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Gazal:Itna maasoom to dard'e'jigar na thha.....D*D* -
24th June 2007, 09:46 PM
Itna maasoom to dard'e'jigar na thha
Jisme.N rahe, wahi apna ghar na thha
Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa
Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha
Hum bhi aise tishnagii ke maare hai.N
Chale bhi udhar, rastaa jidhar na thha
Izhaar'e'muhabbat teri jaanib hua hota
Lamha'e'wisaal itna muqtasar na thha
Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye
Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha
Kabhi rango.N ki tarhaa bikhra tera ishq
Ro diye hum jo aaj vo tir'e'nazar na thha
Aaj khaamoshii se sitam ''Pooja'' pe kiya
Warna kal talak tu itna be'kadar na thha
Grazie
Apki dost
Pooja
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25th June 2007, 10:22 AM
namaskaaR pooja:
baRe dino baad aap fir seY apnii kosiSh ko liYe bazm meiN taShreef laaYii..khuShii hu'ii..aor woH bhii itne khoob andaaz ke saath..aik umdaa Ghazal aaj aapkii aur seY paRHne ko milii hai..khaas t'aur pe Ghazal ka maqtaa be-Had pasaNd aaYa..ess mukammal kosiSh par mere dil se niklii huwii daad ko qabool farmaaYeN..aur yuuNhii apnii umdaa kosiShoN ke Z^ariiYe ess bazm ko sajaate rahiYe
apnaa khayaal raKheN..khuSh raheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka dost
Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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25th June 2007, 10:30 AM
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Originally Posted by pooja4588
Itna maasoom to dard'e'jigar na thha
Jisme.N rahe, wahi apna ghar na thha
Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa
Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha
Hum bhi aise tishnagii ke maare hai.N
Chale bhi udhar, rastaa jidhar na thha
Izhaar'e'muhabbat teri jaanib hua hota
Lamha'e'wisaal itna muqtasar na thha
Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye
Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha
Kabhi rango.N ki tarhaa bikhra tera ishq
Ro diye hum jo aaj vo tir'e'nazar na thha
Aaj khaamoshii se sitam ''Pooja'' pe kiya
Warna kal talak tu itna be'kadar na thha
Grazie
Apki dost
Pooja
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NAMASTE POOJA JI bahut khoob likha hay aapne haqeeqat ke bahut kareeb rahi yeh nazam aapki alfaz aur andaz dono hi acche hay younhi likhti rahiye
aap ka dost
"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.
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25th June 2007, 01:03 PM
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Itna maasoom to dard'e'jigar na thha
Jisme.N rahe, wahi apna ghar na thha
Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa
Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha
Hum bhi aise tishnagii ke maare hai.N
Chale bhi udhar, rastaa jidhar na thha
Izhaar'e'muhabbat teri jaanib hua hota
Lamha'e'wisaal itna muqtasar na thha
Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye
Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha
Kabhi rango.N ki tarhaa bikhra tera ishq
Ro diye hum jo aaj vo tir'e'nazar na thha
Aaj khaamoshii se sitam ''Pooja'' pe kiya
Warna kal talak tu itna be'kadar na thha
Grazie
Apki dost
Pooja
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Kya alfaaz likhe hain yaar.... Aapne to Pal bhar ke liye mujhe apni mohabbat ka deedar karwa diya.. Dil keh raha hai...
Aaa kar lein koi Sanjeen Jurm hum bhi aaj
Marne ke liye shayad Mohabbat Kaafi nahin
Ruksati mango ab Khuda se Jism ki mere
Ke Rooh to ab yun bhi Baaki nahin
Kisse karein Shikwa Jaam Khali hone ka
Ke Maikhane mein ab koi Saaki nahin
Ke jiske Deedar ko Taras gayi hain Aankhen
Aaj wo Majaar se bahar aane ko Raazi nahin
Ke Aaj wo Majaar se bahar aane ko Raazi nahin...
