meN tha baadaa aur wo keh gaye aaj shab-ba-khair

(*often; **nights of sorrow & days of happiness)



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gar zamaane meN kabhii baadaa pe pursish* ho bhii
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3rd September 2014, 09:30 PM

From a drinker to a non drinker

hosh main hai tu kya pata tujhe baada-kashii kya hai

Utha ye jaam-e-sharab fhir batana mehfil-e-shayarii kya hai





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3rd September 2014, 10:23 PM

Mujhe hairaan' na karo tum fusoon' ki aad mein
Mere junoon sey gehra nahin hai koi yahan'...

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3rd September 2014, 10:50 PM

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Utha ye jaam-e-sharab fhir batana mehfil-e-shayarii kya hai
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3rd September 2014, 11:54 PM

Iss tishnagi key shauk hain bilkul nahi saada
Paani ko tarastey bhi maangey hai yeh baada....

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Thanks Nazneen ji...Ji durust farmaya aapne..waisa hee hua tha...


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Dear ye sher khul nahiN paya.....can you pls interpret it misra e oola to samajh agaya saani ka connection clear nahin hai.
sorry dear ..
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Paani ko tarastey bhi maangey hai yeh baada....

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waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh!!!
Sanjayji, kya khub bayaanaat huii hai....

dheroN daad....
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hosh main hai tu kya pata tujhe baada-kashii kya hai

Utha ye jaam-e-sharab fhir batana mehfil-e-shayarii kya hai
waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh ji waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!

kya baat hai, Ananthji......
aap to double centruy kii aur baRh gaye

bahot khub.......
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Waaaaaahhhhhhh! umdaa.......kabhi kabhi hairaan kar dete ho aadil.....dheron dheron daad
Thanks a million dear .........................



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Baada kashi ka daur tha
Bas tha yahan suroor...
Ek baar khudko bhoolney
Aaey the hum zaroor..

Baada kashi key daur mein
Kuch yaar bhi miley
Kuch mayye aur main key khogaye
Aur kuch ko tha guroor....

Baada kashi ka daur ab
Dikhta kahin nahin
Ek boondh jo miley
Humey bhi deejiye huzoor..

Baada kashi ka daur tha
Bas tha yahan suroor.....



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Shukriya Adil bhai,
Kuch padh key,kuch soch key,kuch likh kar seekh raha hoon....Inayat!:-)


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inspired by the wordings of Hakim Naasir saab's sher....

hum to ayyaam kii talkhii ko bhii piiye haNs ke
ghum ko sehne ke liye baadaa-kashii kyuN karte


original sher by Naasir saab....
pii jaa ayyaam kii talkhii ko bhii haNs ke Naasir
ghum ko sehne meN bhii kudrat ne mazaa rakkhaa hai
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gaahe-gaahe* pitaa tha maiN shab-e-ghum-o-ruz-e-khair**
haath meN tha baadaa aur wo keh gaye aaj shab-ba-khair

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sorry dear ..
ye qi'taa tha, magar aadhaa hi post kiya tha

gar zamaane meN kabhii baadaa pe pursish* ho bhii
tum safiir ko kisii mae-khaane meN dhuNdhte aanaa

(*questioning/enquiry)

wo sunaataa hai fasaane us sukoon-o-chaen ke
jo mile usko yahaaN aake wo sunne aanaa

WAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! Aadeil sahab ...sare aashaar behtareen hue hain....aap to lara k test record ki barabari par hain...dheron daad





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Baada kashi ka daur tha
Bas tha yahan suroor...
Ek baar khudko bhoolney
Aaey the hum zaroor..

Baada kashi key daur mein
Kuch yaar bhi miley
Kuch mayye aur main key khogaye
Aur kuch ko tha guroor....

Baada kashi ka daur ab
Dikhta kahin nahin
Ek boondh jo miley
Humey bhi deejiye huzoor..

Baada kashi ka daur tha
Bas tha yahan suroor.....



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kya baat hai, Ananthji......
aap to double centruy kii aur baRh gaye

bahot khub.......
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Zarraa sahab ljjiye is baar ek sher meri taraf se bhi haazir hai

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HotoN pe mere hosh ke daawe to nahi haiN
Aa tere tarke baada ko aasaan bana duN.....
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!... outstanding thinking...

its just superb!...... words are inefficient to praise that verse!


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Baada kashi key daur mein
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Aur kuch ko tha guroor....

