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Kis fikr kis khayaal me........ - 16th October 2005, 12:51 PM
dostoN.....
ye ghazal Sheheryaar sahab ki hai..main pehli baaar unke kalaam se ru-ba-ru hui hooN to socha yahaaN post kar dooN....

Kis fikr kis khayaal me khoyaa hua sa hai,
dil aaj teri yaad ko bhoolaa hua sa hai,

gulshaN me is tarah ki kab aayi thi fasl-e-gul,
har phool apni shaakh se tootaa hua sa hai,

chal-chal ke thak gaya hai ki manzil nahi koii,
kyuN waqt har ek mod par thehraa hua sa hai,

kya haadsaa hua hai jahaaN me ki aaj phir,
chehraa har ek shakhs ka utraa hua sa hai,

nazraana tere husn ko kya deiN ki apne paas,
le-de ke ek dil hai jo tootaa hua sa hai,

pehle tha jo bhi tha aaj magar kaarobaar-e-ishq,
duniya ke kaarobaar se miltaa hua sa hai,

lagtaa hai uski baatoN se ye 'SheheryaaR' bhi,
yaaroN ke ittefaaq ka maaraa hua sa hai......


shukriya,
KasaK......

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17th October 2005, 09:37 PM
Fabulous.... thank you kasak for sharing this beautiful creation... It's very nicely written... take care!
   
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18th October 2005, 08:24 AM
hi di......kaise ho aap??
aapko pasand aaye na......mujhe bhi......
thanx 4 coming....
luv,
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19th October 2005, 02:34 PM
bahut khoob ghazal hai ye bas itna hi kahunga ki bahut pasand aayi aapki ye ghazal hume.bas aap yunhi share karte rahiye.

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19th October 2005, 04:31 PM
thanx lucky.......
i read it somewhere .....so thought of sharing.....
i luved its aashaars a lott........
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20th October 2005, 05:28 AM
hi sweets.thanks for sharing this beautiful ghazal....take care

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22nd October 2005, 08:41 AM
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hi sweets.thanks for sharing this beautiful ghazal....take care

hey di.....kaise ho aap?
theek ho na......well..apko achchi lagi....thanx,
KasaK......

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Re: Kis fikr kis khayaal me........ - 22nd October 2005, 06:19 PM
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dostoN.....
ye ghazal Sheheryaar sahab ki hai..main pehli baaar unke kalaam se ru-ba-ru hui hooN to socha yahaaN post kar dooN....

Kis fikr kis khayaal me khoyaa hua sa hai,
dil aaj teri yaad ko bhoolaa hua sa hai,

gulshaN me is tarah ki kab aayi thi fasl-e-gul,
har phool apni shaakh se tootaa hua sa hai,

chal-chal ke thak gaya hai ki manzil nahi koii,
kyuN waqt har ek mod par thehraa hua sa hai,

kya haadsaa hua hai jahaaN me ki aaj phir,
chehraa har ek shakhs ka utraa hua sa hai,

nazraana tere husn ko kya deiN ki apne paas,
le-de ke ek dil hai jo tootaa hua sa hai,

pehle tha jo bhi tha aaj magar kaarobaar-e-ishq,
duniya ke kaarobaar se miltaa hua sa hai,

lagtaa hai uski baatoN se ye 'SheheryaaR' bhi,
yaaroN ke ittefaaq ka maaraa hua sa hai......


shukriya,
KasaK......

Main Aaj pahli bar shayri-e-ustaad mai aya aur mene tumahari post padi achi lagi aur main reply kar diya hehehehheee............



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24th October 2005, 03:26 PM
hehehe.....thanx ravi jee......
aap aaye yahi bahut hai....
shukriya,
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24th October 2005, 04:03 PM
kya haadsaa hua hai jahaaN me ki aaj phir,
chehraa har ek shakhs ka utraa hua sa hai,

nazraana tere husn ko kya deiN ki apne paas,
le-de ke ek dil hai jo tootaa hua sa hai,


Kasak,

Khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai tumne....The above shers were just 2 good... thx for sharing...Do keep bringing them... TC

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24th October 2005, 06:42 PM
hmmmm....bhaiya....ye sher to mujhe bhi bade pasand aaye....
thanx ki aap aaye....
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8th January 2013, 02:19 PM
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chal-chal ke thak gaya hai ki manzil nahi koii,
kyuN waqt har ek mod par thehraa hua sa hai,

kya haadsaa hua hai jahaaN me ki aaj phir,
chehraa har ek shakhs ka utraa hua sa hai,

nazraana tere husn ko kya deiN ki apne paas,
le-de ke ek dil hai jo tootaa hua sa hai,
Aadaab !
waisy to poori ghazal hi behtreen hai mager yeh asha'ar bahut achy lagy .

umda intekhaab hai apka , shukriyah hamieN bhi mauqa diya aapne shehryaar saHb ke is nageeny se ru ba ru hony ka

youN hi meHfil ko ronaq rakhieN .
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