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13th January 2012, 10:31 AM
जब भी कोई मर्ज़ पाया, ला-दवा पाया
जाने ख़ुद से क्यूँ सदा ख़ुद को खफ़ा पाया
है तसव्वुर का ही तेरे कुछ असर ऐसा
मैंने तन्हाई में भी अक्सर मज़ा पाया
शौक़ से लिखवा के लाते हैं मुहब्बत हाँ
इश्क वालों ने तेरे फिर भी, दगा पाया
इस मुहब्बत में मेरी जां तुने क्या पाया
सबने जो पाया, तुने क्या वो ख़ुदा पाया
जिस्मो जां से अब कोई रिश्ता नहीं, फिर भी
क़ल्ब में दौरा-ए-खूं क्यूँ रवा पाया
'मस्त' हैरां सा दिखे, दुन्या तेरी देख कर
दर्द-ए-दिल हासिल फ़क़त, दिल बे-सदा पाया
jab bhi koi marz paaya, la-dava paaya
jaane khud se kyu sada khud ko khafa paaya
hai tasavvur ka hi tere kuchh asar aisa
maine tanhaayee meN bhi aksar maza paaya
shauq se likhva ke laate haiN muhabbat haaN
ishq waaloN ne tere phir bhi, daga paaya
is muhabbat meN meri jaaN tune kya paaya
sabne jo paaya, tune kya vo khuda paaya
jismo jaaN se ab koi rishta nahi, phir bhi
qalb meN daura-e-khooN kyu rava paaya
'mast' hairaaN sa dikhe, dunyaa teri dekh kar
dard-e-dil haasil faqat, dil be-sada paaya
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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13th January 2012, 12:26 PM
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जब भी कोई मर्ज़ पाया, ला-दवा पाया
जाने ख़ुद से क्यूँ सदा ख़ुद को खफ़ा पाया
है तसव्वुर का ही तेरे कुछ असर ऐसा
मैंने तन्हाई में भी अक्सर मज़ा पाया
शौक़ से लिखवा के लाते हैं मुहब्बत हाँ
इश्क वालों ने तेरे फिर भी, दगा पाया
इस मुहब्बत में मेरी जां तुने क्या पाया
सबने जो पाया, क्या तुने वो ख़ुदा पाया
जिस्मो जां से अब रिश्ता नहीं, फिर भी
क़ल्ब में दौरा-ए-खूं क्यूँ रवा पाया
'मस्त' हैरां सा दिखे, दुन्या तेरी देख कर
दर्द-ए-दिल हासिल फ़क़त, दिल बे-सदा पाया
jab bhi koi marz paaya, la-dava paaya
jaane khud se kyu sada khud ko khafa paaya
hai tasavvur ka hi tere kuchh asar aisa
maine tanhaayee meN bhi aksar maza paaya
shauq se likhva ke laate haiN muhabbat haaN
ishq waaloN ne tere phir bhi, daga paaya
is muhabbat meN meri jaaN tune kya paaya
sabne jo paaya, kya tune vo khuda paaya
jismo jaaN se ab rishta nahi, phir bhi
qalb meN daura-e-khooN kyu rava paaya
'mast' hairaaN sa dikhe, dunyaa teri dekh kar
dard-e-dil haasil faqat, dil be-sada paaya
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wah wah Vikram ji
bahot khub
har sher lajawab
daad qabul farmayen sahab
Regards
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Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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13th January 2012, 12:46 PM
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Originally Posted by vikramjethi
जब भी कोई मर्ज़ पाया, ला-दवा पाया
जाने ख़ुद से क्यूँ सदा ख़ुद को खफ़ा पाया
है तसव्वुर का ही तेरे कुछ असर ऐसा
मैंने तन्हाई में भी अक्सर मज़ा पाया
शौक़ से लिखवा के लाते हैं मुहब्बत हाँ
इश्क वालों ने तेरे फिर भी, दगा पाया
इस मुहब्बत में मेरी जां तुने क्या पाया
सबने जो पाया, क्या तुने वो ख़ुदा पाया
जिस्मो जां से अब रिश्ता नहीं, फिर भी
क़ल्ब में दौरा-ए-खूं क्यूँ रवा पाया
'मस्त' हैरां सा दिखे, दुन्या तेरी देख कर
दर्द-ए-दिल हासिल फ़क़त, दिल बे-सदा पाया
jab bhi koi marz paaya, la-dava paaya
