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EnigmA's Poetry -
4th November 2010, 10:16 PM
Staring at the white smog,
Wish I stay inside this fog! Wanna stay in this cocoon, Wish this moment don't end soon! This world's never gonna last, But can never forget the past! For whom I laid into the dirt, They were the first ones to hurt! Not thinking of srarting a-new, What's passed was my last avenue! For me now every color's grey, In the shadows is my stay! |
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7th December 2010, 07:27 PM
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Jus' one word..................Superb!! KEEP WRITING.......  Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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11th December 2010, 08:22 PM
all d best..........nicely written
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Thanks! -
12th December 2010, 11:53 PM
Zainy Jee, Once Again A Massive Thank You! For Your Appreciation. A Big Thank You! to Mr.Nick1983 As Well For His Well Wishing And Comment!
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19th July 2013, 02:18 PM
For whom I laid into the dirt,
They were the first ones to hurt! GREAT . keep writing n sharing. |
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