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' Jab Log Meri Kavita Ko Gandagi Kaheinge...! ' ( Kuch Alag Khayaal ) - 17th February 2006, 02:21 AM

Kehte ho to, tere ishk ko dil ki lagi kaheinge
Douniya waale magar iss ko dillagi kaheinge

Toumhari in khamoshiyon ko kya naam doun
Sochte hein ki hum inhein naraazgi kaheinge

Teri baahon main dam torne ki foorsat mile to
Eissi ek maut ko hum anan.t zindagi kaheinge

Meri hansi mazaak ko toumne chochala*samjha
Jo hamein jaante hein iss ko bandagi kaheinge

Shangkaaon ne tumhein kya se kya banaa diya
Teri eissi beemaari ko hum deewangi kaheinge

Mera intizaar na karna, ghoDe bech kar so jaana
Do sapne tere nind ki keemat mehengi kaheinge

Bahout zor se toum bhi apni taaliyan bajaa dena
Jab log Mushkil ki iss kavita ko gandagi kaheinge


Chochala : Flirtation



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai


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17th February 2006, 05:12 PM

Kehte ho to, tere ishk ko dil ki lagi kaheinge
Douniya waale magar iss ko dillagi kaheinge

Toumhari in khamoshiyon ko kya naam doun
Sochte hein ki hum inhein naraazgi kaheinge

Waaaahhh.. kya baat kahi hai bhaiya...


Teri baahon main dam torne ki foorsat mile to
Eissi ek maut ko hum anan.t zindagi kaheinge

Meri hansi mazaak ko toumne chochala*samjha
Jo hamein jaante hein iss ko bandagi kaheinge

Beautifullly expressed...


Shangkaaon ne tumhein kya se kya banaa diya
Teri eissi beemaari ko hum deewangi kaheinge

Beautifulll...

Bhaiya,

Kaafi time baad aapko hindi me padha...padhkar bahut accha laga... jo ashaar mujhe acche lage woh oopar highlight kiye hain... Meri daad to aapke saath hi hai... likhte rahiye...


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17th February 2006, 05:32 PM

Toumhari in khamoshiyon ko kya naam doun
Sochte hein ki hum inhein naraazgi kaheinge



khamoshi narazgi nahi
dard hai dil ka...
jo wyakt hota nahi..
shabdo se
jinhe nahi baandh paayi
wo kadi hai...

meri khamoshi...
kuchh kehti hai...
wo dil laao..
jo sun sake mujhe...
fir ...
meri khamoshi ka naam..
de dena...


sorry sir ji...

aise hi kuchh.. hehehehehe... mai thoda vishay se bhatak gayi thi...

haan aapne bahoot achha likha hai.. so sweet.. mujhe saare asaar achhe lage.. lekin ye upar ka asaar chubh gaya..

great work..

have nice time
Judwa


Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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17th February 2006, 09:11 PM

Kehte ho to, tere ishk ko dil ki lagi kaheinge
Douniya waale magar iss ko dillagi kaheinge


Wah.. Bahot khoob!

Toumhari in khamoshiyon ko kya naam doun
Sochte hein ki hum inhein naraazgi kaheinge


Hmmm.. Yeh bhi sahi hain.

Teri baahon main dam torne ki foorsat mile to
Eissi ek maut ko hum anan.t zindagi kaheinge


oohoooooo... kya keh diya hain aapne!

Meri hansi mazaak ko toumne chochala*samjha
Jo hamein jaante hein iss ko bandagi kaheinge


Nice... (Agree with thoughts)

Shangkaaon ne tumhein kya se kya banaa diya
Teri eissi beemaari ko hum deewangi kaheinge


...Wow...

Mera intizaar na karna, ghoDe bech kar so jaana
Do sapne tere nind ki keemat mehengi kaheinge


Dear....... what is "ghoDe bech kar so jaana"?

Bahout zor se toum bhi apni taaliyan bajaa dena
Jab log Mushkil ki iss kavita ko gandagi kaheinge


Hmmmm. Hope this is not your thoughts!


My dearest Danny (ji)

Beautiful expression. Read something amazing and awesome creation after sometime. Your words are perfect and explaining your pain. Your creation is fantastic, you write so good dear. bas itni prathna hain ki tum aaise hi likhte raho... aur inn khyaalon ke baare me mujhe kuch nahi kehna, because you know what I have to say. take good care of yourself and be happy always, yes it's an order.

