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Sabhi Doston aur padhne waaloN ko shaad ka aadaab... Is baar wo manzar, wo ehsaas leke aaya hoon, jo aksar muhabbat ka anjaam ho jata hai.. Kisi ki bebasee hoti hai to kisi ki majburi, mere saamne wo manzar aa chuka hai, aur bas usi ki yaad me ye kalaam likh raha hoon, ummeed hai pasand aayegaa...


PhooloN ke sehere me wo chehraa kya kamaal thaa,
Unki AankhoN me magar ek bechain sa sawaal thaa.

Ye nahi ke Anjaan haiN mere haale-tabaah se woh,
AansuoN se tar-ba-tar us Baa-wafa* ka rumaal thaa.

Laakh shiqve rakh ke bhi labe-aashiq khamosh rahe,
Kya kahte, ke jaadu kar raha us shokh ka jamaal thaa.

Isi socho-kashmakash me mubtilaa* rahta hoon aksar,
GhuNghat ke peeche, kya haal unka bhi behaal thaa?

Wo Mom hain ke sang, ye faislaa main kar paata nahi,
Chehraa jhukaa huaa lekin, lagtaa baDaa nehaal thaa.

Ajnabi ho jaaeN "Shaad" ab umr bhar ko hum dono,
Waqte-rukhsat mujhse kah diya, unka jo khayaal tha.


shaad...

baa-wafaa-- wafaadar, faithful
Mubtilaa--- Uljha hua, entrangled
Mom-- wax, symbol of soft hearted or nature.
sang-- patthar, stone.
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bahut khoobsurat ashaar likhe hai ... achchi ghazal rahi ... dil se daad

yuhi likhte rahiye

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9th March 2011, 01:54 PM
ji bhaut khoob...............

Laakh shiqve rakh ke bhi labe-aashiq khamosh rahe,
Kya kahte, ke jaadu kar raha us shokh ka jamaal thaa.

Isi socho-kashmakash me mubtilaa* rahta hoon aksar,
GhuNghat ke peeche, kya haal unka bhi behaal thaa?


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Isi socho-kashmakash me mubtilaa* rahta hoon aksar,
GhuNghat ke peeche, kya haal unka bhi behaal thaa?

Very Romantic ... Very Touching .... Good Expression .... Shaad Bhai !!



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bahut khoobsurat ashaar likhe hai ... achchi ghazal rahi ... dil se daad

yuhi likhte rahiye

Behad shukriya Rajinder bhai.... aapka saath ek meherbaani hai mujhpe.. yoonhi aage bhi saath banaae rakhiyega, khush rahiye....


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ji bhaut khoob...............

Laakh shiqve rakh ke bhi labe-aashiq khamosh rahe,
Kya kahte, ke jaadu kar raha us shokh ka jamaal thaa.

Isi socho-kashmakash me mubtilaa* rahta hoon aksar,
GhuNghat ke peeche, kya haal unka bhi behaal thaa?

har baar ki tarah is baar bhi saath dene ka bahot bahot shukriya Radhika jee......

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Isi socho-kashmakash me mubtilaa* rahta hoon aksar,
GhuNghat ke peeche, kya haal unka bhi behaal thaa?

Very Romantic ... Very Touching .... Good Expression .... Shaad Bhai !!
Janab Naresh bhai, aadaab... aapne is kalaam ke liye waqt diya, use samjha saraaha aur itni tavajjoh di, behad meherbaani aapki... guzaarish hai aage bhi isi tarah saath banae rakhiyega...

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Sabhi Doston aur padhne waaloN ko shaad ka aadaab... Is baar wo manzar, wo ehsaas leke aaya hoon, jo aksar muhabbat ka anjaam ho jata hai.. Kisi ki bebasee hoti hai to kisi ki majburi, mere saamne wo manzar aa chuka hai, aur bas usi ki yaad me ye kalaam likh raha hoon, ummeed hai pasand aayegaa...


PhooloN ke sehere me wo chehraa kya kamaal thaa,
Unki AankhoN me magar ek bechain sa sawaal thaa.

Ye nahi ke Anjaan haiN mere haale-tabaah se woh,
AansuoN se tar-ba-tar us Baa-wafa* ka rumaal thaa.

Laakh shiqve rakh ke bhi labe-aashiq khamosh rahe,
Kya kahte, ke jaadu kar raha us shokh ka jamaal thaa.

Isi socho-kashmakash me mubtilaa* rahta hoon aksar,
GhuNghat ke peeche, kya haal unka bhi behaal thaa?

Wo Mom hain ke sang, ye faislaa main kar paata nahi,
Chehraa jhukaa huaa lekin, lagtaa baDaa nehaal thaa.

Ajnabi ho jaaeN "Shaad" ab umr bhar ko hum dono,
Waqte-rukhsat mujhse kah diya, unka jo khayaal tha.


shaad...

baa-wafaa-- wafaadar, faithful
Mubtilaa--- Uljha hua, entrangled
Mom-- wax, symbol of soft hearted or nature.
sang-- patthar, stone.
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bahut umda, dil ke kareeb rahe sabhi ahsaas..........par.....yeh ek sher to bas...kya kahne, dil ko hilla gaya.

Ajnabi ho jaaeN "Shaad" ab umr bhar ko hum dono,
Waqte-rukhsat mujhse kah diya, unka jo khayaal tha


god bless u dear

baaji

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bahut umda, dil ke kareeb rahe sabhi ahsaas..........par.....yeh ek sher to bas...kya kahne, dil ko hilla gaya.

Ajnabi ho jaaeN "Shaad" ab umr bhar ko hum dono,
Waqte-rukhsat mujhse kah diya, unka jo khayaal tha


god bless u dear

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Bhaot bahot shukriyaa meri bahen.. aap ko ye ek sher khaas pasand aa saka bahot accha lagaa jaankar.. yoonhi aati rahiyegaa saath deti rahiyegaa..

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Bahut Khoob likhe hain aap shaad bhai...


Yeh bas aise hi lilkh di, ya dil ki daastan hai koi...

mera sawaal ka bura na maaniyega..

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shuru se aakhir tak, dil faref! bohat khuub likha hai aap ne.. is kahaanii me.n chhipe kashmkash ko behad khuub andaaz me.n shero.n ke zariye pesh kiya hai aap ne.. daad haazir hai.. qubool farmaaiyegaa,... aur likhte rahiyegaa....

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Bahut Khoob likhe hain aap shaad bhai...


Yeh bas aise hi lilkh di, ya dil ki daastan hai koi...

mera sawaal ka bura na maaniyega..

shukriya mere dost jo tumne ise padhaa aur pasand kiyaa... rahi buraa maanne ki baat ki janaab

ab doston ki baaton ka kyaa buraaa maane sahib,
khaaroN se zyaada yahaan phool chubha karte hain..

koi bhi cheez yoonhi nahi hoti har cheez ke peeche koi maksad yaa koi baaat hoti hai.... ho sakta hai ye daastaan mere dil ki hi ho.... nazar farmaane ka shukriya... aate rahiyegaa..

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shuru se aakhir tak, dil faref! bohat khuub likha hai aap ne.. is kahaanii me.n chhipe kashmkash ko behad khuub andaaz me.n shero.n ke zariye pesh kiya hai aap ne.. daad haazir hai.. qubool farmaaiyegaa,... aur likhte rahiyegaa....

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