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20th September 2007, 06:43 PM
wah wah wah lamha ji kya baat he................................................ .............................
tarif e kabil ho aap to yaar
shayad aap ki tarif karna mere bas me nahi
fir bhi kuch likh deta hoon
HEERA YA MOTI SE
KYA TULA KARU MAIN AAPKI
AAP HO HI ITNI KHUBSURAT
KYA TARIF KARU MAIN AAPKI
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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20th September 2007, 06:50 PM
AAHAT PE TUMHARI
SHAMMA - E - DIL JAAL RAHAHE
EK LAMHA CHAINSE DEKHNE KO TUMHE
SAMUNDAR -E AASHQ BEH RAHA HE
GUM KAISE NA KARU MERE YAAR
TUMHARI JUDAI ME
TAN BADAN TADAP RAHA HE
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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20th September 2007, 06:59 PM
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Originally Posted by acharya_mj
waah wah lamhaa ji kya bat kahi hai ahsaanwaali phir paraaya kar diyaa koi baat nahe yahi he sahi.lamha ye kyaa baat kahii ahsaanwali achha sher hai.mera reply bhi haazir hai tumaare is khoobsurat sher par.
Dostee aur mahobbat men ahsaan kabhi jataya nahee karte
Jise maan le dilojaan se apna use ham paraya nahee karte
Hai yeh vo paak jazbaa bharosa-o-imaan-o-vafaa par kaayam
lamhabhar bhi kabhi aap se daaman ham chhudaaya nahee karte.
Hame aarzoo hai tumhaare magar hai tumhaare khushiya bhi pyaaree
So apni khudagrzi ke liye ham usoolo se apne takraaya nahee karte
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EE DOST AAPNI DOSTI KO
KISI KI NAZAR NA LAGE
ZAMIN TO ZAMIN YAAR
AASMAN KI BHI HAWA NA LAGE.
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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21st September 2007, 05:10 AM
bahut khub..doctor sahiba...
dard...ruswai..bewaffai..
bass yahi humara naseeb hai
jeenek liye zindagi nahi mili
yeh dosto kya cheez hai...
dnt mind yaar, dard section hai nah, to aisha likna pada....
Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...
Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....
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21st September 2007, 05:14 AM
bahut khub..doctor sahiba...
dard...ruswai..bewaffai..
bass yahi humara naseeb hai
jeene k liye zindagi nahi mili
yeh dosti kya cheez hai...
humare pass dene ko kuch nahi
tere chehre bass mushkarahat chahiye
tumhe mill jayen yeh jahan saara
humein sirf do beega zameen aur ek kafan chahiye.......
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Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...
Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....
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22nd September 2007, 12:25 PM
Aalam-e-Ishq Ki kashti mein sawar hokar
Chala tha Mohabbat ke gaon mein mai.
Jo dooba beech majhdhaar to jaana maine
Baitha tha Kagaz Ki Nao mein mai.
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22nd September 2007, 03:29 PM
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Aalam-e-Ishq Ki kashti mein sawar hokar
Chala tha Mohabbat ke gaon mein mai.
Jo dooba beech majhdhaar to jaana maine
Baitha tha Kagaz Ki Nao mein mai.
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WAH WAH WAH AMIT BHAI KA KHUB KAHA HE
AAP KA JAWAB KYA DE ?
FIR BHI KOSHISH KARNE KI AADAT SE MAJBOOR HE TO THO DI KOSHISH KAR KE DEKH LETA HOON
AALAM-E- ISHQ-E-KAGAZ KI KASTI MILI THI AAPKO
YEH AAPKE KUDRAT-E-TAQDEER KI BAAT HE
HUM TO YAAR BIN KASTI HI DOOB GAYE UNKE PYAR ME
YAARO YEH HUMARE THOKAR-E-HALAT KI BAAT HE
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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22nd September 2007, 03:31 PM
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Originally Posted by musafir ek pal
bahut khub..doctor sahiba...
dard...ruswai..bewaffai..
bass yahi humara naseeb hai
jeene k liye zindagi nahi mili
yeh dosti kya cheez hai...
humare pass dene ko kuch nahi
tere chehre bass mushkarahat chahiye
tumhe mill jayen yeh jahan saara
humein sirf do beega zameen aur ek kafan chahiye.......
