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Ek ladki.... - 7th June 2015, 03:12 PM

Kuch khyaal zahan me aaye unhe bas vaise hee aapke samne rakh rahi hoon ek kavita ke roop me..bataiyega kaise lage..

Ek ladki bahut nazuk badi bholi si
Ghar ke angan me bani rangoli si
chehre par ek thahraaw sa tha
Santushti ka ek bhaw sa tha.

Babul ki bagiya mahkane ko
karti har jatan sajane ko..
Sakhiyon ki hansi thitholi si
Rango me thi bas vo holi si.

Aankhon me kaid kiye sapne
Vo ghanto baithi rahti thi
bezubaan un phoolon se
Vo jane kya kya kahti thi.

Vo sapne vo uski baatein
jo usne kabhi nahi baaTein.
Kuch poore huye kuch nahi huye
Nikle jhoothe kuch sahi huye.

Ankhon bhi ab khamosh si thiin
chehre ke bhaaw bhi gaye badal.
ek pal ko bhi ab chain na tha
Yoon bahti ab nadiya kal kal.

Patthar ho ya koi phool hee ho
Vo rah banati khud ke liye
Sakhiyan sathi ab koi nahi
Awaaz de kisko vo sudh ke liye.

Jeevan ki uthal puthal ke beech
Sabko khush rakhne ki chah me
Vo ladki kahiin kho si gayi..
Sangdil duniya ki raah me.



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Accha likha hai aapne madhu jee.......keep it up...



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7th June 2015, 07:57 PM

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Aik achchhi koshish par dil se daad... likhte rahiye


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8th June 2015, 10:27 AM

Waahhh madhu ji.. kyaa khoob panktiyaan likhi hain aapnr..
Aapko padh kar hameshaa hi kuch nayaa dekhne ko miltaa hai..
Aur is baar jo aapne ek ladkii ki mano dashaa pesh kii hai wo waaqai kabile tareef hai..
Meri duaa hai ke aap aise ache ache kalaam likhtii rahen.. khush rahen...

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kya baat hai madhu jee khoob rahe ye ehsaas aapke
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Waahhh madhu ji.. kyaa khoob panktiyaan likhi hain aapnr..
Aapko padh kar hameshaa hi kuch nayaa dekhne ko miltaa hai..
Aur is baar jo aapne ek ladkii ki mano dashaa pesh kii hai wo waaqai kabile tareef hai..
Meri duaa hai ke aap aise ache ache kalaam likhtii rahen.. khush rahen...

Shaad..
sahi pahchana aapne ek ladki ki zindgi kin kin badlaon se guzrti hai ye kavita un ehsason ka ek katra matra hai...mujhe achcha laga aapne sirf kavita ke bol nahi balki bhavon ko bhi samjha....

aabhari hoon aapke sath ki aur duaon ki shukraguzar hoon...

yoon hee hausla badhate rahein..koshish jari rahegi...



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12th June 2015, 09:13 PM

aapki peshkash ko perne pe ek gana yaad aa gaya ....

Ek ladki ko dekha tau aisa laga jaise khilta gulab , jaise shayar ka khwab

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Kuch khyaal zahan me aaye unhe bas vaise hee aapke samne rakh rahi hoon ek kavita ke roop me..bataiyega kaise lage..

Ek ladki bahut nazuk badi bholi si
Ghar ke angan me bani rangoli si
chehre par ek thahraaw sa tha
Santushti ka ek bhaw sa tha.

Babul ki bagiya mahkane ko
karti har jatan sajane ko..
Sakhiyon ki hansi thitholi si
Rango me thi bas vo holi si.

Aankhon me kaid kiye sapne
Vo ghanto baithi rahti thi
bezubaan un phoolon se
Vo jane kya kya kahti thi.

Vo sapne vo uski baatein
jo usne kabhi nahi baaTein.
Kuch poore huye kuch nahi huye
Nikle jhoothe kuch sahi huye.

Ankhon bhi ab khamosh si thiin
chehre ke bhaaw bhi gaye badal.
ek pal ko bhi ab chain na tha
Yoon bahti ab nadiya kal kal.

Patthar ho ya koi phool hee ho
Vo rah banati khud ke liye
Sakhiyan sathi ab koi nahi
Awaaz de kisko vo sudh ke liye.

Jeevan ki uthal puthal ke beech
Sabko khush rakhne ki chah me
Vo ladki kahiin kho si gayi..
Sangdil duniya ki raah me.
Bahut khoob Madhu, behad saade shabdon mein aapne ek tasveer bana di, ek muskaan si aayi chehre par, ek sawaal chotaa sa par chaap gehri si...yunhi likhte rahiYe azaad khayaalon ko lafzon ke takaaze mein tolte rahiYe



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Madhu jee

Namaste

Aik achchhi koshish par dil se daad... likhte rahiye


Aapka

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Shukriya dhaval ji..ki aapko meri koshish pasand aayi.....
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Bohot hi sundar kavita likhi hai madhu ji aap ne....
Bhawnayen man ko sparsh kar gai......bhale hi ye aapki jeevani ho...par ye har nari ki kahani hai....bohot hi sundar.
Aise hi kavitaye bhi likha karen.....

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Waahhh madhu ji.. kyaa khoob panktiyaan likhi hain aapnr..
Aapko padh kar hameshaa hi kuch nayaa dekhne ko miltaa hai..
Aur is baar jo aapne ek ladkii ki mano dashaa pesh kii hai wo waaqai kabile tareef hai..
Meri duaa hai ke aap aise ache ache kalaam likhtii rahen.. khush rahen...

Shaad..
Aapko ye kavita achchi lagi khushi huyi shaad ji....
Bas man ke bhavon ko shabdon me baandhne ki koshish karti hoon...
Duaaon ke liye bahut shukriya....
Yoon hee sath dete rahein....

Salamat rahein........



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Ek ladki ko dekha tau aisa laga jaise khilta gulab , jaise shayar ka khwab

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Ummeed hai koshish pasand aayi hogi aapko..

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Aate rahiyega....

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Bahut khoob Madhu, behad saade shabdon mein aapne ek tasveer bana di, ek muskaan si aayi chehre par, ek sawaal chotaa sa par chaap gehri si...yunhi likhte rahiYe azaad khayaalon ko lafzon ke takaaze mein tolte rahiYe
Kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai ki khayalo ki dhun me kalam khud hee kkuch likhti chali jati hai....aur kagaz par jazbaat ubhar aate hain...tabhi dil ko sukoon pahunchta hai.....

Shukriya anu..aapne is ehsason ko padha aur samjha......

Aise hee sath ki ummeed aage bhi rahegi...

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Bohot hi sundar kavita likhi hai madhu ji aap ne....
Bhawnayen man ko sparsh kar gai......bhale hi ye aapki jeevani ho...par ye har nari ki kahani hai....bohot hi sundar.
Aise hi kavitaye bhi likha karen.....

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Kavita ki bhavnayein aapka man chhoo payiin achcha laga bhushan ji.....
Bahut dhanywaad aapka..aage bhi aapke sath ki umeed karti hun...

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