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25th June 2007, 01:57 PM
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Itna maasoom to dard'e'jigar na thha
Jisme.N rahe, wahi apna ghar na thha
Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa
Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha
Hum bhi aise tishnagii ke maare hai.N
Chale bhi udhar, rastaa jidhar na thha
Izhaar'e'muhabbat teri jaanib hua hota
Lamha'e'wisaal itna muqtasar na thha
Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye
Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha
Kabhi rango.N ki tarhaa bikhra tera ishq
Ro diye hum jo aaj vo tir'e'nazar na thha
Aaj khaamoshii se sitam ''Pooja'' pe kiya
Warna kal talak tu itna be'kadar na thha
Grazie
Apki dost
Pooja
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ohhhh very touchy sweety daad ke liye alfaz nahi her sher hi bohat gehrey ahsasaat liye howe hai ............
Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa
Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha
Hum bhi aise tishnagii ke maare hai.N
Chale bhi udhar, rastaa jidhar na thha
Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye
Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha
bohat khub dear likhti raho aur umeed hai ye sirf poetry hi hai isse ziada kuch hona bhi nahi chahiye humesha khush raho hansti muskurati raho........
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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25th June 2007, 03:05 PM
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Itna maasoom to dard'e'jigar na thha
Jisme.N rahe, wahi apna ghar na thha
Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa
Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha
Hum bhi aise tishnagii ke maare hai.N
Chale bhi udhar, rastaa jidhar na thha
Izhaar'e'muhabbat teri jaanib hua hota
Lamha'e'wisaal itna muqtasar na thha
Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye
Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha
Kabhi rango.N ki tarhaa bikhra tera ishq
Ro diye hum jo aaj vo tir'e'nazar na thha
Aaj khaamoshii se sitam ''Pooja'' pe kiya
Warna kal talak tu itna be'kadar na thha
Grazie
Apki dost
Pooja
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hiiiiii matako raani
kaise mizaz hain aapke
aaj is gazal ko padke yakeen hi nahi ho raha ki tum bhii itna sanjeeda gazal likh saktii ho. wakai itne dino mainnahi aaya isii ka asar ha i ki kitna behtreen likhne lagii ho.........
Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye
Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha
kamal ka sher likha hai ye
daad hazir hai kabool farmaiyega janab
shukriya
duaaon ke sath izajat
dilip
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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25th June 2007, 05:11 PM
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Itna maasoom to dard'e'jigar na thha
Jisme.N rahe, wahi apna ghar na thha
Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa
Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha
Hum bhi aise tishnagii ke maare hai.N
Chale bhi udhar, rastaa jidhar na thha
Izhaar'e'muhabbat teri jaanib hua hota
Lamha'e'wisaal itna muqtasar na thha
Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye
Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha
Kabhi rango.N ki tarhaa bikhra tera ishq
Ro diye hum jo aaj vo tir'e'nazar na thha
Aaj khaamoshii se sitam ''Pooja'' pe kiya
Warna kal talak tu itna be'kadar na thha
Grazie
Apki dost
Pooja
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meri pyari pyari matko gudiya
bahut accha likha hai tumne, etni sanjeedgi kaha se aaye.....har sher dil par dastak de gaya...gudiya tujhe yakeen na hoga..maine teri es gazal ko baar baar pada aur ab reply kar rahi hoon...gudiya dua karti hoon ki yeh dard bas shayri tak hi seemat rahe, meri matko hamesha hansti muskurati rahe aur eski shayri din-b-din nikharti jaye.....
bahut sare pyar ke saath
teri diiiii
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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27th June 2007, 05:44 PM
hi pooja...
sach kaha di ne bahut hi sanjeedgi se likha hain...... meri taraf se daad!
yeh ashar jyada acche lage
Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa
Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha
Aaj khaamoshii se sitam ''Pooja'' pe kiya
Warna kal talak tu itna be'kadar na thha
mausam
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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28th June 2007, 12:44 AM
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Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you
namaskaaR pooja:
baRe dino baad aap fir seY apnii kosiSh ko liYe bazm meiN taShreef laaYii..khuShii hu'ii..aor woH bhii itne khoob andaaz ke saath..aik umdaa Ghazal aaj aapkii aur seY paRHne ko milii hai..khaas t'aur pe Ghazal ka maqtaa be-Had pasaNd aaYa..ess mukammal kosiSh par mere dil se niklii huwii daad ko qabool farmaaYeN..aur yuuNhii apnii umdaa kosiShoN ke Z^ariiYe ess bazm ko sajaate rahiYe
apnaa khayaal raKheN..khuSh raheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka dost
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Ji namskaar Dhaval ji,
Aapka meri post pe sabse pahalaa reply, khushi huii ye dekh kar. Kabhi kabhi aisa hotaa hai ke hum jo kahanaa chaahte.n han.n, vo kahe nahi.n paate, ab jo kahanaa hai vo to kahanaa hi hai naa, bas isi liye likh daali gazal. Aapko pasand aai, aapne saraahaa uske liye aapko tah'e'dil se shukriiya.