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WAH YAAR KYA BAAT HE
KHUSHI DEKHNE SE PEHLE KYO
DOOR BHAG NE KI BAAT KARTE HO
JIYE NAHI ZINDAGI JI BHAR KAR AABHI
FIR KYO MARNE KI BAAT KARTE HO
MILEGI DO GAZ ZAMIN MARNE KE BAAD
AABHI SE KYO UNKI TAIYAARI KARTE HO
KHUSH RAKHNA CHATE HE HUM AAPNE DOSTO KO
FIR AAP KYO JUDAI KI BAAT KARTE HO
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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26th September 2007, 01:39 PM
mere aane ki aahat pe shama jalai to hogi,
kabhi judai ke gham se aankh bhar aayi to hogi,
gham na kar,maayus na ho ae mere yaar,
us rub ne milan ki koi shaam banai to hogi..........
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Hi Lamha ,
Now i am back to india .....
Gaur fermayen is sher pe....jo humne likha hi nahin hai...
Kahin padha tha kabhi....
Main toot chuka hoon tanhai main yun hi aah bhartay bhartay
ik mudat ho chali hai tera intazar kartay kartay
har bar tujhay pa lene ki koshish karta raha
lekin ab thak chuka hoon koshish beshumar kartay kartay
Aapka Dost
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26th September 2007, 04:17 PM
Hi Lamha ,
Now i am back to india .....
Gaur fermayen is sher pe....jo humne likha hi nahin hai...
Kahin padha tha kabhi....
Main toot chuka hoon tanhai main yun hi aah bhartay bhartay
ik mudat ho chali hai tera intazar kartay kartay
har bar tujhay pa lene ki koshish karta raha
lekin ab thak chuka hoon koshish beshumar kartay kartay
Aapka Dost
Jawed
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WAH JANAB BAHOT KHUB
THANX FOR SHARRING THIS BEAUTIFULL SHAYRI WITH US
THANX A LOTS AGAIN
MAIN AAP KA JAWAB DENA CHAHOONGA JARA GOUR AAP BHI FARMAIYEGA
PYAR KA DUSRA NAAM INTEZAR HE
TANHAI ISKA INAAM HOTA HE
KOSHISH PYAR KA SATHI HE
ISME THAK NE WALA BAIMAAN HOTA HE
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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9th October 2007, 11:36 PM
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Hi Lamha ,
Now i am back to india .....
Gaur fermayen is sher pe....jo humne likha hi nahin hai...
Kahin padha tha kabhi....
Main toot chuka hoon tanhai main yun hi aah bhartay bhartay
ik mudat ho chali hai tera intazar kartay kartay
har bar tujhay pa lene ki koshish karta raha
lekin ab thak chuka hoon koshish beshumar kartay kartay
Aapka Dost
Jawed
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WAH JANAB BAHOT KHUB
THANX FOR SHARRING THIS BEAUTIFULL SHAYRI WITH US
THANX A LOTS AGAIN
MAIN AAP KA JAWAB DENA CHAHOONGA JARA GOUR AAP BHI FARMAIYEGA
PYAR KA DUSRA NAAM INTEZAR HE
TANHAI ISKA INAAM HOTA HE
KOSHISH PYAR KA SATHI HE
ISME THAK NE WALA BAIMAAN HOTA HE[/quote]
hey friends ,
i m back....sorry i was busy 4 a while.......kya baat hai? humare doston ko kya ho gaya? ye mehfil kyo itni khamosh ho gayi?........
koi baat nahi ab hum laut aaye hai........chalo fir se dard bantne ka silsila shuru karte hai............
kabhi zindagi se hum gila karke roye,
kabhi maut ki hum dua karke roye,
ajab silsila hai namaz-e-muhabbat ka,
kabhi adaa karke roye,kabhi kazaa karke roye......................
