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Arrow Maar Daala... - 29th March 2005, 06:23 AM

ko_ii tamannaa ko_ii masarrat dil ke qariib aane hii na dii
kisane kii hai ishq me.n yaaro.n Gam se muhabbat ham se ziyaadaa

--Shamim jaipuri



Teri aankhon ke veeraane ne maar daala
Unmein mere aks begaane ne maar daala

na aaya kabhi hijaab humpe ruuth jaane ka
jab tere, mujhko na manaane ne maar daala

hum behis se chale aaye teri mehfil se
jab tere ilzaam-o-taane ne maar daala

lau meri chaahat ki kis tarah se hoti kum
jab tere tashna lab ke bulaane ne maar daala

baad-e-sabaa de ke gayi phir paigaam tera
tere honthon pe mera naam aane ne maar dala

uff…na kee tere huqm-e-tarq-e-wafa pe humne
ki ‘paras’ teri fitrat nibhaane ne maar daala


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan

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29th March 2005, 07:20 AM

Wah paras ji, Wah! Aapki har rachna itni khoobsurat hoti hai ki kya kahu.... accha laga yeh rachna parhkar bhi... aaise hi likhte rehna... aur yaha kuch mein try karti hu, Hope you like it.... If there is any mistake please feel free to make correction!


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Dukh to mere paas bhi hai phir kyun rote hai kisi ke Gham par hum…
Kuch Paane ki aas to naa thi phir kyun khone se aaj Uddass hai hum…
Phir bhi na jaane kyu iss tarah kisi ke liye kimmti Aansu bahate hai hum…



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29th March 2005, 07:57 AM

Hi Paras Ji,

Lo phir haazir hai aapki ki sunehri mehfil mein!!! Phir ek bohot hi umda aur shaandaar kalaam jise parh ke behud mazaa aaya. Pulkit bhai ki naak 3 ya 4 inch aur lambi to ho hi gayi hogi hai na!!! Hmmm lekin urdu ki classes bandh kyu kardi????


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Re: Maar Daala... - 29th March 2005, 08:05 AM

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Originally posted by Parastaar
ko_ii tamannaa ko_ii masarrat dil ke qariib aane hii na dii
kisane kii hai ishq me.n yaaro.n Gam se muhabbat ham se ziyaadaa

--Shamim jaipuri



Teri aankhon ke veeraane ne maar daala
Unmein mere aks begaane ne maar daala

na aaya kabhi hijaab humpe ruuth jaane ka
jab tere, mujhko na manaane ne maar daala

hum behis se chale aaye teri mehfil se
jab tere ilzaam-o-taane ne maar daala

lau meri chaahat ki kis tarah se hoti kum
jab tere tashna lab ke bulaane ne maar daala

baad-e-sabaa de ke gayi phir paigaam tera
tere honthon pe mera naam aane ne maar dala

uff…na kee tere huqm-e-tarq-e-wafa pe humne
ki ‘paras’ teri fitrat nibhaane ne maar daala

   
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29th March 2005, 10:16 AM

Parul...

tumhein mera likha pasand aata hai jaankar bahut khushi huyi...lekin tumse tau shayad pehli baar mukhatib ho rahi hoon...hai na?

khair tumhari iss line ne...mujhe ek sher yaad dila diya...tau maine apna signature hee change kar diya...

Kuch Paane ki aas to naa thi phir kyun khone se aaj Uddass hai hum…

us se mai.n kuchh paa sakuu.N aisii kahaa.N ummiid thii
Gam bhii vo shaayad baraa-e-meharabaanii de gayaa

javed akhtar sahib ne likha hai...thanks so much for a beautiful...thought...


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gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
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29th March 2005, 10:25 AM

Pulkit bhai ki naak 3 ya 4 inch aur lambi to ho hi gayi hogi hai na!!! Hmmm lekin urdu ki classes bandh kyu kardi????

galat bilkul galat candy boy...lambi nahin uunchi...

and i m so sorry i forgot one candy coated individual is lagging behind in the urdu class...and he must have his meanings...right?tau yahan hain kuch mushqil lafzon ke matlab...

behis = shocked, stunned
baad-e-saba = morning breeze
tarq e wafa = break up of loving relationship
fitrat = nature, aadat

koyi aur lafz reh gaya ho tau bejhijhak bata dena...theek hai?

sorry again


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29th March 2005, 10:36 AM

Hi Paras Ji,

Arey aap toh bilkul sanjeeda ho gayi. Hum toh bas aise hi..... Khair, shukriya in alfaazo ke maaine yaha pesh karne ke.