Ummiid hai ke aapka saath yu.n aage bhi milega.
Ijaazat!!
Grazie
Apki dost
Pooja
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nice -
29th June 2007, 10:17 AM
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Itna maasoom to dard'e'jigar na thha
Jisme.N rahe, wahi apna ghar na thha
Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa
Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha
Hum bhi aise tishnagii ke maare hai.N
Chale bhi udhar, rastaa jidhar na thha
Izhaar'e'muhabbat teri jaanib hua hota
Lamha'e'wisaal itna muqtasar na thha
Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye
Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha
Kabhi rango.N ki tarhaa bikhra tera ishq
Ro diye hum jo aaj vo tir'e'nazar na thha
Aaj khaamoshii se sitam ''Pooja'' pe kiya
Warna kal talak tu itna be'kadar na thha
Grazie
Apki dost
Pooja
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pooooooooooja meri gudiya ko mera pyaar bhara namaskaar......to aap aaj kal itna acha or meaning ful likhne laggi ho matlab hamari gudiya ab bari ho gayii hai....sachi pooja tumne bhut acha likha hai yun hii koshish karti raho.....tumhara ye share behad pasand aaiya......
Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa
Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha
apna khyaal rakhna...........raj.........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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9th July 2007, 03:37 PM
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Originally Posted by Mohammad Kashif
NAMASTE POOJA JI bahut khoob likha hay aapne haqeeqat ke bahut kareeb rahi yeh nazam aapki alfaz aur andaz dono hi acche hay younhi likhti rahiye
aap ka dost
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Kaasif ji tasliim'aat mohtaram,
Ji bahot bahot shukriya mujhe saraahane ke liye. Aapko yahaa.n dekh kar khushi hui. Bas kuch gam thha jo kaagaz pe utar gaya. Aapko pasand ayaa khush'kismati rahi meri.
Saath dete rahiyega.
Grazie
Aapki dost,
Pooja
===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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14th July 2007, 04:08 AM
hello pooja,
kya haal hai? bahut acha likha hai aapne. har taraf dard hi dard hai is kavita mein. dil ko chu gayi. itna dard....... aap ki rachna humein bahut achi lagi.
app aise hi likthe rahein.
tc
manish
Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...
Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....
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19th July 2007, 04:12 PM
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Originally Posted by Widhani
Kya alfaaz likhe hain yaar.... Aapne to Pal bhar ke liye mujhe apni mohabbat ka deedar karwa diya.. Dil keh raha hai...
Aaa kar lein koi Sanjeen Jurm hum bhi aaj
Marne ke liye shayad Mohabbat Kaafi nahin
Ruksati mango ab Khuda se Jism ki mere
Ke Rooh to ab yun bhi Baaki nahin
Kisse karein Shikwa Jaam Khali hone ka
Ke Maikhane mein ab koi Saaki nahin
Ke jiske Deedar ko Taras gayi hain Aankhen
Aaj wo Majaar se bahar aane ko Raazi nahin
Ke Aaj wo Majaar se bahar aane ko Raazi nahin...
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Amit,
Aapka bahot bahot swaagat hai meri post pe..aapne waqt diya meri shayri ko, saraaha uske liye shukriya..aur aapke ye sabhi sher bahot pyaare hai.N..saath dete rahiyega..
Grazie
Aapki dost
Pooja
===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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19th July 2007, 04:14 PM
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Originally Posted by koi to ho
ohhhh very touchy sweety daad ke liye alfaz nahi her sher hi bohat gehrey ahsasaat liye howe hai ............
Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa
Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha
Hum bhi aise tishnagii ke maare hai.N
Chale bhi udhar, rastaa jidhar na thha
Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye
Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha
bohat khub dear likhti raho aur umeed hai ye sirf poetry hi hai isse ziada kuch hona bhi nahi chahiye humesha khush raho hansti muskurati raho........
