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Sad Woh umr guzar gayi.... - 3rd June 2004, 09:05 PM

This one i have written for those who have truly loved and lost....


Tumhaare izhaar ki
aur mere ikraar ki....Umr guzar gayi

Bekhudi se dinon ki
madhosh si raatoon ki....Umr guzar gayi

Baahon ke gheron ki
meethi si un baaton ki....Umr guzar gayi

Pyaar ke abhaaas ki
tum par vishwas ki....Umr guzar gayi

Tumhare jhoot ki
aur mere sach ki....Umr guzar gayi

Muh pher ke jaane ki
aur phir kabhi na aane ki....Umr guzar gayi

Jo guzar gayi
usse wapas aane na doongi
Dil ki ye khaali jagah
ab tum jaiso ko kabhi na doongi.........


koshish ko hamari please nakarna mat.........gar pasand aaye to likhna zaroor ek khat....
   
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Love 4th June 2004, 08:13 PM

ya khuda ab humkoapni azam-e- khudai dikha de
ya to sikha de unko wafa karna ya humhe bewfai sikha de.
   
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Smile hi - 6th June 2004, 12:54 PM

wah wah rickyji!!!! bahut sahi kaha hai aapne


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Wah shivaniji
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Wah shivaniji - 8th June 2004, 02:51 PM

Ki mere katle ke baad ushne jafase toba!
haiush jud-e-pashema ka pashemahona!
Hef ush chaar girah kapde ki kismat jiske nasib me he aashik ka gariba hona!!
Aapki ish umda sher ne humare dil ko fir jhakjhor diya diya he,lekin abhi jine ki umar aur khusiyan nahi gujar gayi he.Best sher of ur i likedit.keepitup
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Smile hi - 9th June 2004, 12:06 PM

hello mukeshji...aapki is hosla afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya...i am glad u liked it....thanx a lot...bye for now...take care!


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7th February 2010, 02:32 AM

Heyi Shivani , aapne ye kaafi acha likh hai ,, Mere ko kaaafi achaa lga..
aap aur hi likha kro


Aaawaaaz de kr cheeeph gye kitne hi Hseen log,
Ye Aaashiqi bhi Aaankh Meecholi hai mere dosto............

SHARMA
   
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7th February 2010, 05:59 AM

hatho mein kahi lakire hai,kisi mein gum to kisi mein khusi,hame to yeh lakir pe naaz hai, jispe khuda ne aap jaise dost ka naam likha hai
   
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8th February 2010, 09:26 PM

ha ha ha bahut hi sahi rahi apki akhiri 4 lines.


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Khudkushi se phle :-(VISHAL SHARMA)
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Angry Khudkushi se phle :-(VISHAL SHARMA) - 11th February 2010, 12:07 AM

Khudkushi se Phle


Uf ye bedard Seaahi (ink) , Uf ye Hwa ke Veelaap,
Kisko maalum hai ki ess Veelaap ki Raat hogi ki nhi ?
Ik njr tere prde ki trf dekh lu ,
Dubti aankho me phir dekhne ki taaqat hogi ki nhi ?

Abhi roshan hai tere shyan - kaksh ke Deeye
( oil lamp) ,
neele prde se chlakh rhi haiN prchaaeyia Ab talq ...
Ajnabbi baaho me hlke se lchaq rhi hongi ,
tere mahke huye baalo ki ltaaaye ab talq ....

Srd hoti raaat meiN buzh rhi LoN
(lamp light) ki trh
haath failaaye gin rhe hai smma Maut ke bojhal Saaye .
Le jaayegeN vo mujh ko apne saaath ,
Aur chlaa jaauga Abb ki baar tuzhe binaa Btaaye .

Ah ye Veenaaash ki kndra , Ah ye Deeye
(oil lamp) ke veelaap ,
teri bewfaai ke baad Umar meri inhi deewaaro me ktti .
Aur seh nhi skta , aur yaadeN chuphaa nhi skta...
Vo lmhe , vo raaateN jo tere saath thi Ktti .

Sochaa Phir kbhi to tum mujhe mill nhi paaogi ,
Kl se tum kissi se njre nhi chuuraao gi .
Soch to rha tha ki teri yaad ke saath reh lu ,
Pr Rh nhi paayea , ess liye socha Apne Jjbaat
Khudkushi Se Phle keh lu..........

Apne Jjbaat Khudkushi se phle keh lu .............





Aaawaaaz de kr cheeeph gye kitne hi Hseen log,
Ye Aaashiqi bhi Aaankh Meecholi hai mere dosto............

SHARMA


Aaawaaaz de kr cheeeph gye kitne hi Hseen log,
Ye Aaashiqi bhi Aaankh Meecholi hai mere dosto............

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18th February 2010, 01:40 PM

Its really Beautiful work by You Shivani Jee.............Too Good.


Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...

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