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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10th October 2007, 03:12 PM
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Originally Posted by LAMHA
WAH JANAB BAHOT KHUB
THANX FOR SHARRING THIS BEAUTIFULL SHAYRI WITH US
THANX A LOTS AGAIN
MAIN AAP KA JAWAB DENA CHAHOONGA JARA GOUR AAP BHI FARMAIYEGA
PYAR KA DUSRA NAAM INTEZAR HE
TANHAI ISKA INAAM HOTA HE
KOSHISH PYAR KA SATHI HE
ISME THAK NE WALA BAIMAAN HOTA HE
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hey friends ,
i m back....sorry i was busy 4 a while.......kya baat hai? humare doston ko kya ho gaya? ye mehfil kyo itni khamosh ho gayi?........
koi baat nahi ab hum laut aaye hai........chalo fir se dard bantne ka silsila shuru karte hai............
kabhi zindagi se hum gila karke roye,
kabhi maut ki hum dua karke roye,
ajab silsila hai namaz-e-muhabbat ka,
kabhi adaa karke roye,kabhi kazaa karke roye......................
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na ki humne gila na shikwa ki zindagi se
fir bhi hume khamoshi mili
pyar me lutai humne anmol mohabbat aapne dil ki
fir bhi hume tanhai mili
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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10th October 2007, 11:27 PM
Ai Mere Dost, Mere Humsafar, VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Jo Tere Saath Me Gujra Safar VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Na Hota Ishq Ka Kuch Bhi Asar, VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Hum Idhar Theek The To Udhar VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Main Tujhko Chaahta Tha, Ye Meri Buraayee Thi..
Tabaah Jisne Kiya Tera Dar, VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Mujh Hi Ko Raas Na Shaayad Vahaa Ke Log Aaye...
Varnaa Jis Haal Me Bhi Tha Shahar VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Aaj Me Janta Hu Sab To Uljhane Hain Bahut,
Kal Me Duniya Se Tha Bekhabar, VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Raaste Me Jo Kata Sar TO Sada Ye Aayi..
Vaste Iske Namuraad Dar VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Dil Tarasta He Jisko Aaj Dekhne Ke Liye...
Kaash Aata Na Yaad Umra Bhar VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Our...
Mera Naseeb Ki Ta-Umra Usko Paa Na Saka...
Bura Mana Ki "ABHAY" Tha Magar, VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Tanhaayi Ke Tum Hi Ustaad Nahi "LAMHA"...
Kehte Hain "ABHAY" Bhi Hai Naam Kisi Ka..!!
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11th October 2007, 02:45 PM
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Originally Posted by LAMHA
WAH JANAB BAHOT KHUB
THANX FOR SHARRING THIS BEAUTIFULL SHAYRI WITH US
THANX A LOTS AGAIN
MAIN AAP KA JAWAB DENA CHAHOONGA JARA GOUR AAP BHI FARMAIYEGA
PYAR KA DUSRA NAAM INTEZAR HE
TANHAI ISKA INAAM HOTA HE
KOSHISH PYAR KA SATHI HE
ISME THAK NE WALA BAIMAAN HOTA HE
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hey friends ,
i m back....sorry i was busy 4 a while.......kya baat hai? humare doston ko kya ho gaya? ye mehfil kyo itni khamosh ho gayi?........
koi baat nahi ab hum laut aaye hai........chalo fir se dard bantne ka silsila shuru karte hai............
kabhi zindagi se hum gila karke roye,
kabhi maut ki hum dua karke roye,
ajab silsila hai namaz-e-muhabbat ka,
kabhi adaa karke roye,kabhi kazaa karke roye......................
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Hi Lamha...
Aap aaaye bahar aaye.......
Aisa kagta hai yeh mahfil fir se jawan ho gayee hai...
Bahut unda likha hai aapne.....aur bahut gahraaye bhi hai aapke is sher mein...
"ajab silsila hai namaz-e-muhabbat ka,
kabhi adaa karke roye,kabhi kazaa karke roye......................"
Hum to ishq ke mare hue hain , hamein khaaq chhanna hi aata hai...
"tum muhabbat ko khel kahate ho
ham ne barbaad zindagii kar lii
us ne dekhaa badii inaayat se
aankhon aankhon mein baat bhii kar lii...."
Aapka Dost ...
Jawed
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11th October 2007, 08:50 PM
hi lamha ji how are you ?
are you online now?
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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11th October 2007, 08:52 PM
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Ai Mere Dost, Mere Humsafar, VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Jo Tere Saath Me Gujra Safar VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Na Hota Ishq Ka Kuch Bhi Asar, VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Hum Idhar Theek The To Udhar VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Main Tujhko Chaahta Tha, Ye Meri Buraayee Thi..