Hmmmm, mujhe pulkit bhai ki naak lambi ziyaada acchhi lagi thi Waisay seriously, unka aur humara sir fakhr se uchha hota hai aapke itne behtereen kalaam parh ke. Ustaad jo maana hai aapko.


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29th March 2005, 03:19 PM

Teri aankhon ke veeraane ne maar daala
Unmein mere aks begaane ne maar daala

na aaya kabhi hijaab humpe ruuth jaane ka
jab tere, mujhko na manaane ne maar daala

Uffff... Is sher ne aur aapke andaaz ne humko maar daala.. Alaaahh!!


hum behis se chale aaye teri mehfil se
jab tere ilzaam-o-taane ne maar daala

lau meri chaahat ki kis tarah se hoti kum
jab tere tashna lab ke bulaane ne maar daala

Tashna lab se bahut pyaar hai tumhe... Yeh chahat ki lau kabhi kam ho bhi naa... taaki mere cell ka traffic bhi chalta rahe... abhi tak to dono hi sher ghazab thhe......


baad-e-sabaa de ke gayi phir paigaam tera
tere honthon pe mera naam aane ne maar dala

uff…na kee tere huqm-e-tarq-e-wafa pe humne
ki ‘paras’ teri fitrat nibhaane ne maar daala

Waaaaaaaahhhh! Kya likh Diya hai Guruji!! This one is really beautiful.....


Dearest Paras!!

This one wud be rated amongst one of ur best masterpieces... Ab tum Kahogi Masterpieces... Well Normal artist ki life me ek hi ban paata hai magar aap to apna recoed har doosre din todti hain.... Meri Dil se Dher Saarii Daad.. is behetreen klaam ko likhne ke liye..... Mujhe to bhaut bahut pasand ayaaa....

Aur jaisa salim ne kaha ke hum dono kee naak to oonchi ho gayi hai...Lambi nahi.. Lambi to jhhoot bolne waalon ki hoti hai... :O

Dictionary to tumhari zindabaad hai hi.. vaise tumhe padh padh ke ab meri urdu improve ho gayi hai.. bass ek do shabd hi aise thhe jo main nahi samajh paaya....

Arz kiya hai....aapki shaan me....


Aapke shabdon ke teeron ne maar daala,
rootthne manane ke pheron ne maar daala

Har sher kar raha hai ik waar sa dil par,
Larazte hue aapke honton ne maar daala


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai

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29th March 2005, 03:54 PM

Parastaar ji,

Appk ka yeh kalaam mujhe bahut aacha laga is liye yahan likhne ki gustakhi kar rahaa hoon. Bahut dino baad yahan aaya tha to aap ko pad kar kuch yaad aaya, aur dilko choo gaya.

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30th March 2005, 06:38 PM

Meri maa...ko malum hai na ki aise chuppi uske bache ko bilkul bhi nahin achhi lagti...phir bhi........................



mera phuula hua munh dikh raha hai na?


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
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30th March 2005, 06:44 PM

Shhhhhhhhh..pulkit....

apne guru se...yeh lab wab kee baat nahin karte...

lo yeh bhi masterpiece...great...

but be prepared my boy...for another masterpiece coming your way...in the near future...


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30th March 2005, 06:46 PM

Vaaiz Sahib...

aisee gustakhi aap baar baar karein...kamal hai...aap kaise hain bahut dino baad nazar aaye hain...

aur yeh sunkar achaa laga ki hamare kalaam ne aapko kuch bhula bisra yaad dila diya...


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

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Namaskar - 31st March 2005, 01:17 PM

Namaskar Paras ji

Aapka ek aur nayaab qalam.....aapkey is qalam ne maar daala...........
Waise to sarey qalam ne maar daala par in panktiyon ke aser ne jyada maar daala........

baad-e-sabaa de ke gayi phir paigaam tera
tere honthon pe mera naam aane ne maar dala


Tahe dil se hamare daad kabul kijega.