Have a nice day...

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19th February 2006, 12:49 AM

Bhaiya,

Kaafi time baad aapko hindi me padha...padhkar bahut accha laga... jo ashaar mujhe acche lage woh oopar highlight kiye hain... Meri daad to aapke saath hi hai... likhte rahiye...


Chote Bhaiya...!

Khushi houi ki tum ko yaha kavita bhi pasand aayi...! Younhi
saath dete rehna...!

Take care...ok ?

With Blessings



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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Re: ' Jab Log Meri Kavita Ko Gandagi Kaheinge...! ' ( Kuch Alag Khayaal ) - 19th February 2006, 01:09 AM

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Kehte ho to, tere ishk ko dil ki lagi kaheinge
Douniya waale magar iss ko dillagi kaheinge

Toumhari in khamoshiyon ko kya naam doun
Sochte hein ki hum inhein naraazgi kaheinge

Teri baahon main dam torne ki foorsat mile to
Eissi ek maut ko hum anan.t zindagi kaheinge

Meri hansi mazaak ko toumne chochala*samjha
Jo hamein jaante hein iss ko bandagi kaheinge

Shangkaaon ne tumhein kya se kya banaa diya
Teri eissi beemaari ko hum deewangi kaheinge

Mera intizaar na karna, ghoDe bech kar so jaana
Do sapne tere nind ki keemat mehengi kaheinge

Bahout zor se toum bhi apni taaliyan bajaa dena
Jab log Mushkil ki iss kavita ko gandagi kaheinge


Chochala : Flirtation

agar log aapki is kavita ko gandagi kahenge toh hum unse kabhi baat nahi karenge...kyunki aap mere favorites me se ek ho ji......
accha likkha hai aapne har baar ki tarah par mujhe aapko english me padhna zyada pasand hai.


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Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."


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danny ji
aap jab bhi likhte hain bus kamal karte hain .
wo english hai to sunder ho jati hai hindi mai bus dhmaal karte hain
keep writing
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28th October 2010, 09:15 PM

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Kehte ho to, tere ishk ko dil ki lagi kaheinge
Douniya waale magar iss ko dillagi kaheinge

Toumhari in khamoshiyon ko kya naam doun
Sochte hein ki hum inhein naraazgi kaheinge

Teri baahon main dam torne ki foorsat mile to
Eissi ek maut ko hum anan.t zindagi kaheinge

Meri hansi mazaak ko toumne chochala*samjha
Jo hamein jaante hein iss ko bandagi kaheinge

Shangkaaon ne tumhein kya se kya banaa diya
Teri eissi beemaari ko hum deewangi kaheinge

Mera intizaar na karna, ghoDe bech kar so jaana
Do sapne tere nind ki keemat mehengi kaheinge

Bahout zor se toum bhi apni taaliyan bajaa dena
Jab log Mushkil ki iss kavita ko gandagi kaheinge


Chochala : Flirtation

Danny Bhai ..... aaj aapki iss puraani peshkash ko padh ke bahut luft aaya hai... har ashaar ka mood badha rangeen rakha aapne ... iss dilkash andaaz ko tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...

Jo nahi padha aur dekha .... aage aur bhi dekhunga aur padhunga ... aapke bahumuhkhi andaaz ko .... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ...




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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Kehte ho to, tere ishk ko dil ki lagi kaheinge
Douniya waale magar iss ko dillagi kaheinge

Toumhari in khamoshiyon ko kya naam doun
Sochte hein ki hum inhein naraazgi kaheinge

Teri baahon main dam torne ki foorsat mile to
Eissi ek maut ko hum anan.t zindagi kaheinge

Meri hansi mazaak ko toumne chochala*samjha
Jo hamein jaante hein iss ko bandagi kaheinge

Shangkaaon ne tumhein kya se kya banaa diya
Teri eissi beemaari ko hum deewangi kaheinge

Mera intizaar na karna, ghoDe bech kar so jaana
Do sapne tere nind ki keemat mehengi kaheinge

Bahout zor se toum bhi apni taaliyan bajaa dena
Jab log Mushkil ki iss kavita ko gandagi kaheinge


Chochala : Flirtation

ji bhaut khoob...................


