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aaj phir chaya teri yaad ka badal kyon hay
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aaj phir chaya teri yaad ka badal kyon hay - 14th January 2003, 11:46 AM

aaj phir chaya teri yaad ka badal kyoN hay
dil maiN meray phir say wohi hal chal kyoN hay

woh toofan to barsoN pehlay thum chuka
is tarah bikhra howa tera aanchal kyoN hay

kehtay haiN mita daita hay waqt zakham saray
to phir ab tak dil mera yuN ghayal kyoN hay

duur buhut duur ho tum mujh say magar phir bhi
kaanoN main goonjti rehti teri payal kyoN hay

kyoN guzarta nahiN waqt ab teray intezaar maiN
sadioN say lamba lagta chota sa ek pal kyoN hay

deewanay ko kia pata deewangi ka matlub
pagal say kia poochna woh pagal kyoN hay

kyoN aata nahiN mujh say milnay koi aaj kal
meray ghar kay raastay maiN ghana jangal kyoN hay

is soch maiN dooba ja raha hay dil mera
aaj lagaya tum naiN aankh maiN kajal kyoN hay
   
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15th January 2003, 03:19 AM

Wah Wah! Bahot khoob likha hai aapne


kehtay haiN mita daita hay waqt zakham saray
to phir ab tak dil mera yuN ghayal kyoN hay

yeh to bahot pasand aaya

Aapne achi ghazal likhi hai, aur beher bhi sahii hai, sirf 'ek-do' ka fark hai..
Taareef karte hue chalta huuN..

Likhte rahiye,
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Thumbs up very nice! - 20th January 2003, 01:02 PM

taareef kya karen ab aapki.. itna acha likha hai.. ki alfaaz hi nahi hain..

kya kare taareef unki ,
taareef mein jinka alfaaz hi kum pad jaate hain!

very nice!

ab sochti hun, gar maine us vakt aapko yaha likhne ke liye na kaha hota to aaj mujhe yeh sab padhne ko nahi milta... thankz yaar! thanx 4 always being there!

u know that i'll be there 4 u too!

and again! apprciating.. well not just appreciating.. praising a lot!!!!!! bahut khoooooooooooooob!



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Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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