Sada kush Rahiye


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31st March 2005, 02:42 PM

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Meri maa...ko malum hai na ki aise chuppi uske bache ko bilkul bhi nahin achhi lagti...phir bhi........................



mera phuula hua munh dikh raha hai na?


hahahahaahhahahahaha
meri paras,

achha ab munh phulana bandh karo..... lo aa gayi .......

Teri aankhon ke veeraane ne maar daala


aankho ki viranee......

tumhari aankh maie jab khud ko n paaya
zinda to rahi par zindgi ne maar daala


kuch yunh likhte rahe woh ke taarif na ho paayi
is par oonka munh phulane ne hume maar dala


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6th April 2005, 09:52 AM

Sukanya...

hamesha kee tarah mujhe hausla badhaane chali aayin...shukriya bahut bahut...lol...lagta hai yeh kalaam mujrim ho ke rahegaa...


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mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
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6th April 2005, 09:55 AM

Yeh huyi na baat...

meri maa...ko iss kalaam ne iss kadar maar daala ki chamatkaar ho gaya...

tumhari aankh maie jab khud ko n paaya
zinda to rahi par zindgi ne maar daala

kuch yunh likhte rahe woh ke taarif na ho paayi
is par oonka munh phulane ne hume maar dala

bol barbas phoot padhe...maun vrat sadaa ke liye khatm kar dijiye...aur mera munh apni dimensions mein wapis aa gaya hai...

apki paras


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gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

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6th April 2005, 10:03 AM

Aapke shabdon ke teeron ne maar daala,
rootthne manane ke pheron ne maar daala

Har sher kar raha hai ik waar sa dil par,
Larazte hue aapke honton ne maar daala


so sorry pulkit...

maine tumhara yeh masterpiece tau miss hee kar diya...bahut khuub likhne lage ho...

roothne manaane ke pheron ne...bahut mazzedar laga...

hmmmn...ik waar sa dil par...hain...aur phir larazte honth kya baat hai tumhari guru kee...shabaash...

hamari shaan mein yoonhi likhte rahiye...guru dakshina tau jitni ho utni kam hoti hai...


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gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

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6th April 2005, 10:53 AM

paras behan

ab to tum bilkul kisi aazmuuda shayer ki tarah likhne lagi ho.
qalam mein rawani bhi hai,

shola bayani bhi hai
aatish fishani bhi hai
dil ko chuuti kahani bhi hai

shabash. aur bohat khoob.

achcha ek baat mein bata duun tumhein behna
dekho ek baat jaan lo, jab tak ham jaise tumhare bhai maujood hain,
na to ham tumhari aankhon mein veerane aane deinge.
na hamari behan se koee begaana reh sakta hai
na hamari behan se koee ruuth sakta hai
aur behan ko manane ke liye ham maujood hain naan;

bas tum befiker ho ker isi tarah likhte jaayo, tumhari hausla afzaayee ke liye ham hain naan;

meri Rabbe Kayinaat se hamesha dua rehti hai ke meri behan ko hamesha khush aur khurram rakhe.
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Re: Maar Daala... - 6th April 2005, 11:13 AM

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Teri aankhon ke veeraane ne maar daala
Unmein mere aks begaane ne maar daala

baad-e-sabaa de ke gayi phir paigaam tera
tere honthon pe mera naam aane ne maar dala

uff…na kee tere huqm-e-tarq-e-wafa pe humne
ki ‘paras’ teri fitrat nibhaane ne maar daala
Hi Paras di,

Late hone ke liye maafi...
Kuch apni uljhan mein ulajh gaya tha...

Aapke upar quote kiye sher behad pasand aaye...
Technique par to mein comment nahi kar sakta...
Haan khayalat bahut hi unda hai...

Yunhi likhte rahein...

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9th April 2005, 12:32 PM

Paras YoooN to aapki is post ko parhne se jiyaada gaane me maza aayega...waakai bahut khoob likha hai aapne...tahe dil se shukrya hame is.se ru-b-ru karwane ke liye.

poori ki poori rachna...khoob bhaayi...sochta hooN ise kisi per aajmaa hi daaloN ...shaayad jo kaam hamaari kismat na kar paaye aapki ye khoobsoorat rachna kar le....lol.

or ye aakhiri sher....to utar gaya bas.

uff…na kee tere huqm-e-tarq-e-wafa pe humne
ki ‘paras’ teri fitrat nibhaane ne maar daala


waakai ...is fitrat nibhaane ne to hame bhi maar daala....

