 |
|
|
|
|
 |
 |
>> har insaan ko insaan ka pyar nahi milata.. |
 |
|
 |
|
(#1)
|
|
अंदाज़-ए-बयां शायराना है
  
Offline
Posts: 1,173
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Bilaspur
Rep Power: 28
|
>> har insaan ko insaan ka pyar nahi milata.. -
21st June 2009, 02:38 PM
Har raat ko chand ka sringar nahi milata
Har dali ko phooloN ka pyar nahi milata Armaan bahut hoote hain iss dil meiN par Har kisi ko man chaha sansar nahi milata KashtiyaN to bahut phirti haiN lehroN meiN Har kashti ko kinarooN ka pyar nahi milata AshiyaN bikhar jate haiN halke jhokooN se Har kisi ko chin sa atut deewar nahi milata Ye jeeavan khatooN se bhara ek gulab haiN Yaha har gale ko phooloN ka haar nahi milata Geet bahut hote hain hontooN par jeevan ke Har geet ko mukmmal saaz or dhar nahi milata himmat tut jati hain,fariyad tukra dii jati hain yaha har kisi ko Bhagwan ka dawar nahi milata Ye zindagi chhalawa haiN, ek dikhawa haiN Yaha kabi kisi ko ek sachaa yaar nahi milata Humne bhi yehi soch kar sabr kar liya haiN OMi k yaha har insaan ko insaan ka pyar nahi milata bY-- OMi Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein....... |
|
|
|
 |
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#2)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 310
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: gujrat
Rep Power: 0
|
21st June 2009, 07:21 PM
wow omi.................. kyaa likha hai tussi ne........ dil khush kar ditta
mazaa aa gayi......... very nice keep up ur work |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#3)
|
|
|
अंदाज़-ए-बयां शायराना है
Offline
Posts: 1,173
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Bilaspur
Rep Power: 28
|
22nd June 2009, 01:14 AM
thx alot gal...
 tumhari tareef dekh k energy aa jati hai..lol  keep doing job of Glucose..the energy drink.. haha..lol  well.. thx again..swetieee.. Quote:
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein....... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#4)
|
|
rks
Offline
Posts: 42
Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: pune
Rep Power: 0
|
23rd June 2009, 05:35 PM
Hey bhai..
wow... u wrote awesumly.... gr8 man... u hav done superb jOb.. i really love it.. keep it up my bro.. ur the best...  |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#5)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 7
Join Date: Mar 2009
Rep Power: 0
|
23rd June 2009, 06:37 PM
Har kisi ko man chaha sansar nahi milata
omi, aapne sahi kahaa he... yahaa har kisiko apni chaaht ka kaha kuchh miltaahe jo milataahe use hi chaahat banana padtahe. Aakhen kholu to chehra tumhara ho, Band karu to sapna tumhara ho, Maar bhi jau to koi gam nahi, Agar kafan ke badle parchhae tumhari ho. ...............pinki |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#6)
|
|
An Incomplite Dream
Offline
Posts: 3,017
Join Date: Mar 2009
Rep Power: 30
|
23rd June 2009, 10:47 PM
Hey Bhai how are you?
Kya Baat hai Omi Bhai chupke se aate ho aur gazal post kerke nikal jate ho... Chalte chalte dekha to socha kuch main hi mutalba ker lun is kalam ka.... yeh meri Rai hai bura na lage isliye pahele hi bata raha huN..... Har raat ko chand ka sringar nahi milata Har dali ko phooloN ka pyar nahi milata Bhaiyeh sher ke maynii hi sahi nahi bante.......... mere khayal se har raat ko chand ka sringar milta hai aur shayad kuch kuch hi raaten aisi hogi jisko chand naseb nahi hota... Aur dusrii line bhi gala hui mere khayal se...... kyunki shayad hi jahan mein aisa koi ped ho jis per koi phool hi nahi khilta ho... may be ek adh ho sakta hai but sabhi nahi......... Armaan bahut hoote hain iss dil meiN par Har kisi ko man chaha sansar nahi milata SuperB bahut achcha laga............ KashtiyaN to bahut phirti haiN lehroN meiN Har kashti ko kinarooN ka pyar nahi milata Sher phir galat hua hai may be agar aap yahan sabhi bhi use karte to baat nahi banti coz sabhi kashtiyan kinaoon se hi lehron per jaate hai... AshiyaN bikhar jate haiN halke jhokooN se Har kisi ko chin sa atut deewar nahi milata Achcha hai thoda aur achcha ho sakta tha... Ye jeeavan khatooN se bhara ek gulab haiN Yaha har gale ko phooloN ka haar nahi milata Kya baat hai bahut khoob daad.......... Geet bahut hote hain hontooN par jeevan ke Har geet ko mukmmal saaz or dhar nahi milata First line thik hai but second wali mein gadbad... geet ko saaz aur taal main to tolte hua dekha hai but dhar mein  paheli baar aur aisa tola bhi jata hai paa nahi..himmat tut jati hain,fariyad tukra dii jati hain yaha har kisi ko Bhagwan ka dawar nahi milata BHai Bhagwan ka dwar har kisi ke liye khula hai aur shayad Bhagwan se mangne ke liye Bhagwan ke dwar jana itna bhi zaruri nahi hai...... Ye zindagi chhalawa haiN, ek dikhawa haiN Yaha kabi kisi ko ek sachaa yaar nahi milata Bhai yahan dono bhi baaton se sehmat hun, but yeh to taqdeer ki baat hai.. Humne bhi yehi soch kar sabr kar liya haiN OMi k yaha har insaan ko insaan ka pyar nahi milata Hmm Bhai yeh to shayad munkin bhi nahi ke har insaan ko insaan ka pyar mile bhi... To Bhai aapki puri post ka jawab to aap dekh chuke Bhai main bus yehi kehna chahata hun ke koyibhi sher likho to usko reality main bhi tolo ke woh kina sahi hai... Bus aur kya kahun.. aage se dhyan rakhana... Apna khayal rakhana..... Khuda Hafez.. 
