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Kuch Rangh bharay thay Khuwabon Ke Magar ! !
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Smile Kuch Rangh bharay thay Khuwabon Ke Magar ! ! - 23rd May 2013, 11:53 AM

Kitab E Zindagi main mainay
Kuch Rangh bharay thay Khuwabon Ke
Magar !
Na janay kaisi hawa chali k
panne ulat’tay gay …. Aur
Fikr k haashaiy khinchtay hi chalay gay
Woh Alfaz …….
Jo khushi ka ehsas ban kar mehaknay lagtay thay
Un main say kuch !
Dhundhlay ho chalay
Aur kuch mit chalay
Ab qalam bhi saath nahi deta
K phir say wahi likhawat ho
K phir say wahi Sajhawat ho
lagta hay !
Ab to yeh kitab sada khali hi rahain gi ! ! !




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aksar bahte hue aansu bhi bat kiya karte hain...!"



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Lightbulb 23rd May 2013, 12:32 PM

ahsaas hame acche lge.....par kya yeh aapki apni likhi hue poetry hai...kyuki maine yeh poetry aur kai sites par padi hai...alag alag logon ne post ki hue hai...!

agar koi poetry aapki apni likhi hue na ho to Please us poetry ke neeche "Writer ka naam" ya phir "NOT MINE" jaroor mention kijiye, taaki asli writer ko uska sahi credit mil sake...jo asal meiN uska haqdaar hai...so pls take care


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24th May 2013, 10:12 AM

Agree with Sunita dee.... aage se is baat ka aap dhyaan rakkhenge mujhe ummeed hai....

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28th May 2013, 04:51 PM

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ahsaas hame acche lge.....par kya yeh aapki apni likhi hue poetry hai...kyuki maine yeh poetry aur kai sites par padi hai...alag alag logon ne post ki hue hai...!

agar koi poetry aapki apni likhi hue na ho to Please us poetry ke neeche "Writer ka naam" ya phir "NOT MINE" jaroor mention kijiye, taaki asli writer ko uska sahi credit mil sake...jo asal meiN uska haqdaar hai...so pls take care


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Ji bhul gaya tha is rule.. bahut waqt bad aaya hu yanha so ab yad rahga thnx


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