Bahut khoob

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hie - 9th April 2005, 01:18 PM

great work.. do keep writing..

can u plz send the complete shayri of shamim ji whoz 2 lines u quoted b4 urz?

will be waiting, thanx..


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9th April 2005, 09:05 PM

Wah!! Aapke is kalaam ne humhe bhi maar daala

na aaya kabhi hijaab humpe ruuth jaane ka
jab tere, mujhko na manaane ne maar daala

Yeh sher bas dil mein khanjhar ki tarah utar gaya...

Humko bhi is fasaane ne maar daala
dil ke gham puraane ne maar daala

Bandhagi mein teri hum bhi yun deewaane the
deewaane ko tere jaane ne maar daala

lab-e-khwaaish aarzoo-e-tassavur liye firte the
jaane khwaab begaane ne maar daala

bemuraavat zamaane ne maar daala
dil ke gham puraane ne maar daala


likhte rahiYeGaa

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Re: Maar Daala... - 10th April 2005, 11:53 PM

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Originally posted by Parastaar
ko_ii tamannaa ko_ii masarrat dil ke qariib aane hii na dii
kisane kii hai ishq me.n yaaro.n Gam se muhabbat ham se ziyaadaa

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Teri aankhon ke veeraane ne maar daala
Unmein mere aks begaane ne maar daala

na aaya kabhi hijaab humpe ruuth jaane ka
jab tere, mujhko na manaane ne maar daala

hum behis se chale aaye teri mehfil se
jab tere ilzaam-o-taane ne maar daala

lau meri chaahat ki kis tarah se hoti kum
jab tere tashna lab ke bulaane ne maar daala

baad-e-sabaa de ke gayi phir paigaam tera
tere honthon pe mera naam aane ne maar dala

uff…na kee tere huqm-e-tarq-e-wafa pe humne
ki ‘paras’ teri fitrat nibhaane ne maar daala
Maar daala.... Is nazm ne maar daala... Bahut khoob Paras di...

Apna khayaal rakhiye..

~Priya



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Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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13th April 2005, 09:33 AM

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paras behan

ab to tum bilkul kisi aazmuuda shayer ki tarah likhne lagi ho.
qalam mein rawani bhi hai,

shola bayani bhi hai
aatish fishani bhi hai
dil ko chuuti kahani bhi hai

shabash. aur bohat khoob.

achcha ek baat mein bata duun tumhein behna
dekho ek baat jaan lo, jab tak ham jaise tumhare bhai maujood hain,
na to ham tumhari aankhon mein veerane aane deinge.
na hamari behan se koee begaana reh sakta hai
na hamari behan se koee ruuth sakta hai
aur behan ko manane ke liye ham maujood hain naan;

bas tum befiker ho ker isi tarah likhte jaayo, tumhari hausla afzaayee ke liye ham hain naan;

meri Rabbe Kayinaat se hamesha dua rehti hai ke meri behan ko hamesha khush aur khurram rakhe.
God bless you.

musharrafhusain
Mushi bhayyia...

itna kuch keh diya...? iss mamuli koshish mein...tau kya wakai main achha likhne lagi hoon? yeh sab aap sabki sohbat mein ho raha hai shayad...warna main tau zarre se bhi kum kum hi thee...

aur jee haan, aap jaise bhai hon tau paras ka koyi kya bigaad lega...kaun pangaa lega mere bhayyiaas se...lol...

apni hee shayri se use chitt kar doongi...kyun bhayyia...?


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gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

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13th April 2005, 09:35 AM

Rohin...

hmmmn...technique na sahi...khayaal tau umda hain na?

good! very good!!


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

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13th April 2005, 09:37 AM

Chaand Sahib...

poori ki poori rachna...khoob bhaayi...sochta hooN ise kisi per aajmaa hi daaloN ...shaayad jo kaam hamaari kismat na kar paaye aapki ye khoobsoorat rachna kar le....lol.

jee shauk se aajmaayiye...i would feel honored...or rather my kalaam will feel honored if you do so...


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

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13th April 2005, 09:52 AM

Hello gudiya...

this is one of my favorite ghazals....here it is in its entirety...

