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Maa ko kaat daala - 15th August 2010, 08:38 PM

Maa ko kaat daala


August 14 aur 15 ko bahut roti hoo.n mai
saalo.n purani yaado.n me fir khoti hoo.n mai.

Mai apahiz nahi'n thi tab,
Mere dono baju salamat the jab.

Mere layak bete vo the jo mere vazood ke lie
Naksh-e-Zaha.n se hat gae.

Mere bajuo.n ki salamti ke lie,
jinke sar dhad se kat gae.

Mere kuchh bete jhuk gae,
Firangio.n ke saamne swarth ke lie.

Kaat dala mujhe, baant dala mujhe ,
aur khud hi mere tukde le lie.

Ab bhi chhuri uthae ghoom rahe log vo,
Zaat bhasha dharam ko dhaal bana rahe hai.n jo

Ajj fir se utha darad fir se mere nain bhar aae,
Hae ! kabhi kisi maa ki zindgi me aisa 1947 na aae.



Ajeeb alam hai meri bechaini ka
na jagti hoo.n na sotee hoo,n mai

August 14 aur 15 ko bahut roti hoo.n mai



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15th August 2010, 10:41 PM

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Maa ko kaat daala


August 14 aur 15 ko bahut roti hoo.n mai
saalo.n purani yaado.n me fir khoti hoo.n mai.

Mai apahiz nahi'n thi tab,
Mere dono baju salamat the jab.

Mere layak bete vo the jo mere vazood ke lie
Naksh-e-Zaha.n se hat gae.

Mere bajuo.n ki salamti ke lie,
jinke sar dhad se kat gae.

Mere kuchh bete jhuk gae,
Firangio.n ke saamne swarth ke lie.

Kaat dala mujhe, baant dala mujhe ,
aur khud hi mere tukde le lie.

Ab bhi chhuri uthae ghoom rahe log vo,
Zaat bhasha dharam ko dhaal bana rahe hai.n jo

Ajj fir se utha darad fir se mere nain bhar aae,
Hae ! kabhi kisi maa ki zindgi me aisa 1947 na aae.



Ajeeb alam hai meri bechaini ka
na jagti hoo.n na sotee hoo,n mai

August 14 aur 15 ko bahut roti hoo.n mai



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15th August 2010, 11:12 PM

parveeN ji aapne batware ke dard ko bahut khoobi se bayaaN kiya hai, humne batwaare ki baateN suni hai apni BUA Jii ki jubaaNi, jab woh hume batwaare ki baateN sunate thy to bahut rote thy aur saath meiN hum bhi rote thy, us waqt hum bahut chotte thy, batwaare ke dard ko nahi samjate thy bas hum esi liye rote thy ki mere Dadda ji ki haweli aur ghar ka sara samaaN wahiN rah gaya, bas yehi baat samaj aati thi tab hume, par aaj hum us dard ko dil se mahsoos karte haiN aur aaj hum azad desh ke vashinde haiN jinki wajha se haiN unko hum shat shat parnaam karte haiN....JAI HIND


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15th August 2010, 11:38 PM

respected sunita ji, batware ki vazah se hi aaj desh ke saamne kai chunoutia.n hai.n . maine apne papa se bhut hi dil dahla dene vale kisse sune the jo unhone dekhe the. aaj bhi sihran si zisam me paida hoti hai un kisso.n ko yaad karke aur us dour ke rahnumao.n ki galtio.n par gussa bhi aata hai.Un haadso.n me maare gae logo.n ko zannat me sukoon mile ye hee dua hai. ameen.


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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.......... kya baat hai dear... dil chhu liya aapne... dilse daad hazir hai ... yuhi likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye...

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19th August 2010, 04:31 PM

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