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Di, salaam
Sabse pahale to ye ki aap ko bahot bahot shukriya, aapne mujhe saraaha..dusri baat ye ki ye sirf shayri hi nahi hai...haqiikat hai jo apne padha aur jo abse padhengi...shukriya daad ke liye..saath deti rahiyega..
Grazie
Aapki Sweety
Pooja
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20th July 2007, 04:14 PM
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hiiiiii matako raani
kaise mizaz hain aapke
aaj is gazal ko padke yakeen hi nahi ho raha ki tum bhii itna sanjeeda gazal likh saktii ho. wakai itne dino mainnahi aaya isii ka asar ha i ki kitna behtreen likhne lagii ho.........
Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye
Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha
kamal ka sher likha hai ye
daad hazir hai kabool farmaiyega janab
shukriya
duaaon ke sath izajat
dilip
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Dilip ji,
humare mijaaz ek dam durusat hai.N janaab, aap kahiye?..bahot bahot shukriya is naachiiz ko padhne.N ka waQt dene ke liye..bas sanjiidaa haalaat to sanjiidaa kalaam...
shukriya janaab, apki daad sar'ankho.N pe..
Saath dete rahiyega...ijaazat!!
Grazie
Aapki dost
Pooja
===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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20th July 2007, 04:17 PM
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meri pyari pyari matko gudiya
bahut accha likha hai tumne, etni sanjeedgi kaha se aaye.....har sher dil par dastak de gaya...gudiya tujhe yakeen na hoga..maine teri es gazal ko baar baar pada aur ab reply kar rahi hoon...gudiya dua karti hoon ki yeh dard bas shayri tak hi seemat rahe, meri matko hamesha hansti muskurati rahe aur eski shayri din-b-din nikharti jaye.....
bahut sare pyar ke saath
teri diiiii
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Pranaam di,
Dii aapka aana bahot achha lagta hai apni post pe..aapki taariff ke liye shukriya..ab ye shayri hai yaa haQikat aap behatar jaanti hai.N..aapki duao.N ke liye apki karz'daar rahungi..saath deti rahiyega..
Ijaazat!!
Grazie
Aapki matko gudiya
Pooja
===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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20th July 2007, 04:19 PM
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hi pooja...
sach kaha di ne bahut hi sanjeedgi se likha hain...... meri taraf se daad!
yeh ashar jyada acche lage
Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa
Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha
Aaj khaamoshii se sitam ''Pooja'' pe kiya
Warna kal talak tu itna be'kadar na thha
mausam
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Di, namaste,
Aap meri post pe aai.N bahot achha laga..aapki daad sar'ankho.N pe..bahot bahot shukriya mujhe padhne ke liye aur saraahane ke liye..ummid hai aap yu.N hi mera saath deti.N raheNgi.N..
Ijaazat!!
GRazie
Aapki dost
Pooja
===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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20th July 2007, 04:22 PM
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Originally Posted by rajveeer
pooooooooooja meri gudiya ko mera pyaar bhara namaskaar......to aap aaj kal itna acha or meaning ful likhne laggi ho matlab hamari gudiya ab bari ho gayii hai....sachi pooja tumne bhut acha likha hai yun hii koshish karti raho.....tumhara ye share behad pasand aaiya......
Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa
Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha
apna khyaal rakhna...........raj.........
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Veer ji pranaam,
Veer ji, main chaahe jitni badi ho jaau.N lekin har lahaje me.N aapse bahot chhoti rahungi..main badi hui to nahi lekin badi bana di gai hu.N..aap aaye, saraaha achha laga aur shukriya..maine jo bhi sikha apse hi sikha hai..saath dete rahiyega..
Ijaazat!!
Grazie
Aapki gudiya
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hello pooja,
kya haal hai? bahut acha likha hai aapne. har taraf dard hi dard hai is kavita mein. dil ko chu gayi. itna dard....... aap ki rachna humein bahut achi lagi.
app aise hi likthe rahein.
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Manish jiii,
O yaar saadde haal te changaa sii o tussi kede ho ji...well apne pasand kiya...saraaha uske liye shukriyaa...saath dete rahiyega yu.N hi.N...
Grazie
Aapki dost
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Hi, Remember ?
I m back Again after very long Time...I HOPE EVERYBODY FORGOT ME N MY POSTS....