[color=dark brown]tark-e-muhabbat par bhii hogii un ko nidaamat ham se ziyaadaa
kis ne kii hai kaun karegaa un se muhabbat ham se ziyaadaa

hamane maanaa aap me.n hogii sabr kii taaqat ham se ziyaadaa
dekhiye lekin utarii hu_ii hai aap kii suurat ham se ziyaadaa

uff vo tabassum halkaa halkaa haaye vo bhiigii bhiigii palake.n
vaqt-e-ruKhsat un pe giraa.N thaa lamahaa-e-ruKhsat ham se ziyaadaa

ko_ii tamannaa ko_ii masarrat dil ke qariib aane hii na dii
kisane kii hai ishq me.n yaaro.n Gam se muhabbat ham se ziyaadaa [/color]


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

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13th April 2005, 09:56 AM

Anu,,,

Humko bhi is fasaane ne maar daala
dil ke gham puraane ne maar daala

Bandhagi mein teri hum bhi yun deewaane the
deewaane ko tere jaane ne maar daala

lab-e-khwaaish aarzoo-e-tassavur liye firte the
jaane khwaab begaane ne maar daala

bemuraavat zamaane ne maar daala
dil ke gham puraane ne maar daala

bahut khuub likha hai...

duusra sher bahut hee pyaara laga...kabhi kabaar younhi nazar e karam karte rehna...


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

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13th April 2005, 09:57 AM

Priya...

kaisee ho...

thanks for coming and appreciating my words...take care


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gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

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13th April 2005, 10:37 AM

Meri Behna Paras…..

Teri aankhon ke veeraane ne maar daala
Unmein mere aks begaane ne maar daala


Kabhi yun bhi hota hai….jiske liye hum khuda se badkar hote hain…..unhi aankhon mein apna aks begana se lagta hai……

na aaya kabhi hijaab humpe ruuth jaane ka
jab tere, mujhko na manaane ne maar daala


Ye manzar bhi wafa-e-ishq mein dekha hai…..
Mar jaaye hum, uske na bulane ne dekha hai

uff…na kee tere huqm-e-tarq-e-wafa pe humne
ki ‘paras’ teri fitrat nibhaane ne maar daala


qatil ko hi apna munsif dekh phir toot gaya ^AMAN^…..
uske naazon pe ye bhi wafa nibhane mein dekha hai…..

Kutch khaas to nahi…..jo dil mein aaya likhta gaya tumhari khaatir….

Tumhara bhai……



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18th April 2005, 12:31 PM

Ye manzar bhi wafa-e-ishq mein dekha hai…..
Mar jaaye hum, uske na bulane ne dekha hai

qatil ko hi apna munsif dekh phir toot gaya ^AMAN^…..
uske naazon pe ye bhi wafa nibhane mein dekha hai…..

Aman mere bhai...

qaatil ko apna munsif banaane se faisala kabhi apne haq mein nahin hota...lol...so sambhal ke...waise khayaal achha hai...

aur apki interview kaisee rahi...batana...take care


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gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
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wah wah - 18th April 2005, 08:31 PM

lau meri chaahat ki kis tarah se hoti kum
jab tere tashna lab ke bulaane ne maar daala

baad-e-sabaa de ke gayi phir paigaam tera
tere honthon pe mera naam aane ne maar dala

uff…na kee tere huqm-e-tarq-e-wafa pe humne
ki ‘paras’ teri fitrat nibhaane ne maar daala


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paras ji
yun to sari hi gazal bahut pyari hai per in panktiyon ne to jaise mujhe bhi yahan laker khara ker diya....!

hum behis se chale aaye teri mehfil se
jab tere ilzaam-o-taane ne maar daala
...maar daala,,,sach bahut kuch keh diya in sabdon ne....


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20th April 2005, 09:32 PM

bahot dino ke baad main re, de rahi hun mafi chahti hun, bahot sadgi bhara aur kamal ka likha hai.jabhi main tumhe padhti hun lagta hai bahot hunnar hai apke likhne main, shayad main bhi aisa likih pau.

Namaskaar meeta ji...

kaisee hain aap? jo dil se likhte hain unmein hunar rehta hai...jaise ki aapke kalaam mein bhi...i love to read your poetry...which is always short and aiming straight at the heart


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

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20th April 2005, 09:34 PM

Swati...

Maar daala! ...lol shayad yeh sab bayaan karta thaa tabhi iska title yahi rakh diya...mujhe padhne ke liye bahut bahut shukriyaa...

take care...


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mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
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