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#7)
|
|
अंदाज़-ए-बयां शायराना है
Offline
Posts: 1,173
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Bilaspur
Rep Power: 28
|
24th June 2009, 03:11 PM
hey sameer...
dude, m really glad 2 hav ur comment... y shud i feel bad yaar.. tumhare comment dekh k lagta haiN..tumne bahut dhyan se pada hai ye.. chalo kisi ne to real commet add kiya... wo bi bIna tarifoo k.. i really like it dude.. and yeh... i really like to answers ur crities bt later.. 1st i wud like to ask u One que..\ ek word "Sansar " ka meaning kya hain... i mean wot do u undersatnd by dis word.. ? Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein....... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#8)
|
|
|
An Incomplite Dream
Offline
Posts: 3,017
Join Date: Mar 2009
Rep Power: 30
|
24th June 2009, 03:57 PM
Quote:
Ok "Sansar" ke meaning ab main kya batauN bhai........ Yeh word hi aisa hai jisme har zara sama jata hai......... Choti soch walon ke liye yeh kewal apni ghar grahsti hi usi ko woh sansaar manta hai... but usse jyad sonchne wala apni soch se pruthvi ko sansar kahenga.... But ek shayar ki soch main Sansar agar kahun to har cheez zameen aasman, chand tare, suraj sayaare sabhi sansar ka hissa hai avaM......... Shayar manav danav Bhagwan ko bhi sansar ka hissa bana leta hai................. Aab aapki soch kya kehti hai isper aapka sansar nirbhar hai........ Waise aapke is sawal ka raaz main thada late jana hun agar aap aapki is post per jo main khamiyan nikali hai uske mutabik jaanne chahte hai to phir bhai aapka yeh sawal hi galat hai........ kyunki main aapke sansar main khami nahi dikayi hai aapke bayan karne main khami dikhayi hai....... Ok dude chill out.... don't think about that if you think it's wroung....... Waise bhi kabhi kisi ki soch ek si nahi hoti...
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#9)
|
|
|
अंदाज़-ए-बयां शायराना है
Offline
Posts: 1,173
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Bilaspur
Rep Power: 28
|
26th June 2009, 11:18 PM
Naa naa buddy... y shud i ???
tension aur mera koi connection nahi hain.. lolzzactully tension tum ne leli.. anyways... same as be4, i wud lyk 2 say thx 2 u.. for dis real comment.. " TariFe insaaN ko kamiYa chupaNe ka mauka deti haiN, aur critics inSaan ko kamiya pehchaan k aage badne Ka " so it was really nice 2 hav ur comment.. Quote:
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein....... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#10)
|
|||||
|
अंदाज़-ए-बयां शायराना है
Offline
Posts: 1,173
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Bilaspur
Rep Power: 28
|
26th June 2009, 11:54 PM
Hey Sameer,
now its tym 2 ans ur thots.. Quote:
yaar baat to tumne ek dam pate ki kahi.. bt ek baat kaho.. "Glass meiN half paNi hain aur glass half khali meiN kya farkh haiN ?? " nothing naa.. soo Har raat ko chand ka sringar nahi milata aur kuch raat ko chand ka sringar nahi milata mein kya farkh haiN ?? may 75% nyts was lighted by moon bt nt all naa ?? der is 25% possibilty naa ..soo wots da game buddy ??? same for the next line.. waha bi yehi hain.. Quote:
Dost jara gaur se padiye.. maine kaha hain.. kastiyaan to bahut phirati hain leharooN mein, par har kasti ko kinarooN ka pyar nahi miltaa.. yeh unn kastiyOOn k liye thaa jo samundar meiN chale too jate haiN bt aapni mazeel ka pata nahi dund paati.. i meant joo beech rastooN meiN khoo jate haiN.. Quote:
Mere dosT... lagta haiN aapne kuch jayda hi gaur se pad liya.. here dhar means to ek mukmmal " lay aur aawaz " .. jaise ki paani ki bhi dhar hoti hain dat is " Flow " aur yaha dhar ka use flow k liye hi hua tha.. joo aap samjh nahi paaye..Quote:
maine yaha " dwar " word ka use as a " Fulfillment " kiya haiN.. bhagwan k dwar ka matlab hota haiN..insaan Ki har ikchha puri karne wali jagah.. dats wot i meant here.. Quote:
har kisi ko ek dusare k jaroorat haiN.. yaha koi bhi cheez ek dusare k sath bIna matlab k nahi hain.. jara gaur karke dekho.. So dost.. i hope tum meri batooN ka bura nahi manoge.. i was only trying to clear myself.. ki maine kin baatooN ko dhyan mein rakh kar yeh sab likh tha.. anyways.. it was my pleasure to hav ur words.. take care.. -- OMI Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein....... |
|||||
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
«
Previous Thread
|
Next Thread
»
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | Rate This Thread |
Linear Mode
|
|
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