jaane khud se kyu sada khud ko khafa paaya
hai tasavvur ka hi tere kuchh asar aisa
maine tanhaayee meN bhi aksar maza paaya
shauq se likhva ke laate haiN muhabbat haaN
ishq waaloN ne tere phir bhi, daga paaya
is muhabbat meN meri jaaN tune kya paaya
sabne jo paaya, kya tune vo khuda paaya
jismo jaaN se ab rishta nahi, phir bhi
qalb meN daura-e-khooN kyu rava paaya
'mast' hairaaN sa dikhe, dunyaa teri dekh kar
dard-e-dil haasil faqat, dil be-sada paaya
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13th January 2012, 02:59 PM
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जब भी कोई मर्ज़ पाया, ला-दवा पाया
जाने ख़ुद से क्यूँ सदा ख़ुद को खफ़ा पाया
है तसव्वुर का ही तेरे कुछ असर ऐसा
मैंने तन्हाई में भी अक्सर मज़ा पाया
शौक़ से लिखवा के लाते हैं मुहब्बत हाँ
इश्क वालों ने तेरे फिर भी, दगा पाया
इस मुहब्बत में मेरी जां तुने क्या पाया
सबने जो पाया, क्या तुने वो ख़ुदा पाया
जिस्मो जां से अब रिश्ता नहीं, फिर भी
क़ल्ब में दौरा-ए-खूं क्यूँ रवा पाया
'मस्त' हैरां सा दिखे, दुन्या तेरी देख कर
दर्द-ए-दिल हासिल फ़क़त, दिल बे-सदा पाया
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YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
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13th January 2012, 07:08 PM
Kya baat... Kya Baat... Kya baat...
Bhai wah....lafz aaise niakle ki bas... aapne meffil loot lee janaab...
Daaad Qabool kare...
Regard,
Omi " बन्दा "
Quote:
Originally Posted by vikramjethi
जब भी कोई मर्ज़ पाया, ला-दवा पाया
जाने ख़ुद से क्यूँ सदा ख़ुद को खफ़ा पाया
है तसव्वुर का ही तेरे कुछ असर ऐसा
मैंने तन्हाई में भी अक्सर मज़ा पाया
शौक़ से लिखवा के लाते हैं मुहब्बत हाँ
इश्क वालों ने तेरे फिर भी, दगा पाया
इस मुहब्बत में मेरी जां तुने क्या पाया
सबने जो पाया, क्या तुने वो ख़ुदा पाया
जिस्मो जां से अब रिश्ता नहीं, फिर भी
क़ल्ब में दौरा-ए-खूं क्यूँ रवा पाया
'मस्त' हैरां सा दिखे, दुन्या तेरी देख कर
दर्द-ए-दिल हासिल फ़क़त, दिल बे-सदा पाया
jab bhi koi marz paaya, la-dava paaya
jaane khud se kyu sada khud ko khafa paaya
hai tasavvur ka hi tere kuchh asar aisa
maine tanhaayee meN bhi aksar maza paaya
shauq se likhva ke laate haiN muhabbat haaN
ishq waaloN ne tere phir bhi, daga paaya
is muhabbat meN meri jaaN tune kya paaya
sabne jo paaya, kya tune vo khuda paaya
jismo jaaN se ab rishta nahi, phir bhi
qalb meN daura-e-khooN kyu rava paaya
'mast' hairaaN sa dikhe, dunyaa teri dekh kar
dard-e-dil haasil faqat, dil be-sada paaya
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14th January 2012, 02:45 PM
bahut badhiyaa.................vikram jee .bahut -2 acchhee ghazal banee hai.
lutf aa gayaa padhkar..............
jismo jaaN se ab rishta nahi, phir bhi
qalb meN daura-e-khooN kyu rava paaya
ye sher to mujhe khaas bahut hi khaaaas lagaa.
aapko is khoobsurat peshqash par dili daad o mubaraqbaad.
khush rahiye likhte rahiye.....................tc
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14th January 2012, 11:29 PM
hai tasavvur ka hi tere kuchh asar aisa
maine tanhaayee meN bhi aksar maza paaya
shauq se likhva ke laate haiN muhabbat haaN
ishq waaloN ne tere phir bhi, daga paaya
BOHAT KHOOB VIKRAM JI!!........
