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Naacheez ki naadaani ? - 19th February 2014, 06:50 PM
Aadaab doston,

Aaj ek koshish ki apne ehsaaso ko labzo me sametne ki,gaur farmaayiyega .

yeh labzo ka kaafila, yeh nazme puraani si
yeh ishq hai maano jaise unsuni jubaani si

har roz shaheed hote hai ham jashn-e-ishq me
phir bhi kyu hai ishq? ik puraani nishaani si?

har baar bayaan karte hai ham ehsaas-e-ishq ko
phir bhi kyu hai ishq? ik unkahi kahaani si

khaa liya thokar-e-bewaafayi hamne bhi bahut
phir bhi kyu hai ishq? kisi naacheez ki naadaani si

barbaad hote aaye hai kayeen log ishq ke aangan me
phir bhi kyu hai ishq? kisi farishtey ki meharbaani si

shaam ki madhosh hawa kehta hai duniya ishq ko
phir bhi kyu hai ishq? ik undekhi toofaani si!!

socha hamne haste haste paar kar liya dariya-e-ishq
phir kyu laage hai aaj, yeh zindagi begaani si?

"Krishna" toh rooh me basa ke baitha tha ishq ko
pata nahi tha use ishq hai, rooh jalaanewaali roshni si . . .

Kehne ke liye har koi lagta hai apna,
jhaak ke dekhe toh toh har rishta hai ik Sapna . . .
   
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19th February 2014, 08:57 PM
yeh labzo ka kaafila, yeh nazme puraani si
yeh ishq hai maano jaise unsuni jubaani si

Namaskar Krishna Ji

It is a beautiful poetry. Keep up the good work.

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20th February 2014, 11:32 AM
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Aadaab doston,

Aaj ek koshish ki apne ehsaaso ko labzo me sametne ki,gaur farmaayiyega .

yeh labzo ka kaafila, yeh nazme puraani si
yeh ishq hai maano jaise unsuni jubaani si

har roz shaheed hote hai ham jashn-e-ishq me
phir bhi kyu hai ishq? ik puraani nishaani si?

har baar bayaan karte hai ham ehsaas-e-ishq ko
phir bhi kyu hai ishq? ik unkahi kahaani si

khaa liya thokar-e-bewaafayi hamne bhi bahut
phir bhi kyu hai ishq? kisi naacheez ki naadaani si

barbaad hote aaye hai kayeen log ishq ke aangan me
phir bhi kyu hai ishq? kisi farishtey ki meharbaani si

shaam ki madhosh hawa kehta hai duniya ishq ko
phir bhi kyu hai ishq? ik undekhi toofaani si!!

socha hamne haste haste paar kar liya dariya-e-ishq
phir kyu laage hai aaj, yeh zindagi begaani si?

"Krishna" toh rooh me basa ke baitha tha ishq ko
pata nahi tha use ishq hai, rooh jalaanewaali roshni si . . .
Bahot hi achchhii peshkash hai Krishnaji.................
Aate rahiye......... mehfil ko yun hi sajaate rahiye...............
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20th February 2014, 03:41 PM
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yeh labzo ka kaafila, yeh nazme puraani si
yeh ishq hai maano jaise unsuni jubaani si

Namaskar Krishna Ji

It is a beautiful poetry. Keep up the good work.

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Bahut shukriya Di. Aapko hamari koshish pasand aayi yahi hamare liye bahut badi baat hai. Bahut shukriya.

Kehne ke liye har koi lagta hai apna,
jhaak ke dekhe toh toh har rishta hai ik Sapna . . .
   
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20th February 2014, 03:43 PM
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Bahot hi achchhii peshkash hai Krishnaji.................
Aate rahiye......... mehfil ko yun hi sajaate rahiye...............
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Aadeil saab, Bahut shukriya ki aapne hamari koshish ko pasand kiya. Aate rahiye . . .

Kehne ke liye har koi lagta hai apna,
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20th February 2014, 07:00 PM
Waah Waah Bahot Khub Sameta hai Lafzon Ko...................

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Aadaab doston,

Aaj ek koshish ki apne ehsaaso ko labzo me sametne ki,gaur farmaayiyega .

yeh labzo ka kaafila, yeh nazme puraani si
yeh ishq hai maano jaise unsuni jubaani si

har roz shaheed hote hai ham jashn-e-ishq me
phir bhi kyu hai ishq? ik puraani nishaani si?

har baar bayaan karte hai ham ehsaas-e-ishq ko
phir bhi kyu hai ishq? ik unkahi kahaani si

khaa liya thokar-e-bewaafayi hamne bhi bahut
phir bhi kyu hai ishq? kisi naacheez ki naadaani si

barbaad hote aaye hai kayeen log ishq ke aangan me
phir bhi kyu hai ishq? kisi farishtey ki meharbaani si

shaam ki madhosh hawa kehta hai duniya ishq ko
phir bhi kyu hai ishq? ik undekhi toofaani si!!

socha hamne haste haste paar kar liya dariya-e-ishq
phir kyu laage hai aaj, yeh zindagi begaani si?

"Krishna" toh rooh me basa ke baitha tha ishq ko
pata nahi tha use ishq hai, rooh jalaanewaali roshni si . . .
   
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21st February 2014, 10:04 AM
Krishna jee:

namaste!

bahot hi Khoob andaaz-e-bayaan... aapke ehsaas dil ko chhu gaye... yuuNhi aage bhee liKhte rahiye... dil se daad
KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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21st February 2014, 10:13 AM
waahhh krishna ji kyaa sher kahe hain ,... bahot acchi shayri hui hai aapki..

ar roz shaheed hote hai ham jashn-e-ishq me
phir bhi kyu hai ishq? ik puraani nishaani si?

ye sher kaafi acchaa laga.... likhte raheN.. khush raheN

Shaad...

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Waah Waah Bahot Khub Sameta hai Lafzon Ko...................
Bahut Shkriya Sudhir saab. BAhut khushi huyi. Aate rahiye . . .

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Krishna jee:

namaste!

bahot hi Khoob andaaz-e-bayaan... aapke ehsaas dil ko chhu gaye... yuuNhi aage bhee liKhte rahiye... dil se daad
KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~Dhaval
Dhaval jee, aapne apne daad se hamari koshish ko nawaza , behad khushi huyi. Aate rahiye. . .

Kehne ke liye har koi lagta hai apna,
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21st February 2014, 02:26 PM
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waahhh krishna ji kyaa sher kahe hain ,... bahot acchi shayri hui hai aapki..

ar roz shaheed hote hai ham jashn-e-ishq me
phir bhi kyu hai ishq? ik puraani nishaani si?

ye sher kaafi acchaa laga.... likhte raheN.. khush raheN

Shaad...
Sammer jee, aap jaise mahaan shayar ko hamari kalam achi lagi ,is se badi baat koi ho sakti. Aage bhi koshish karte rahenge. Tah e dil se shukriya adaa karte hai. Aate rahiye . . .

Kehne ke liye har koi lagta hai apna,
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