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plz read this - 28th October 2002, 01:45 PM

hey friend i know that i need the improvment tell me how can i improve

jo aag dil main lagi hai use bhuja na du to kehna
jo dil main baat dabi hai use labon pe na la du to kehna
aaj shayad meri baate achi na lage tuzko
per apni baato se tuzhe deewana na bana du to kehna
jagte ho jiski yaado main use dil se na mita du to kehna
agar tumhe apna(DOST) na bana lu to kehna.
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