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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16th January 2012, 11:44 AM
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wah wah Vikram ji
bahot khub
har sher lajawab
daad qabul farmayen sahab
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praneeta ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya jo aapko is nacheez ka ye khaak qalaam pasaNd aaya....tareef aur reps ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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16th January 2012, 11:47 AM
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MASHALLAH Vikram Ji........... Boht KHubsurat Ahsasaat Or Khoob Kalaam HUa Hai........ DHeron Daad Qabool Farmayen........... Kuch Ashaar Pr Baad Me Baat Krun Ga......... Aap Ke Takhayyul Ki Parwaaz Boht Buland Mili Is Kalaam Me.......... Acha Likha Hai.......... Likhtay Rahen......... Sada Khush Rahen..........
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ahmad saheb ye to aapki mohabbat hai jo aap is qadar zarra nawaaz ho gaye....
aapki daad sar maathe...
aur aap kinhiN ashaar pe kuchh baat karna chaah rahe haiN to janaab na cheez ko aapke dobaara aane ka intzaar rahega...
waqt dene ka bahut bahut shukriya...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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18th January 2012, 11:31 AM
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WaaH ! Vikram Bhai !! Kyaa Khoob Khayaalaat Le Kar Aaye HaiN ! Behad Umdaa Ghazal Huii Hai Janaab ... Laajawaab Lab O Lehzaa ... Umdaa Peshkash ... Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!
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behad shukriya janaab naresh saheb is qadar taareef ka...
aapki daad o mubaaraqbaad sar maathe...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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18th January 2012, 11:32 AM
omi ji is qadar khuloos se zarra nawaazi ka manmoon huN....
aapko mera likha pasaNd aaya ye jaan kar mujhe behad khushi hui...
aaiNda bhi saath de kar hausala afzaayee karte raheN....
mukhlis,
vikram 'mast'
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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27th January 2012, 10:51 AM
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bahut badhiyaa.................vikram jee .bahut -2 acchhee ghazal banee hai.
lutf aa gayaa padhkar..............
jismo jaaN se ab rishta nahi, phir bhi
qalb meN daura-e-khooN kyu rava paaya
ye sher to mujhe khaas bahut hi khaaaas lagaa.
aapko is khoobsurat peshqash par dili daad o mubaraqbaad.
khush rahiye likhte rahiye.....................tc
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bahut bahut shukriya uffaq saheb...
aapki daad o mubaaraqbaad sar maathe...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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27th January 2012, 10:56 AM
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जब भी कोई मर्ज़ पाया, ला-दवा पाया
जाने ख़ुद से क्यूँ सदा ख़ुद को खफ़ा पाया
है तसव्वुर का ही तेरे कुछ असर ऐसा
मैंने तन्हाई में भी अक्सर मज़ा पाया
शौक़ से लिखवा के लाते हैं मुहब्बत हाँ
इश्क वालों ने तेरे फिर भी, दगा पाया
इस मुहब्बत में मेरी जां तुने क्या पाया
सबने जो पाया, तुने क्या वो ख़ुदा पाया
जिस्मो जां से अब कोई रिश्ता नहीं, फिर भी
क़ल्ब में दौरा-ए-खूं क्यूँ रवा पाया
'मस्त' हैरां सा दिखे, दुन्या तेरी देख कर
दर्द-ए-दिल हासिल फ़क़त, दिल बे-सदा पाया
jab bhi koi marz paaya, la-dava paaya
jaane khud se kyu sada khud ko khafa paaya
hai tasavvur ka hi tere kuchh asar aisa
maine tanhaayee meN bhi aksar maza paaya
shauq se likhva ke laate haiN muhabbat haaN
ishq waaloN ne tere phir bhi, daga paaya
is muhabbat meN meri jaaN tune kya paaya
sabne jo paaya, tune kya vo khuda paaya