U ALWAYS WROTE NICE...RAHUL
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Hi, Remember ?
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U ALWAYS WROTE NICE...RAHUL
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Itna maasoom to dard'e'jigar na thha
Jisme.N rahe, wahi apna ghar na thha
Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa
Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha
Hum bhi aise tishnagii ke maare hai.N
Chale bhi udhar, rastaa jidhar na thha
Izhaar'e'muhabbat teri jaanib hua hota
Lamha'e'wisaal itna muqtasar na thha
Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye
Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha
Kabhi rango.N ki tarhaa bikhra tera ishq
Ro diye hum jo aaj vo tir'e'nazar na thha
Aaj khaamoshii se sitam ''Pooja'' pe kiya
Warna kal talak tu itna be'kadar na thha
Grazie
Apki dost
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Matko.......aaj phir teri es gazal par nazar gaye.......bahut kuch yaad aaya, aur teri bhi bahut yaad aaye.....SDC par teri kami mahsoos hoti hai Matko.
vapis aaja
bahut sare pyar ke saath
teri punjabi kudi
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Pooja JI......Namaste ! aapki bahut purani peshkash par nazar padhi toh ......padhe bina nahi reh saka....bahut umdaa khayal aur dilkash adaayegi ne samaa baandh diya....sabhi ashaar purasar lage.....yeh do sheyr toh khaas taur se dil kareeb rahe....
Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa
Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha
Hum bhi aise tishnagii ke maare hai.N
Chale bhi udhar, rastaa jidhar na thha
dil se daad hazir hai...qubuul farmaayen....yunhi behtar kalaam ke saath humesha aate rahen... khush rahen....
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
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Pooja jee AadaaB!
Aaj aapko paheli martaba padha, aur aapki mukammal gazal padhker hairat zada ho gaya huN.... aap itna kamaal likhati hai to ab kyuN nahi likhati..
Aapki gazal bahut achchi lagi.. ahsaas aur bayani bahut umdaa rahi..
Mujhe matla yeh sher
Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye
Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha
aur maqta la jawab laga.....
Daad hazir hai, kabool kijiye.. likhati rahiye...
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez....
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Hi, Remember ?
I m back Again after very long Time...I HOPE EVERYBODY FORGOT ME N MY POSTS....
U ALWAYS WROTE NICE...RAHUL
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Hi Rahul ji,
I m sorry i really dont remember u...by the way, how r u?..
n thanku for liking my gazal..
Grazie
Pooja
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Itna maasoom to dard'e'jigar na thha
Jisme.N rahe, wahi apna ghar na thha
Tere kadmo.N se kyu.N lahoo bahaa
Iss kadar zaalim to ye saffar na thha
Hum bhi aise tishnagii ke maare hai.N
Chale bhi udhar, rastaa jidhar na thha
Izhaar'e'muhabbat teri jaanib hua hota
Lamha'e'wisaal itna muqtasar na thha
Kuch sangiin jurm karu.N marne ke liye
Ek gunaah me.N shayad vo asar na thha
Kabhi rango.N ki tarhaa bikhra tera ishq
Ro diye hum jo aaj vo tir'e'nazar na thha
Aaj khaamoshii se sitam ''Pooja'' pe kiya
Warna kal talak tu itna be'kadar na thha
Grazie
Apki dost
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Matko.......aaj phir teri es gazal par nazar gaye.......bahut kuch yaad aaya, aur teri bhi bahut yaad aaye.....SDC par teri kami mahsoos hoti hai Matko.
vapis aaja
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koi louta de mere beete hue din,
beete hue din wo mere pyare pal-chin
missing u matko
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Sunita ji ,
Namaskar ..Aapke janib se is ghazal ko parne ka mauka laga ...Wah kya baat hai , purane logon ki purani ghazlein per ke mehsoos hua ki kaaash mai pehle yahan kyun na aya ..
Anyway Pooja ji ..aapki ye ghazal bahut hi badiya lagi ..
Sanjay Sehgal
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koi louta de mere beete hue din,
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Didi , wo din bahot pyare the na... kese har post pe hum hi hum nazar aya karte the .. or mujhe to yakin nahi ho raha ke ye shayri mene likhi hai kisi time me hehehee....
i missd u too di ...
luvs
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Sunita ji ,
Namaskar ..Aapke janib se is ghazal ko parne ka mauka laga ...Wah kya baat hai , purane logon ki purani ghazlein per ke mehsoos hua ki kaaash mai pehle yahan kyun na aya ..