Baada kashi ka daur ab
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Humey bhi deejiye huzoor..

Baada kashi ka daur tha
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HotoN pe mere hosh ke daawe to nahi haiN
Aa tere tarke baada ko aasaan bana duN.....
waaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh!!!!
Zainyji,
bahot hi khubsurat sher pesh kiya hai aapne........
dilse dheroN daad.............
DaaoN ke saath,
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Ab hui na koi baat.....bemisaal qita hai dost......dheron daad.
oye!
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arrey! copy paste meN sirf pehla sher post kiya ...
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hamesha sirf sher post kartaa hooN....

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copy paste matlab????? chori ka sher hai kya

yaar fb chat par 2 din pehle msg chhori hun ek bar dekh le pm karne bore horaha hai
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its just superb!...... words are inefficient to praise that verse!
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bahot hi khubsurat sher pesh kiya hai aapne........
dilse dheroN daad.............
DaaoN ke saath,
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Bohat bohat shukriyah dostoN. ..




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jab baap ko bedardi se peet'tey dekha maa ko!
haqeeqat khuli ke baada haraam kyuN hai....


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Hassan Bhai....Lafzon sey qaatil hain aap...waah!

Yeh shayaron' ka hai mahal,Ashaaron ki sultanat...
Har lafz mein ho moti jahan yeh hai wohi Jannat...

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Waaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!! Hassan bhai...der aaye par durust aaye...bohat khoob..dheron daad





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Waaah Hassan Sahab..Masha Allah, Masha Allah....:-)

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vaise shaayaroN ka bhii yehi haal hota hai, jab tak form meN haiN to apnaa fusoon chalaate rehte haiN aur out of form ho gaye to out ho jaate haiN

aur aapke fusoon kaa javaab nahi, aapne kahaa ye aapka fav topic nahi hai phir bhii aap perfect stroke play kar rahe haiN, iis tarah to aap Tendulkar kii category meN aa gaye jo football player bante bante God of Cricket ban gayaa

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Ek request hai zarraji....ap shayad busy haiN ye nazar araha hai aur is month aapki guftugu thread bhi shuru hogai hai shayad apko dono thread par bane rehne pareshani ho to if u want u cn take a brk frm ths thread for a month we'll resume it after you are free its just a suggestion, if its not a problem for u we can continue
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Zarraji hum is thread ka fusooN barkaraar rakhne ki koshish karenge aapko jab bhi waqt mile tab aiyega aapke aane se thread ko zindagii milti rahegii and all the best for your interview InshaAllah hum sab yunhi ek dusre ka sath dete rahenge
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Jee Zarraa saheb aap bikul sahi farma rahe haiN!

Bikul theek faisla hai aap ka! aur meHfil-e-fusoon-e-alfaaz ko hum insha Allah roshan karte raheN ge sab dost mil ke!

Apna khayaal rakhiye ga,

DuaooN ke saath,,
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ji billkul. ye fusoon bilkul nahi rukega aap apnii fursat meN aate rahiyega aur agar aapko vaqt kii paabandii hai to aap har hafte ke bajaaye 10 din kaa vaqt rakhiye har lafz ke liye Just a suggestion

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Yes we all are with you Zarraa sahab...devote more time on your interview yahan ki fikr na kare

doston, thank you sssssooooo much for this amazing fabulous support. aap se ye sun kar waaqayee dil ko behad tasalli milee hai. saath hi ye dekh kar bhi dil ko behisaab khushi huwee ki aap jo keh rahe hain wo kar ke bhi dikha rahe hain. you are walking the talk with great dedication, sincerity and passion. is anjuman ko aap ne kis qadar rangeen, rawaan aur jawaan banaaye rakkha hai, dekhte hi banta hai. taareef aur shukriya ke liye alfaaz kam parh rahe hain.
aap sab ko aur sabhi members ko dheron dheron dilee duaein

aadeil sahab, lagta hai ki ek lafz par 10 din ka aap ka suggestion waise bhi laagoo karna hoga, kyunki har lafz par itnee sargarmee se charcha ho raha hai aur itne saare khoobsurat qalaam aa rahe hain, ki discussion dekh kar main time to time period bardhaata jaaoonga, as required lekin har hafte naya lafz dene mein mujhe koyee dikkat naheen hogi, kyunki mujhe to ek hi baar lafz dena hai, saare hafte us par qalaam kehne ki mehnat to members ko karni hoti, jo wo barhee hi khoobsurti se karte chale ja rahe hain


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