Tabaah Jisne Kiya Tera Dar, VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Mujh Hi Ko Raas Na Shaayad Vahaa Ke Log Aaye...
Varnaa Jis Haal Me Bhi Tha Shahar VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Aaj Me Janta Hu Sab To Uljhane Hain Bahut,
Kal Me Duniya Se Tha Bekhabar, VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Raaste Me Jo Kata Sar TO Sada Ye Aayi..
Vaste Iske Namuraad Dar VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Dil Tarasta He Jisko Aaj Dekhne Ke Liye...
Kaash Aata Na Yaad Umra Bhar VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Our...
Mera Naseeb Ki Ta-Umra Usko Paa Na Saka...
Bura Mana Ki "ABHAY" Tha Magar, VO ACHCHHA THA.!
Tanhaayi Ke Tum Hi Ustaad Nahi "LAMHA"...
Kehte Hain "ABHAY" Bhi Hai Naam Kisi Ka..!!
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hey ABHAY,
wahhhhhhhhhhh kya baat hai janab........bahut umda ghazal likhi hai aap ne........mai aap ko aaj pehli baar padh rahi hoo........dil ko chu liya aap ke is ehsaas ne.. meri is post pe aane ke liye aur itni achi ghazal share karne ke liye mai aap ki tahe-dil se shukra-guzar hoo..thanx a lot.........
koi achi si sazaa do mujko,
chalo aisa karo,bhula do mujko,
tum se bichdoo to maut aa jaye,
dil ki gaherai se ye dua do mujko.........
aap ki dost,
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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11th October 2007, 09:07 PM
Hi Lamha...
Aap aaaye bahar aaye.......
Aisa kagta hai yeh mahfil fir se jawan ho gayee hai...
Bahut unda likha hai aapne.....aur bahut gahraaye bhi hai aapke is sher mein...
"ajab silsila hai namaz-e-muhabbat ka,
kabhi adaa karke roye,kabhi kazaa karke roye......................"
Hum to ishq ke mare hue hain , hamein khaaq chhanna hi aata hai...
"tum muhabbat ko khel kahate ho
ham ne barbaad zindagii kar lii
us ne dekhaa badii inaayat se
aankhon aankhon mein baat bhii kar lii...."
Aapka Dost ...
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hey JAWED,
wonderful feelings as usual.........its good to see u back...missed u ..........u r such a great shayar and sweet friend............keep coming to my post.........
take care..........bye.
ishq ek shokh nigaah hai, ae dost,
unpar mit jaane ki ek chaah hai, ae dost,
ishq manzil nahi,koi iraada bhi nahi,
ishq to jhooth ke jahaan se alag,sach ki ek raah hai,ae dost....................................
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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22nd October 2007, 08:42 PM
na bool ne ko kuch baaki raha
na likh ne ko kuch baaki raha
tut chu ka me kuch is kadar
ki aab na jine me kuch baaki raha
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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23rd October 2007, 02:43 PM
kis ne pukara muje
kyo me yaha chala aaya
bandh karwaya hasna dil ka
kyo ise tanhai ka toufa diya
aakho me liye intezar
kyo me online aata raha
unki ek jalak dekhne ko
kyo me tadapta raha
pyar ne kya meri haalat kar di
nazane aur kya kar paunge
nahi dekha aajtak jinko
najane kab us pal ko sajaunga
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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25th October 2007, 10:40 PM
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na bool ne ko kuch baaki raha
na likh ne ko kuch baaki raha
tut chu ka me kuch is kadar
ki aab na jine me kuch baaki raha
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Quote:
Originally Posted by nihar
kis ne pukara muje
kyo me yaha chala aaya
bandh karwaya hasna dil ka
kyo ise tanhai ka toufa diya
aakho me liye intezar
kyo me online aata raha
unki ek jalak dekhne ko
kyo me tadapta raha
pyar ne kya meri haalat kar di
nazane aur kya kar paunge
nahi dekha aajtak jinko
najane kab us pal ko sajaunga
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hey NIHAR,
ye kya baat hui yaar?.......aap itne maayus aur zindagi se haare hue ache nahi lagte ho.........in udaasion se bahar aaiye aur chale, zara muskuraiye..........ye hui na baat .........waise aap humari baat nahi taal sakte , hai na ?........hamesha khush raha kijiye..........zindagi har pal ek nayi chunauti hai........hume isse haar kar thum nahi jana hai , balke is ka mazbooti se muskurate hue saamna karna hai..........hai na ?..........so just chill...!
mere haal-e-dil pe wo sawaal karte hai,
samaj kar bhi nahi samajte, wo bhi kamaal karte hai,
mera koi bhi pal unki yaadon se khali nahi hota,
apni jaan se bhi ziyada hum unka khayaal karte hai.......