Anyway Pooja ji ..aapki ye ghazal bahut hi badiya lagi ..
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Humdam ji,
thanku so much for liking this post...
Pooja
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Dear pooja
Aapko bazm mein dekh kar bahot khushi hui... darkhaast yahee hai ki aap shayri pariwaar ko apnaa qeemtee waqt jitnaa bhi de pao do aur jald hi aapki likhi hui koshishen bazm mein sab padh saken
Duaaon ke saath ijaazat
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16th October 2014, 09:12 PM
hello pooja jee....bahut dino baad aapko pada...sach me mujhe bhi vo beeta hua jamana yaad aa gaya...kya khumaari thi..kya shayri thi....ek alag see duniya hamari thi....aa jaiye aap bhi fir se...
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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Dear pooja
Aapko bazm mein dekh kar bahot khushi hui... darkhaast yahee hai ki aap shayri pariwaar ko apnaa qeemtee waqt jitnaa bhi de pao do aur jald hi aapki likhi hui koshishen bazm mein sab padh saken
Duaaon ke saath ijaazat
Aapka dost
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Thanku so much Dhaval,
sabse pahle to tumko shaadi ki bahot bahot badhaai ... yaha aai to pata chala ki tumhari shaadi ho gai hai .... so congrtz dude...
anyways.... likhna to bilkul nahi ho'pata ab.... last jo yaha post kiya tha wahi likha tha me aakhir me .. uske baad kuch nahi likha..or ab to aise lagta hai jese shaayri ka "S" b bhool gai hu ... hehehe...
baaki rahi yahaa aate rahne ki baat to ofcoz aati rahungi ab ...
thanks once again...
Pooja
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Sunita ji ,
Namaskar ..Aapke janib se is ghazal ko parne ka mauka laga ...Wah kya baat hai , purane logon ki purani ghazlein per ke mehsoos hua ki kaaash mai pehle yahan kyun na aya ..
Anyway Pooja ji ..aapki ye ghazal bahut hi badiya lagi ..
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Lout aaye hai phir se roothi bahaareN,
kitna haseeN hai samma...........
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Waah bahut khoobsurat nazm...pooja ji...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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hello pooja jee....bahut dino baad aapko pada...sach me mujhe bhi vo beeta hua jamana yaad aa gaya...kya khumaari thi..kya shayri thi....ek alag see duniya hamari thi....aa jaiye aap bhi fir se...
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Ji namaste Aru ji...
sach wo time bahot pyaara tha... shaayriya aaj b likhte hain yaha log or bahot achhi likhte honge i m sure... baat bas itni si hai ke kuch saal pahle hum the jaha..waha aaj naye members hain...
main koshish karungi regulr ate rahne ki..aap b aate rahiyega...
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17th October 2014, 04:00 PM
wah dii meri shaan me do line...hihihi ... u always rock di
and di luv u bhi ...
apki
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Waah bahut khoobsurat nazm...pooja ji...
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namaste jii ,
sabse pahle to mujhe pooja ji naa kahe kar sirf pooja kahiye...
or apka bahot bahot dhanyewad ke apne paddha is nazam ko or sarahaa...
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17th October 2014, 04:10 PM
Jaisa aap kahein pooja.. aur hamari khushnaseebi ki aap logon ko padne ka mauka mila..sunita di..thnks to u
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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17th October 2014, 04:53 PM
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wah dii meri shaan me do line...hihihi ... u always rock di
and di luv u bhi ...
apki
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Matko, tu 2 line ki baat karti hai, tere liye to main bahut kuch likh sakti hu phir yeh soch kar nahi likhti ki kahiN Mausam bigad na jaaye...ki pooja ke liye etna pyar aur mujse hamesha pange
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Jaisa aap kahein pooja.. aur hamari khushnaseebi ki aap logon ko padne ka mauka mila.. sunita di..thnks to u
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Dear Madhu....accha lagta hai jab jab aapke compliments padti hu
Madhu hamara aik group tha...ab phir se wo group vapis aa rha hai...tab koi panga nahi hota tha...shayri ke saath saath full masti hoti thi SDC par
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