jismo jaaN se ab koi rishta nahi, phir bhi
qalb meN daura-e-khooN kyu rava paaya
'mast' hairaaN sa dikhe, dunyaa teri dekh kar
dard-e-dil haasil faqat, dil be-sada paaya
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Yunhi likhte rahiYee
aapka apnaa
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27th January 2012, 02:35 PM
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जब भी कोई मर्ज़ पाया, ला-दवा पाया
जाने ख़ुद से क्यूँ सदा ख़ुद को खफ़ा पाया
है तसव्वुर का ही तेरे कुछ असर ऐसा
मैंने तन्हाई में भी अक्सर मज़ा पाया
शौक़ से लिखवा के लाते हैं मुहब्बत हाँ
इश्क वालों ने तेरे फिर भी, दगा पाया
इस मुहब्बत में मेरी जां तुने क्या पाया
सबने जो पाया, तुने क्या वो ख़ुदा पाया
जिस्मो जां से अब कोई रिश्ता नहीं, फिर भी
क़ल्ब में दौरा-ए-खूं क्यूँ रवा पाया
'मस्त' हैरां सा दिखे, दुन्या तेरी देख कर
दर्द-ए-दिल हासिल फ़क़त, दिल बे-सदा पाया
[B] jab bhi koi marz paaya, la-dava paaya
jaane khud se kyu sada khud ko khafa paaya
hai tasavvur ka hi tere kuchh asar aisa
maine tanhaayee meN bhi aksar maza paaya
shauq se likhva ke laate haiN muhabbat haaN
ishq waaloN ne tere phir bhi, daga paaya
is muhabbat meN meri jaaN tune kya paaya
sabne jo paaya, tune kya vo khuda paaya
jismo jaaN se ab koi rishta nahi, phir bhi
qalb meN daura-e-khooN kyu rava paaya
'mast' hairaaN sa dikhe, dunyaa teri dekh kar
dard-e-dil haasil faqat, dil be-sada paaya [/B
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1st February 2012, 11:56 AM
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Originally Posted by zainy
hai tasavvur ka hi tere kuchh asar aisa
maine tanhaayee meN bhi aksar maza paaya
shauq se likhva ke laate haiN muhabbat haaN
ishq waaloN ne tere phir bhi, daga paaya
BOHAT KHOOB VIKRAM JI!!........
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bahut bahut shukriya zainy ji......................
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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1st February 2012, 07:57 PM
jab bhi koi marz paaya, la-dava paaya
jaane khud se kyu sada khud ko khafa paaya
ab is ki koi kaise tareef kar paaayega.. masha Allah kyaa khoob khayaal haiN..
jismo jaaN se ab koi rishta nahi, phir bhi
qalb meN daura-e-khooN kyu rava paaya
Bahot nayaapan liye hue rahaa aaapka ye kalaaam Vikram saahab... waaahhh kahungaa to kam hi hogaa magar mujhe is ki tareef karne ka aur koi tareeqa nazar nahi aaa raha hai... Ummeed hai nacheez ki Daad qabool farmaaenge.... likhte rahiye...
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5th February 2012, 04:43 PM
Wwwwaaaahhhhhh!!!!! Kamaal ki ghazal kahee hai Vikram ji. Itne zaheen aur gehre khayalaat kis masti aur ada se bayaan kite hain ki koyee wah wah kahe aur daad diye baghair ruk nahin sakta.
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6th February 2012, 11:46 AM
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Originally Posted by mast
Bahut khoob ehsaas hai sahab !!
Yunhi likhte rahiYee
aapka apnaa
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zarra nawaazi aur hausala afzai ka bahut bahut shukruya mast saheb...
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6th February 2012, 05:36 PM
शौक़ से लिखवा के लाते हैं मुहब्बत हाँ
इश्क वालों ने तेरे फिर भी, दगा पाया
kyaa khoob khayal bayaan kiya hai .. vikram bhai
bahut khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai ... umda
dil se daad hazir hai ... yuun hee likhte rahiye ... radhe radhe
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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9th February 2012, 12:34 PM
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Originally Posted by Radhika_2
Ji Bhaut Sunder...........................
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bahut bahut shukriya radhika ji.............
