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18th August 2014, 11:08 PM
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shehar meiN badhati khusk-saali ko dekhte, parindoN ka aik tolaa sir joD ke betha hai! num aankhoN se kar raha hai aah-o-fugaaN, 'Qafas' meiN do waQt ka rizQ to naseeb ho jata tha!  tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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19th August 2014, 12:15 AM
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mujhe personally jo ehsaas shayari mein sab se zyada pasand hai wo hai irony ka ehsaas (only a personal opinion, not prescriptive at all) ... aur aap ke qalaam mein is qadar dil ko cheer dene waali irony hai, jo ise bahaut khaas bana deti hai meri nigaah mein. alfaaz ke taur pe bhi, "khushk-saali" aur "num aankhon" ki irony bhi khoob lagi !! WAAAH !! Dheron daad Hassan bhai !! mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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19th August 2014, 12:18 PM
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zarraaa bhai main kyaa kahun.... aap apne aap me ek misaal hain, SDC kee is bazm ki shaan hain.... aapke dono sher bemisaal hain aur ek se badh kar ek lutf samete hue hain... meri jaanib se laakhon daad aapki khidmat me pesh hain..... lihte rahiye... ehsaas baanTte rahiye... |
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19th August 2014, 12:25 PM
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19th August 2014, 12:28 PM
Zarraa saahab.... Qafas ke lihaaz se ek adnaa si koshish dekhiye.....
ik khooon me bheege qafas ko dekh kar sochaa kiye, Mar mar miTey kitne parinde zindagee ke waaste.....!! Shaad..... |
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19th August 2014, 12:44 PM
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bas aapki mohabbat aur hausla afzaaee hi hai jo hum meN itna jazbaa taamir karta hai...  aapka har lamha mamnoon hooN....ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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19th August 2014, 01:00 PM
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pehle sher pe aapne bilkul sahi farmaayaa... jaise aapne hamaare dil kii baat paRh li ho.. dusre sher meN.. maiN samajhta tha ki qafas qafas-aaraa samjhe pe doubt zaroor hoga  ye sher ko ek aam aadmi kii nazar se paRhenge to bilkul saamaanya baat baahar aati hai... hum jab nayaa ghar kharidte haiN to humse zyaadaa jazbaati hamaare dost aur qaribii ho jaate haiN .. aur hamaare saath wo bhi use sajaane lagte haiN... ab iisme kaii baateN kahi hai..ki vaise bhii mere liye to ye nayaa aashyaanaa ek saraab (illusion) hai.. magar kuch aise bhii log hote haiN jo ki use iis liye sajaane aaye haiN kyuN ki unko rashk hai mujhse aur wo samajhte haiN ki ye mere liye qafas banne wala hai.. per maiN to jaantaa hi hooN ki ye mera azaab hai. maine koshish kii hai sher ke maanee bataane kii.. aapke sujhaav ka intezaar rahega... aapka maskoor..... Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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19th August 2014, 01:14 PM
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aapki itnii muhabbat aur hamaarii adnaa si koshish pe paziraii ka kiis qadar se shukriya adaa karooN?...... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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19th August 2014, 01:15 PM
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Ufaqsaab, ek se ek laajawaab aashaar..... dheroN dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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19th August 2014, 01:19 PM
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aapka teh-e-dil se shukr guzaar hooN itnii muhabbat aur hausla-afzaaee ke liye.. duaoN ke saath... Adil Quote:
aapki itnii paziraaii aur itnii muhabbat ke to hum qaayal haiN bas yuN hi saath dete rahiyega.... aapka mamnoon hooN.... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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19th August 2014, 01:21 PM
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hassanbhai, dono aashaar behad hi khubsurat haiN... dheroN dheroN daad.... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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19th August 2014, 01:23 PM
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Shoaibbhai, bahot hi sahej si baat magar khub gehraai se bayaaN kii hai..... dheron daad-o-mubaarakbaad ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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kya khub aashaar pesh kiye haiN aapne.... ek se badHkar ek sher hai.... aur aapke sher meN hum-safar aur raah-bar se aapne ek relation banaayii bhii thiiN haalaanki ye sher ko thoDa kamzor banaa rahaa tha jise aapne ba-khubii lutf badHaa diya hai.... daad hi daad aapko hamaari jaanibse... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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19th August 2014, 01:46 PM
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kya khubsurat fasafaanaa khayaal pesh kiya hai, Shoaibbhai..... kya adaaegii hai, kya manzar hai, kya tegh hai iis sher meN....... dheroN dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad hamari jaanibse qubul farmaaiye ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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19th August 2014, 01:48 PM
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bahot hi aalaa khayaal bayaaN kiya hai, Hassanbhai...... dheroN dheroN daad............. ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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19th August 2014, 05:52 PM
