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Shab-e-firaaq mere dil maiN... - 15th January 2003, 09:24 PM

Shab-e-firaaq mere dil maiN aa ke jab guzray
mere qalb per kayee haadsay ajab guzray

haiN tere haath se peenay ke muntazir saaqi
ke mae kaday se bhi guzray to tishna lab guzray

tere karam ki ummeedoN se thak chuka ae dost!
koi sitam mere qalb-e-huzeeN pe ab guzray

Bara jata hai daaman be shumaar khusyoN se
dar-e-habib se hum jab bhi be talab guzray

unheeN ki yadoN maiN khoya hua tha maiN HAIDER
na janay mujh se daaman bacha ke wo kab guzray?
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15th January 2003, 09:26 PM

Salamz to all..

i posted this ghazal in "Dard bhari shayeri" section but when i read that own poetry is posted here so i moved this ghazal here.
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MaiN is bazm maiN naya hooN. apni shayeri pesh karne ki sa'aadat hasil kar raha hooN aur aap ki aaraa ka mutamanni hooN. agar koi ustaad or maher-e-fan-e-sher-o-shayeri meri ghazliat ki islah kar de to bohat meherbani hogi..

Ye bhi batata chalooN ke maiN beher-o-auzaan ko koi ilm nahin rakhta aur ghazal ko wazan maiN laanay ke tips jan'na cha'hata hooN..

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