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Love Adhuri Chahat - 4th November 2011, 09:43 PM
aaj mila uss se barso baad
dil fir dharak utha uski awaz se
fir dil ki dar o diwar me uska naam aa
gaya
uski ankhon me fir dub gaya
lambe intezar ka pal hua aaj pura
dil k angan me ek naye kali khil aye
uss me khushbu thi uske ehsaso ki
uss me khil khilawat thi uske muskaan
ki
mera ko chu kar woh khud pighal gaye
mujhe gale laga kar apni barson ki
chahat puri ki
mere honto ko chum kar
meri payase honto par apne payar ka
rass dia
mere galon ko chum kar
mere chehre par laali la di
bahut roye mere seene lag kar
apnl adhuri chahto ka ijhar kia
mere bin 4saal tadap tadap k gujare.....

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Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai,
Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai,
Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare,
Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai?
   
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6th November 2011, 10:18 PM
bahut umdaa likha hai aapne

jis tarah se aapne last me aake ehsaah bikhere hai wo laazawaab hai.

mere galon ko chum kar
mere chehre par laali la di
bahut roye mere seene lag kar
apnl adhuri chahto ka ijhar kia

khayal rakhiyega

Zid uski mera wazood hi mita dene ki,
aur aarzoo meri sirf usko paa lene ki.
   
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7th November 2011, 03:23 PM
beautiful feelings ST ji.....
   
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7th November 2011, 11:33 PM
Waah Anil bhai... Kamaal ka likhaa hai jee... Tusee to chaa gaye.... Likhte rahiye.. Khush rahiye...

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9th November 2011, 08:47 AM
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bahut umdaa likha hai aapne

jis tarah se aapne last me aake ehsaah bikhere hai wo laazawaab hai.

mere galon ko chum kar
mere chehre par laali la di
bahut roye mere seene lag kar
apnl adhuri chahto ka ijhar kia

khayal rakhiyega
bahut bahut shukria aapka ki shayri pasand aye humari

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9th November 2011, 08:49 AM
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Waah Anil bhai... Kamaal ka likhaa hai jee... Tusee to chaa gaye.... Likhte rahiye.. Khush rahiye...

Shaad...
thanks Shaoib pasand kar ne k liye,yeh shayri main apne par likhi thi,kyuki hum kisi apne ko mil kar aye the

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14th November 2011, 06:07 PM
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aaj mila uss se barso baad
dil fir dharak utha uski awaz se
fir dil ki dar o diwar me uska naam aa
gaya
uski ankhon me fir dub gaya
lambe intezar ka pal hua aaj pura
dil k angan me ek naye kali khil aye
uss me khushbu thi uske ehsaso ki
uss me khil khilawat thi uske muskaan
ki
mera ko chu kar woh khud pighal gaye
mujhe gale laga kar apni barson ki
chahat puri ki
mere honto ko chum kar
meri payase honto par apne payar ka
rass dia
mere galon ko chum kar
mere chehre par laali la di
bahut roye mere seene lag kar
apnl adhuri chahto ka ijhar kia
mere bin 4saal tadap tadap k gujare.....
Wow !!! its so beautiful feelings...Thanks for nice sharing in this thread....keep it up.......
   
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15th November 2011, 08:02 PM
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Wow !!! its so beautiful feelings...Thanks for nice sharing in this thread....keep it up.......
thanx Kumkum ji apko meri shayri pasand kar ne k liye.

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