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khaak lafzooN ko iss qadar wuQQat bakhshne ke liye be-had mamnooN hoon! aap ki tareef aur daad sir aankhoN per! Milte rahiye ga,, DuaooN ke saath, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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19th August 2014, 05:55 PM
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dil ki attaH gehraiyoN se manooN hooN! Milte rahiye,, DuaooN ke saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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19th August 2014, 05:57 PM
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Daad aur hausla afzaai liye bohat bohat shukriyaaH! Milte rahiye ga, DuaooN ke saath, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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19th August 2014, 06:11 PM
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19th August 2014, 06:14 PM
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19th August 2014, 06:16 PM
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19th August 2014, 06:23 PM
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khoon mein bheega qafas, mar mitey zindagi ke waaste ... an iconic statement !!! ye sher sulagta hua shola bhi hai, aansoo ka nam qatra bhi hai aur dard bhari khoon ki dhaar bhi hai !!! is par anginat daad nisaar Shaad bhai !!! mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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19th August 2014, 06:28 PM
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19th August 2014, 06:28 PM
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bas daad hi daad.. because I'm speechless! tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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19th August 2014, 06:31 PM
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19th August 2014, 08:32 PM
ae insaan! hum haiN aadi-e-qafas, azaadi nahi humeN matloob!
yeHi guzar basar hai apna! bahir nikle to mar na jayeN gay!?? matloob : desire tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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19th August 2014, 08:53 PM
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19th August 2014, 09:00 PM
doston ... waise to lafz "qafas" par guftagoo ka aaj aakhiri din tha, par abhi tak qafas mein aashaar ke panchhee pharhpharhaa rahe hain
ye bahaut hi khushi ki baat hai kyunki is se ye baat zaahir hoti hai ki kis shiddat shauq aur junoon se mashq e sukhan chal rahi hai to is lafz par ghaur karne ka silsila 1 din aur bardha dete hain, yaani kal 20th Aug raat 9:00 PM India time ya 3:30 PM GMT tak .... tab tak qafas mein parwaaz jaari rakhiye yaaran-e-chaman mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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20th August 2014, 10:20 AM
na chaman rahaa na qafas rahe ye parinde aaj yateem hue
mere saamne ye ujaR gayaa mere saamne wo tabaah hue ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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20th August 2014, 11:00 AM
par katartaa kyuN hai ae saiyaad tu
jab qafas hi hai thikaanaa ban gayaa sajaane do qafas-aaraa ko phir aaj qafas meN bhii zaraa si taazgii ho qafas-ba-dosh* hi to saiyaad ka azaab rahaa mera to aaj qafas-zaad** phir khitaab rahaa (*cage on shoulder, **born in cage) ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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20th August 2014, 11:19 AM
tiiliyaaN ginte ginte chaman tang hue
waaN bayaabaaN hue yaaN qafas zang hue ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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20th August 2014, 12:28 PM
shor-e-parind sun, ki kahiN ittihaam* mera
leke qafas na aaye ho saiyaad baaG meN (*suspicion) ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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20th August 2014, 12:39 PM
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Hassanbhai, kya khub sher taamir kiya hai....... daad qubul kijiye... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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20th August 2014, 01:43 PM
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20th August 2014, 01:49 PM
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20th August 2014, 07:19 PM
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wahhh.. bohat khoob. tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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20th August 2014, 08:07 PM
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Aur waah ! Kya zabardast sher kaha aap ne ! Agar ghar ka raasta chhoot jaaye to qafas ke hi aasre rehte hain ... aur kab qafas qafas hote hue bhi ghar ban jaata hai !!! Bahaut khoob !!! Dher saari daad !! aur ye bhi bahaut achchha hua ki bilkul in the "nick of time" aap ka khoobsurat sher humein mil gaya ... kyunki bas 1 ghante mein hum agle lafz par jaane waale hain mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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Welcome back Naaz! |
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Welcome back Naaz! -
20th August 2014, 08:24 PM
kuch haseeN khwaab saja bethe haiN tere sung ae koyal!
yeH qafas ab humeN jaaN se bhi piyaara lagne laga hai! tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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