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30th January 2007, 02:41 AM
Teri yaad mein deewane hoke hum chale..
Duniya ko bhool masTaane hoke hum chale..
Tu kya jaane is dil ka haal kya hai..
Hum kya The aur kya hoke hum chale..
Tum ne sambhaala To bedarr hoke hum chale..
Zameen ki dhool se zindagi banke hum chale..
Deewanepan ki had na poochiye janaab..
Tere ishq mein badnaam hoke hum chale..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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30th January 2007, 12:36 PM
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Teri yaad mein deewane hoke hum chale..
Duniya ko bhool masTaane hoke hum chale..
hmmm deewale aur mastaane wah ji wah!!
Tu kya jaane is dil ka haal kya hai..
Hum kya The aur kya hoke hum chale..
achha kya the aur kya ban gaye kya baat hai!!!
Tum ne sambhaala To bedarr hoke hum chale..
Zameen ki dhool se zindagi banke hum chale..
bahot khub!! baat kahi hai di aapne
Deewanepan ki had na poochiye janaab..
Tere ishq mein badnaam hoke hum chale..
yeH baat bilkul sahi hai haha
~Priya
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namskaar priya di
bahot hi pyaari si rachna likhi hai dil ke eshaasoN ko paRh ke khusi hui hamesa yuhiN likhte raheN
khus raheN aur apna khayal rakheN
aapke chhotey bhaiya
dhaval......
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31st January 2007, 09:12 AM
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Teri yaad mein deewane hoke hum chale..
Duniya ko bhool masTaane hoke hum chale..
Tu kya jaane is dil ka haal kya hai..
Hum kya The aur kya hoke hum chale..
Tum ne sambhaala To bedarr hoke hum chale..
Zameen ki dhool se zindagi banke hum chale..
Deewanepan ki had na poochiye janaab..
Tere ishq mein badnaam hoke hum chale..
~Priya
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Chaahat ji ko mera salam ,
kyaa baat likhi hai chaahat ji "dewaepan ki had na poochie janab, tere ishq mein badnam hoke hum chale" bahut hi achaa likha hai aap ise tarah likhe rahe mujhe intezaar rahega
take care
Allah Hafiz
shaan
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31st January 2007, 08:39 PM
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namskaar priya di
bahot hi pyaari si rachna likhi hai dil ke eshaasoN ko paRh ke khusi hui hamesa yuhiN likhte raheN
khus raheN aur apna khayal rakheN
aapke chhotey bhaiya
dhaval......
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Daant dikhaane se baaz nahi aate tum... agli baar dikhaane se pehle colgate se 2 baar brush karke aana...
Tumhe meri rachna padh ke thodi si khushi milli, jaan ke bahut acha laga..
Humesha saath dene ke liye shukriya chotte bhaiya!!!
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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31st January 2007, 09:25 PM
priya di bahoot aach
hmmmm bahoot aach likha hai
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2nd February 2007, 10:35 AM
hi priya
aapne sach mein achchhh likha hai,
aapki is rachna mein aapka ek alag hi dard dil se ubharta hua nazar aa raha hai,
aapki is rachna ka mein kuch is tarah se javaab dena chahta hu
sayad aapko har bar ki tarah pasand aayega
gaur ki jiyega
Teri yaad mein deewane hoke hum chale..
Duniya ko bhool masTaane hoke hum chale..
Tu kya jaane is dil ka haal kya hai..
Hum kya The aur kya hoke hum chale..
Chale gaye ho dur kuch pal ke liye,
Dur rehkar bhi karib ho har pal ke liye,
Kese yad na aaye aap ek pal ke liye,
Jab dil me ho aap har pal ke liye.
Tum ne sambhaala To bedarr hoke hum chale..
Zameen ki dhool se zindagi banke hum chale..
Deewanepan ki had na poochiye janaab..
Tere ishq mein badnaam hoke hum chale..
Lehro ko pyaar tha kinaro se,
Par uski saadi sagar se ho gayi,
Kinaro ki prit lehro ko khich lati hai,
Magar badnaam na ho mohabbat isi liye laut jati hai.
milte rehna
aapka dost
Merul
Quote:
Originally Posted by chaahat123
Teri yaad mein deewane hoke hum chale..
Duniya ko bhool masTaane hoke hum chale..
Tu kya jaane is dil ka haal kya hai..
Hum kya The aur kya hoke hum chale..
