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Love Bewafia pe unki - 13th October 2012, 08:15 PM
maziye ishq ke zakhm ubharne lage
jab se mere samne woh gujarne lage

dekhege kya ab tumhe woh
tum jo aaina dekh sawarne lage

chehak jate the jo meri shokyon par
ab mushkurahat par hi bigadne lage

kamaal aashiqi hain tumhari bhi aqs
ab tu bewafia par bhi unki tum marne lage



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aqsh sahab pehle to aapka swagat hai paiwar me,

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14th December 2012, 09:16 PM
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maziye ishq ke zakhm ubharne lage
jab se mere samne woh gujarne lage

dekhege kya ab tumhe woh
tum jo aaina dekh sawarne lage

chehak jate the jo meri shokyon par
ab mushkurahat par hi bigadne lage

kamaal aashiqi hain tumhari bhi aqs
ab tu bewafia par bhi unki tum marne lage


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Pahlay to ayk umda kaavish par dhayron daad qabool karayn. Aapki tahreer parh saaf nazar aataa haye ki aap shayree ka zauq rakhtay hayn aur umda shayree ka potential rakhtay hayn..please keep writing practising here with us....


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14th December 2012, 09:24 PM
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maziye ishq ke zakhm ubharne lage
jab se mere samne woh gujarne lage

dekhege kya ab tumhe woh
tum jo aaina dekh sawarne lage

chehak jate the jo meri shokyon par
ab mushkurahat par hi bigadne lage

kamaal aashiqi hain tumhari bhi aqs
ab tu bewafia par bhi unki tum marne lage


bahut achche aqs ji khush rahein aawad rahain...................

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18th December 2012, 08:36 AM
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maziye ishq ke zakhm ubharne lage
jab se mere samne woh gujarne lage

dekhege kya ab tumhe woh
tum jo aaina dekh sawarne lage

chehak jate the jo meri shokyon par
ab mushkurahat par hi bigadne lage

kamaal aashiqi hain tumhari bhi aqs
ab tu bewafia par bhi unki tum marne lage

aqs sahab bahut khoobsurat ghazal huee hai janaab
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26th December 2012, 06:39 PM
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maziye ishq ke zakhm ubharne lage
jab se mere samne woh gujarne lage

dekhege kya ab tumhe woh
tum jo aaina dekh sawarne lage

chehak jate the jo meri shokyon par
ab mushkurahat par hi bigadne lage

kamaal aashiqi hain tumhari bhi aqs
ab tu bewafia par bhi unki tum marne lage
WaaH ! Nihayat Khoob !!

UmdaaH Ghazal Huee Aqs JI !!

Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!



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ab mushkurahat par hi bigadne lage

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