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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25th October 2007, 10:51 PM
Hey Lamha!!
ISHQ!! ISHQ!!! ISHQ!!....ise samajhne mein to humne tamam umre guzaar di..
bahut mushkil hai ise samajh pana....kuchh the jo paar nikal gaye aur TAMAM log hain jo ise paar na ker paaye aur beech mein hi doob gaye....
humne bhi ek aakhiri koshish ki thi kuchh is tarah...
sunate hain ki mil jaatii hai har chiiz duaa se
ek roz tumhen maang ke dekhenge Khudaa se
duniyaa bhii milii hai Gam-e-duniyaa bhii milaa hai
vo kyuun nahiin milataa jise maangaa thaa Khudaa se
aaiine mein vo apanii adaa dekh rahe hain
mar jaaye ki jii jaaye koii unakii balaa se
Aapka Dost
Jawed....[/quote]
kya baat hai......... JAWED,
aap ki har shayri lajawaab hoti hai........itni khubsorat baat kahi aap ne.....wakehi is ishq ko koi nahi samaj paya aajtak.........hume lagta hai ki hum sub jante hai ,par hakikat me hum anjaan hai is ishq se.......... bahut hi acha sher hai JAWED........ shayad is ka jawaab thik se na de saku........koshish karungi.......gaur farmaye................
ulfat mein yaaro aise zamane aate hai,
dard hi jab dardon ki dawaa ban jaate hai,
saans rukne ko mout nahi samajte deewane,
mout hai woh, jab yaar yaaron se bichad jaate hai.........
(not mine)
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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27th October 2007, 07:31 PM
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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28th October 2007, 04:57 AM
Namaste Tejwita Ji
Aap Khoob Likhti Hai.jabaab Nahi Aap Ki Nazamo Ka.bhi Hum To Aap Ke Kaaiyeil Hue.hum Ne Radio To Sunna Bandh Kar Dia Hai But Humse Raha Nahi Gaya Aap Ko Daad Dene Se.maikash Sahib Ko Bhi Hamaara Salaam Keh Dijjiyega..
Salaam Sahiba
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29th October 2007, 07:04 PM
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Namaste Tejwita Ji
Aap Khoob Likhti Hai.jabaab Nahi Aap Ki Nazamo Ka.bhi Hum To Aap Ke Kaaiyeil Hue.hum Ne Radio To Sunna Bandh Kar Dia Hai But Humse Raha Nahi Gaya Aap Ko Daad Dene Se.maikash Sahib Ko Bhi Hamaara Salaam Keh Dijjiyega..
Salaam Sahiba
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hi FARISHTA JI,
aap yaha kiski baat kar rahe hai?...is na-cheej ka naam LAMHA hai.......aap ko shayad koi galat fehmi hui hai....main aap ko nahi pehchanti...........kripya apna parichay dijiye................
aap ki dost,
LAMHA........................