Tum ne sambhaala To bedarr hoke hum chale..
Zameen ki dhool se zindagi banke hum chale..
Deewanepan ki had na poochiye janaab..
Tere ishq mein badnaam hoke hum chale..
~Priya
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.
Merul~~~~~~~~~~>
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5th February 2007, 02:12 PM
Muje aapki likhi line aachi lagi take care likhte raho.
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5th February 2007, 08:07 PM
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Chaahat ji ko mera salam ,
kyaa baat likhi hai chaahat ji "dewaepan ki had na poochie janab, tere ishq mein badnam hoke hum chale" bahut hi achaa likha hai aap ise tarah likhe rahe mujhe intezaar rahega
take care
Allah Hafiz
shaan
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Shaan ji..
Aapke yahan aane ke liye aur meri hounsla afzaai karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya!!!
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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priya di bahoot aach
hmmmm bahoot aach likha hai
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Pyari Sandhya!!!
Tumhe yeh pasand aaya jaan ke bahut khushi hui..
Yahan aane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya!!
Take Care..
Tumhari.. Di..
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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22nd February 2007, 04:48 PM
hello chaahat ,
aap kaise ho?Appki rachna bahut acchi lagi.Aur merulji ka jawaab bhi lajwaab hai
Gam ki dukaan kholkar baitha hua hai "Saifee"
Aansoo nikal pade hai kharidaar dekhkar...
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11th October 2007, 11:06 PM
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hello chaahat ,
aap kaise ho?Appki rachna bahut acchi lagi.Aur merulji ka jawaab bhi lajwaab hai
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Bahut bahut shukriya Saife ji
Aap sada khush rahein.. muskuraate rahein!
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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12th October 2007, 05:19 PM
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Teri yaad mein deewane hoke hum chale..
Duniya ko bhool masTaane hoke hum chale..
Tu kya jaane is dil ka haal kya hai..
Hum kya The aur kya hoke hum chale..
Tum ne sambhaala To bedarr hoke hum chale..
Zameen ki dhool se zindagi banke hum chale..
Deewanepan ki had na poochiye janaab..
Tere ishq mein badnaam hoke hum chale..
~Priya
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Aadab priya ji,
kaise hai aap
wah kya baat hain,
aapki yeh koshsish hame bohot pasand aayi,
aapka ek ek ashaar wah ji wah.
Allah apko oir tarakki de,
AAMIN SUMM AAMIN
KHUSH RAHIYE,
APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ
Apki dost
Sweet HASSONI,
( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi )
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(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!
**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
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Aadab priya ji,
kaise hai aap
wah kya baat hain,
aapki yeh koshsish hame bohot pasand aayi,
aapka ek ek ashaar wah ji wah.
Allah apko oir tarakki de,
AAMIN SUMM AAMIN
KHUSH RAHIYE,
APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ
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Bahut bahut shukriya Hassoni ji, mujhe padhne ke liye aur housla afzaai ke liye bhi!
Khayal rakhiye!
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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22nd September 2014, 05:10 PM
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Teri yaad mein deewane hoke hum chale..
Duniya ko bhool masTaane hoke hum chale..
Tu kya jaane is dil ka haal kya hai..
Hum kya The aur kya hoke hum chale..
Tum ne sambhaala To bedarr hoke hum chale..
Zameen ki dhool se zindagi banke hum chale..
Deewanepan ki had na poochiye janaab..
Tere ishq mein badnaam hoke hum chale..
~Priya
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Priya....kaisi ho tum...arsa hua tumhare bare meiN kuch pta nahi.
umeed hai yahan bhi ho kush hogi...missing u alot dear
aaj teri likhi yeh poetry padi aur sab kuch tazza ho gya, jo waqt ham sabne SDC par guzara hai...bahut accha tha.
love u dear
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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8th October 2014, 04:02 PM
kya baat hai
kya khoob likha h aapne...
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8th October 2014, 04:38 PM
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Daant dikhaane se baaz nahi aate tum... agli baar dikhaane se pehle colgate se 2 baar brush karke aana...
Tumhe meri rachna padh ke thodi si khushi milli, jaan ke bahut acha laga..
Humesha saath dene ke liye shukriya chotte bhaiya!!!
Take Care..
~Priya
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Priya didi kahaan ho aap. . Un beete dinon ko bahot miss kar rahaa hun jab hum sab mil kar bahot masti mazak ke sath shayri bhi kar rahe the..
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