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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9th February 2012, 12:35 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
jab bhi koi marz paaya, la-dava paaya
jaane khud se kyu sada khud ko khafa paaya
ab is ki koi kaise tareef kar paaayega.. masha Allah kyaa khoob khayaal haiN..
jismo jaaN se ab koi rishta nahi, phir bhi
qalb meN daura-e-khooN kyu rava paaya
Bahot nayaapan liye hue rahaa aaapka ye kalaaam Vikram saahab... waaahhh kahungaa to kam hi hogaa magar mujhe is ki tareef karne ka aur koi tareeqa nazar nahi aaa raha hai... Ummeed hai nacheez ki Daad qabool farmaaenge.... likhte rahiye...
Shaad...
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shaad saheb sab aap ki mohabbat hai...aapki aamad aur tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya janaab...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
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12th February 2012, 03:32 PM
Umda peshkash, Vikram Bhaiya...!
Matlaa & 4th sher khaas pasand aaye hameiN...!
Apna khayaal rakhna, ok...?
Ashirvaad ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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16th February 2012, 01:12 PM
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Originally Posted by zarraa
Wwwwaaaahhhhhh!!!!! Kamaal ki ghazal kahee hai Vikram ji. Itne zaheen aur gehre khayalaat kis masti aur ada se bayaan kite hain ki koyee wah wah kahe aur daad diye baghair ruk nahin sakta.
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janaab zarraa saheb mujhe bahut khushi hoti hai agar padhne wala vo padhe jo alfaazoN se pare ho, mujhe is baat ka ahsaas hota hai ki aap unhi padhne waaloN meN se haiN...aapki aamad ka aur taareef ka bahut bahut shukriya saheb...yuNhi hausala badhaate rahiyega...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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16th February 2012, 01:13 PM
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
शौक़ से लिखवा के लाते हैं मुहब्बत हाँ
इश्क वालों ने तेरे फिर भी, दगा पाया
kyaa khoob khayal bayaan kiya hai .. vikram bhai
bahut khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai ... umda
dil se daad hazir hai ... yuun hee likhte rahiye ... radhe radhe
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bahut bahut shukriya rajinder ji.......
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
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25th March 2012, 01:08 PM
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Umda peshkash, Vikram Bhaiya...!
Matlaa & 4th sher khaas pasand aaye hameiN...!
Apna khayaal rakhna, ok...?
Ashirvaad ke saath
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danny bhaiya bahut bahut shukriya....
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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21st September 2012, 03:38 PM
hai tasavvur ka hi tere kuchh asar aisa
maine tanhaayee meN bhi aksar maza paaya
very true ..............
yaadon se hi dil bhar jata hai kabhi kabhi
take care
:-ek bujhaa hua dhumil
palak jhapakte hi jo aankh se hu'aa ojhal
woh lauT kar nahiiN aayaa gaye dinoN ki taraH
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22nd September 2012, 02:52 PM
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Originally Posted by vikramjethi
[CENTER]जब भी कोई मर्ज़ पाया, ला-दवा पाया
जाने ख़ुद से क्यूँ सदा ख़ुद को खफ़ा पाया
है तसव्वुर का ही तेरे कुछ असर ऐसा
मैंने तन्हाई में भी अक्सर मज़ा पाया
शौक़ से लिखवा के लाते हैं मुहब्बत हाँ
इश्क वालों ने तेरे फिर भी, दगा पाया
इस मुहब्बत में मेरी जां तुने क्या पाया
सबने जो पाया, तुने क्या वो ख़ुदा पाया
जिस्मो जां से अब कोई रिश्ता नहीं, फिर भी
क़ल्ब में दौरा-ए-खूं क्यूँ रवा पाया
दर्द-ए-दिल हासिल फ़क़त, दिल बे-सदा पाया[/CENTER]
jab bhi koi marz paaya, la-dava paaya
jaane khud se kyu sada khud ko khafa paaya
hai tasavvur ka hi tere kuchh asar aisa
maine tanhaayee meN bhi aksar maza paaya
shauq se likhva ke laate haiN muhabbat haaN
ishq waaloN ne tere phir bhi, daga paaya
is muhabbat meN meri jaaN tune kya paaya
sabne jo paaya, tune kya vo khuda paaya
jismo jaaN se ab koi rishta nahi, phir bhi
qalb meN daura-e-khooN kyu rava paaya
'mast' hairaaN sa dikhe, dunyaa teri dekh kar
dard-e-dil haasil faqat, dil be-sada paaya
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