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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3rd November 2007, 08:35 PM
Dosto aaj maine bahot samay ke baad ek gazal likhi he yeh me aapne pariwar se matlab ki aap sab se share karna chahta hoon shayad aap sab ko yeh aachi lage aur shayad nahi par jo bhi lage jaisi bhi lage plz plz plz muje bataiye ga bina reply diye maat jana yaaro aur modretorji agar aapko yeh post koi gazal na lage to plz aap aapne hisab se ise jaha hona chahiye waha bhej dijiye ga to aap ki badi maherbani hogi
is post ko gungunane ki koshish kijiyega aapko yeh shanti bhare watawaran me aachi lagegi
Khali haath aaya tha me
Khali chala jaunga
Zindagike is safar ko
Yahi chood jaunga
Khali haath aaya tha me
khali chala jaunga
Bandh thi mutthi meri
khuli chood jaunga
na laya tha sath mere
nahi kuch le jaunga
Khali haath aaya tha me
khali chala jaunga
Lahere thi isme aur
mouze bhi uuchle the
zindagi ke is toofan ko
yahi chood jaunga
Khali haath aaya tha me
khali chala jaunga
Sine me aag thi aur
aangar dil me the
is dahekti zindagi ko
yahi booza jaunga
Khali haath aaya tha me
khali chala jaunga
Pyar tha baato me aur
nayno me intezar tha
unhe paneki umeed ko
yahi chood jaunga
Khali haath aaya tha me
khali chala jaunga
Dost bhi the jeevan me
NIHAR khud ek dost tha
Is najook si dosti ko
Yaad zaroor aaunga
Khali haath aaya tha me
Khali chala jaunga
Khali haath aaya tha me
Khali chala jaunga
Zindagike is safar ko
Yahi chood jaunga
(yaaro reply karna maat bhoolna)
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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6th November 2007, 11:19 PM
Lamha ji ise chhoti si baat na kahen ...isme bahut gahraai hai...
Bahut achcha sher likha hai aapne Lamha ji....
kaash ke hum aapke is sher ka jawaab de pate...per aaj to hamein ashaar hi nahin mil rahe ...fir bhi ek chhoti si koshish ki hai...gaur farmayen...
Kaun jaanta hai anjaam-e-mohabbat is jahan mein.
Gar jaante hote to mohabbat kyun kerte.
AApka Dost,
Jawed.....
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bahut khub JAWED,
dil ke dushman se hi dil laga baithe,
unki saadgi se fareb kha baithe,
pattharon se tha apna rishta,
fir bhi shishe ka ghar bana baithe..........
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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6th November 2007, 11:26 PM
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Dosto aaj maine bahot samay ke baad ek gazal likhi he yeh me aapne pariwar se matlab ki aap sab se share karna chahta hoon shayad aap sab ko yeh aachi lage aur shayad nahi par jo bhi lage jaisi bhi lage plz plz plz muje bataiye ga bina reply diye maat jana yaaro aur modretorji agar aapko yeh post koi gazal na lage to plz aap aapne hisab se ise jaha hona chahiye waha bhej dijiye ga to aap ki badi maherbani hogi
is post ko gungunane ki koshish kijiyega aapko yeh shanti bhare watawaran me aachi lagegi
Khali haath aaya tha me
Khali chala jaunga
Zindagike is safar ko
Yahi chood jaunga
Khali haath aaya tha me
khali chala jaunga
Bandh thi mutthi meri
khuli chood jaunga
na laya tha sath mere
nahi kuch le jaunga
Khali haath aaya tha me
khali chala jaunga
Lahere thi isme aur
mouze bhi uuchle the
zindagi ke is toofan ko
yahi chood jaunga
Khali haath aaya tha me
khali chala jaunga
Sine me aag thi aur
aangar dil me the
is dahekti zindagi ko
yahi booza jaunga
Khali haath aaya tha me
khali chala jaunga
Pyar tha baato me aur
nayno me intezar tha
unhe paneki umeed ko
yahi chood jaunga
Khali haath aaya tha me
khali chala jaunga
Dost bhi the jeevan me
NIHAR khud ek dost tha
Is najook si dosti ko
Yaad zaroor aaunga
Khali haath aaya tha me
Khali chala jaunga
Khali haath aaya tha me
Khali chala jaunga
Zindagike is safar ko
Yahi chood jaunga
(yaaro reply karna maat bhoolna)
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ufffffffffffffff NIHAR,
zindagi se itni maayusi ????????....khuda kare aap ki sari mushkilen aasan ho jaye...aur aap ko duniya ki sari khushiya haasil ho.....AAMEN........
aap ke liye ek sher arz hai.....hamari dosti ke naam.............
du'a karte hai khuda se hum sar jukaye,
ae dost tu apni manzil ko paaye,
agar kabhi teri rahon me andhera aaye,
roshni ke liye khuda hum ko jalaye.......