Toumhari in khamoshiyon ko kya naam doun
Sochte hein ki hum inhein naraazgi kaheinge

Teri baahon main dam torne ki foorsat mile to
Eissi ek maut ko hum anan.t zindagi kaheinge



Radhika

Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye

Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye


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Kehte ho to, tere ishk ko dil ki lagi kaheinge
Douniya waale magar iss ko dillagi kaheinge

Toumhari in khamoshiyon ko kya naam doun
Sochte hein ki hum inhein naraazgi kaheinge

Teri baahon main dam torne ki foorsat mile to
Eissi ek maut ko hum anan.t zindagi kaheinge

Meri hansi mazaak ko toumne chochala*samjha
Jo hamein jaante hein iss ko bandagi kaheinge

Shangkaaon ne tumhein kya se kya banaa diya
Teri eissi beemaari ko hum deewangi kaheinge

Mera intizaar na karna, ghoDe bech kar so jaana
Do sapne tere nind ki keemat mehengi kaheinge

Bahout zor se toum bhi apni taaliyan bajaa dena
Jab log Mushkil ki iss kavita ko gandagi kaheinge


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kishore bhai
radhe radhe

kya khoob likha hai dil se daad
duaon ke saath


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Kehte ho to, tere ishk ko dil ki lagi kaheinge
Douniya waale magar iss ko dillagi kaheinge

Toumhari in khamoshiyon ko kya naam doun
Sochte hein ki hum inhein naraazgi kaheinge

Teri baahon main dam torne ki foorsat mile to
Eissi ek maut ko hum anan.t zindagi kaheinge

Meri hansi mazaak ko toumne chochala*samjha
Jo hamein jaante hein iss ko bandagi kaheinge

Shangkaaon ne tumhein kya se kya banaa diya
Teri eissi beemaari ko hum deewangi kaheinge

Mera intizaar na karna, ghoDe bech kar so jaana
Do sapne tere nind ki keemat mehengi kaheinge

Bahout zor se toum bhi apni taaliyan bajaa dena
Jab log Mushkil ki iss kavita ko gandagi kaheinge


Chochala : Flirtation


Danny Bhaiya..aapki es purani gazal par aaj nazar gye, bahut accha lga aapko arse baad padna, aapki gazal dekhi to es par purane members ke reply bhi padey...ab yeh member nazar hi nahi aate...sab apni apni zindgi meiN masroof hai...par yahan se door hote hue bhi apni gazaloN ke madyam se ya apni review se aaj bhi hamare paas hai...!

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Danny Bhaiya..aapki es purani gazal par aaj nazar gye, bahut accha lga aapko arse baad padna, aapki gazal dekhi to es par purane members ke reply bhi padey...ab yeh member nazar hi nahi aate...sab apni apni zindgi meiN masroof hai...par yahan se door hote hue bhi apni gazaloN ke madyam se ya apni review se aaj bhi hamare paas hai...!

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thnx a lot sunita ji .. aapki wajah se ye behad khubsurat gazal hume padhne ko mili warna kahin chhupi hi reh jati...


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Kehte ho to, tere ishk ko dil ki lagi kaheinge
Douniya waale magar iss ko dillagi kaheinge

Toumhari in khamoshiyon ko kya naam doun
Sochte hein ki hum inhein naraazgi kaheinge

Teri baahon main dam torne ki foorsat mile to
Eissi ek maut ko hum anan.t zindagi kaheinge

Meri hansi mazaak ko toumne chochala*samjha
Jo hamein jaante hein iss ko bandagi kaheinge

Shangkaaon ne tumhein kya se kya banaa diya
Teri eissi beemaari ko hum deewangi kaheinge

Mera intizaar na karna, ghoDe bech kar so jaana
Do sapne tere nind ki keemat mehengi kaheinge

Bahout zor se toum bhi apni taaliyan bajaa dena
Jab log Mushkil ki iss kavita ko gandagi kaheinge


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bhttttt hi khubsurat aur maasomm si peshkash hai ye aapki amanush ji.... har sher me ek alag sa ehsaas hai... shikayat aur mahobbat ka... bht maza aaya padhkar...


Aaj fir dil shayar hona chahta hai..
Dard lafzon me pirona chahta hai..


   
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