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Pyaar ki woh dhun sunaa jaa jaana -
25th June 2015, 06:10 PM
Doston,
Ek arse ke baad Ishq ki mehfil ka rukh kiya hai. Fir wahi kucch kacche pakke khayal, technical correctness se door rehkar likhe hain. Ummeed hai aapko acche lagenge. Pyaar ki woh dhun sunaa jaa jaana Ishq ki baarish me bhigaa jaa jaana Aahista se aakar chhoo jaa dil ko Ehsaas apnaa aakar ke karaa jaa jaana Band palken kar apni chupa le mujhko Bicchadne ka too sawal hi mitaa jaa jaana Naa dar duniya se usne to jalna hi Seene se mujhe khulke lagaa jaa jaanaa Tere pyaar ko hoon tadhpaa ek umr poori Aakar ke meri pyaas too bujhaa jaa jaana Ek pal ke liye too mil mujhe pehle ki tarah main tujhme, too mujhme samaa jaa jaana Fakt hansi se teri saans meri chalti thhi Too fir se mujhe jeenaa sikhaa jaa jaana Dil ne mere tasveer teri taamiir ki hai Muskuraa use mukammal banaa jaa jaana Pyaar ki woh dhun sunaajaa jaana Seene se mujhe ek baar lagaa jaa jaana Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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26th June 2015, 08:51 AM
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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26th June 2015, 10:08 AM
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behad haseen naazuq aur ishq mee doobe kalaam ke liye merii jaanib se aapko bahut bahut mubaarakbaad aur dher sarii daad kaaa nazraanaa..... aate rahiye aur yunhi mahfil ko sajaatee rahiye shaad...... |
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27th June 2015, 12:24 AM
Pulkit ji, Bahaut pyara likha hai aapne. Bahaut simple Aur Bahaut ishq mai dooba hua..padh kar Bahaut accaha laga. Poora kalaam hi kamaal ka hai but Yeh bas dil ko chu gaya.
Band Kar palkhein chupa le mujh ko Bichadne ka sawaal hi tu Miya ja janna Yuhin likhte rahen. Shukriya! |
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27th June 2015, 05:45 AM
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Shukriya Madhu ji, Bahut khoobsurati se saraaha hai aapne meri koshish ko aur mujhe bahut accha laga. Ji nacheez ke saath ek dikkat hai ke likhta hoon to haal-e-dil varna likh nahin paata. Yunhi saath deti rahiye, koshish zaari rahegi. Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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27th June 2015, 05:46 AM
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Glad that you liked the effort... Yun hi saath dete raho. Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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27th June 2015, 05:49 AM
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Dekhiye main aapko anaamika tab tak kahoonga jab tak naam naa jaan loon. Humaare parivaar me koi anonymous nahin rehta hai. Baat aati hai shayri ki to saraahne ke liye shukriya. Aapko jo sher pasand aaya woh mere dil ke sabse kareeb hai. Chaliye, aati rahiye, apna khayal rakhiye aur duaon me humen yaad rakhiye. Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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27th June 2015, 07:09 AM
Pulkit bhaiya
Namaste Saadagee se bhari aapki koshish dil mein utar gayiin...likhte rahiye... dil se daad Aapka Dhaval |
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27th June 2015, 09:42 AM
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Dear Pulkit...Ishq ki mehfil aur ishq ki hi baat ho to baat mukamal si lagti hai...aaj aapki es gazal ko padkar yeh baat sabit ho gye  har lafz meiN ishq har sher meiN ishq, ishq aur bas ishq....hame aapka yeh ishqiyaa mijaaz pasand aaya. yu hi likhtey rho aur khush rho...aur bazm meiN chaar chaand lagate rho. accha lag rha hai aapko regular sdc par aate dekh kar. pyar aur duaoN ke saath diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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28th June 2015, 07:55 AM
Dear Dhaval,
Tumhe ehsaas acche lage, jaankar khushi huwi... Yun hi haunsla badhate raho. Sunita di, Sabse pehle to aap aap se neeche aakar tum yaa too pe aiye, aap me doori lagti hai. Aapko ishqiya mijaaz accha laga to main aage bhi is mijaa pe likhne ki koshish karoonga. Apna khayal rakhiye  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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28th June 2015, 10:14 AM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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28th June 2015, 04:14 PM
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Koshish zaari rahegi Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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29th June 2015, 06:04 PM
Wah pulkit waah
Romantic....romantic.....cheesy cheesy.... Sarika |
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