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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hi -
6th November 2007, 11:40 PM
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Originally Posted by LAMHA
ufffffffffffffff NIHAR,
zindagi se itni maayusi ????????....khuda kare aap ki sari mushkilen aasan ho jaye...aur aap ko duniya ki sari khushiya haasil ho.....AAMEN........
aap ke liye ek sher arz hai.....hamari dosti ke naam.............
du'a karte hai khuda se hum sar jukaye,
ae dost tu apni manzil ko paaye,
agar kabhi teri rahon me andhera aaye,
roshni ke liye khuda hum ko jalaye.......
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yaar yeh sher ab bahut puarana ho chuka hai, chaba chuke bahut ise. kuchh naya likhte hai
Apni khushiyaaN ham tum par kurbaan karte hai
Dost teri dostii ko bandagi-o-imaan karte hai
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aage kuchh sooz nahii raha........................
regards
manu
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8th November 2007, 07:40 PM
bahut khub JAWED,
dil ke dushman se hi dil laga baithe,
unki saadgi se fareb kha baithe,
pattharon se tha apna rishta,
fir bhi shishe ka ghar bana baithe..........[/quote]
Bahut khoobh Lamha ji....
Aah ko chahiye ek umar asar hone tak,
fir kaun kambakhat jeeta hai teri zulfon ke sar hone tak.......
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8th November 2007, 09:23 PM
kya baat hai........JAWED,
jaanti hoo ki bewafaa hai wo,
fir bhi dil ke hathon fareb khati ho,
roz kehti ho ki bhool jaungi use,
roz isi baat ko bhool jaati ho.......................
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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8th November 2007, 10:24 PM
Is Aas Main Chala Jaaoun Ga Main Ye Jahan Chor Kar
Ye Shayad Mera Marna Hi Kuch Kaam Aaye Ga
Shayad Chali Aaye Tu Us Pal Mere Paas Daur Kar
Jis Pal Tere Paas Meri Maut Ka Paigaam Aaye Ga
SAJID KHAN
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9th November 2007, 04:03 PM
mei ne apna dil ek ese dil jordiya jis dil ke saath bewafai huwi ho
ye samaj ke, ke wo dil khabi mujhko apne se juda karega
lekin ye kya huwa oos dil ne mere saath bewafai ki
wot shalll i do mei kya karu usne mujh kaha ke i lov u do u lov me i dinndt wannna say no so mene ha kaha wo india or mei england jab me yaha ai to mei usko fone karti thi lekin am 7 mahine guza gaye uske tarap mei ab jab mei usko fone karti hoo to wo apne kaan pe fone rakta ha par kuch bi nahi bolta mei kya karoo siwaye use bhool ...........usko bhool na mere lye na munkin hai......mujhe to sirf itna jaaan na hai ke wo mujhse pyaar katahai ya nahi...........dosto meri madad karo plz .....tujhe bhool jana jana mumkin nahi tu yaaad na aye aise koi din nahi.............uske bager hum majayenge ye saaab kehte hain ....hum karjayenge.................meri zindagi aaap logo ge haath mei......
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9th November 2007, 07:37 PM
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mei ne apna dil ek ese dil jordiya jis dil ke saath bewafai huwi ho
ye samaj ke, ke wo dil khabi mujhko apne se juda karega
lekin ye kya huwa oos dil ne mere saath bewafai ki
wot shalll i do mei kya karu usne mujh kaha ke i lov u do u lov me i dinndt wannna say no so mene ha kaha wo india or mei england jab me yaha ai to mei usko fone karti thi lekin am 7 mahine guza gaye uske tarap mei ab jab mei usko fone karti hoo to wo apne kaan pe fone rakta ha par kuch bi nahi bolta mei kya karoo siwaye use bhool ...........usko bhool na mere lye na munkin hai......mujhe to sirf itna jaaan na hai ke wo mujhse pyaar katahai ya nahi...........dosto meri madad karo plz .....tujhe bhool jana jana mumkin nahi tu yaaad na aye aise koi din nahi.............uske bager hum majayenge ye saaab kehte hain ....hum karjayenge.................meri zindagi aaap logo ge haath mei......
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hi AASEFA,
aap ki baten padh kar lagta hai ki aap ne jis shksh se bhi pyaar kiya hai wo yakeenan bewafaa hai.aap ne beshak usse be-inteha mohabbat ki hai.par wo is mohabbat ko pehchan nahi paya hai.aap ke calls ka jawaab nahi dena aur aap se baat karna band kar dena,in baton se saaf zahir hai ki wo aap ko taalna (avoid) chahta hai.mai ek dost honeke naate aap se sirf itna hi kahongi ki aap bhi use bhoolne ki koshish kare.kyon ki is me loss us shksh ka hai, jo wo aap ki mohabbat ko samaj nahi paya.use is baat ka ehsaas nahi hai ki itni mohabbat milna aaj ke zamane me na-mumkin hai aur fir bhi usne aap ki mohabbat ko thukra diya.mai janti ho ki apne pyaar ko bholna bahut mushkil hai,par na-mumkin to kuch bhi nahi hai.aap apne aap ko apne doston me ya zindagi ki baaki cheezon me busy rakhiye.mai janti hoo ki ye aasan nahi hai,par us bewafaa ke liye khud ko tadpana bhi thik nahi hai.wo aap ke bagair khush reh sakta hai to aap bhi use dikha dejiye ki aap bhi uske bina jee sakti hai.aap ko apne aap me itni himmat to jutani hi hogi.hum ladkiya kamzor nahi hai ,balki hum to taqat ka pratik mani jati hai.bas itna hi kehna chahungi,ab faisla aap ke hath me hai ki aap use bhulakar khush rehna chahti hai ya uski yaad me tadap kar apne aap ko sazaa dena chahti hai.sazaa to use milni chahiye,aap ko nahi.to sambhaliye apne aap ko.
muje pori umeed hai ki aap ki zindagi me koi na koi zaroor be-inteha mohabbat lekar aayega.aur aap ko dher sari khushiya milegi.good luck.take care.
AAP KI DOST,
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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hi lamha -
9th November 2007, 10:56 PM
wah lamha kitni achhi salah di hai tumne really hum to aapke deewane ho gaye yaar aap kitna achha sochti ho bas aage mujhe bhi aisi salah dena agar mujhe koi problem aaye to ok bye aapka friend
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28th November 2007, 08:40 PM
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mei ne apna dil ek ese dil jordiya jis dil ke saath bewafai huwi ho
ye samaj ke, ke wo dil khabi mujhko apne se juda karega
lekin ye kya huwa oos dil ne mere saath bewafai ki
wot shalll i do mei kya karu usne mujh kaha ke i lov u do u lov me i dinndt wannna say no so mene ha kaha wo india or mei england jab me yaha ai to mei usko fone karti thi lekin am 7 mahine guza gaye uske tarap mei ab jab mei usko fone karti hoo to wo apne kaan pe fone rakta ha par kuch bi nahi bolta mei kya karoo siwaye use bhool ...........usko bhool na mere lye na munkin hai......mujhe to sirf itna jaaan na hai ke wo mujhse pyaar katahai ya nahi...........dosto meri madad karo plz .....tujhe bhool jana jana mumkin nahi tu yaaad na aye aise koi din nahi.............uske bager hum majayenge ye saaab kehte hain ....hum karjayenge.................meri zindagi aaap logo ge haath mei......
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raat hogi to chand bhi duhai dega,
khawabon me uska chehra dikhai dega,
ye mohabbat hai zara soch ke karna,
ek aansoo bhi gira to sunai dega.........
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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1st December 2007, 06:43 PM
Hamari Sher Pe Bhi Koyi Salah De Dijiye Lamha Jee
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Is Aas Main Chala Jaaoun Ga Main Ye Jahan Chor Kar
Ye Shayad Mera Marna Hi Kuch Kaam Aaye Ga
Shayad Chali Aaye Tu Us Pal Mere Paas Daur Kar
Jis Pal Tere Paas Meri Maut Ka Paigaam Aaye Ga
SAJID KHAN
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Hamari Sher Pe Bhi Koyi Salah De Dijiye Lamha Jee
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SAJID sahab.....jo log bewafaa ho jate hai , unhe kisi ki maut se bhi koi fark nahi padta kyon ki wo patthar dil insaan hote hai aur pattharon me feelings nahi hoti....
lijiye aap ka jawaab haazir hai............
dost kuch is qadar bewafaa ho gaye,
chalte chalte safar me judaa ho gaye,
izhaar-e-mohabbat hi kiya tha maine,
na jaane kyon wo mujse khafaa ho gaye,
unki aankh me ek bhi aansoo nahi,
hum jinki chahat me fanaa ho gaye.......................
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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