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Ghazal Of The Month "august 09" (winner announced) -
1st September 2009, 04:48 PM
DostoN lijiye hazir hai is mahine ki ghazalein...
Sunita ji ka mail aaya tha ke ,main hi yeh thread post kar duun,....lagta hai sunita ji yeH zimmedaari uthana nahi chahti...koi baat nahi main hi post kar deti huun.....
is mahine hame kul milaker 4 ghazaleiN mili hain......In ghazaloN ko padhiye aur apne kheemti votoN se nawaziye.....
SHUKRIYAH
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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1st September 2009, 04:52 PM
Nafrat ki jwala mein sulga hua, Asthiyo.n ka ek bebas dhancha
Eent pathharo.n ka ye laawris tukda, mera ghar hota tha kabhi
Chandni ke Ehsaas sa muqaddas, Khuda ki rehmat ki sadaksh Misaal
Patjhhad mein bhi rehti thi bahaar, dua mein aisa asar hota tha kabhi
Mere muqaddar ki mujhpar inayat, muskurahato.n se mehekti thi fiza
Dozak ka aks lag raha hai aaj, jannat maanind basar hota tha kabhi
Tanha bhor aur veeran raat, mera haseen aashiyana ab sunsaan hai
Dard-e-Zakhm se lahoo-luhaan angg, ye mera jigar hota tha kabhi
Kaagaz ke tukdon ke laalach mein, Rehnuma hi dehshatgard bane
Usi mod pe poorn-viraam hai aaj, jahan shuru safar hota tha kabhi
Hindu Muslim Sikh Isaayi, sab buniyaadein dagmaga rahi.n hain ab
Ye apahij jo gairo.n ke sahare khada hai, ye mera shaher hota tha kabhi
Bachhon se khanjar khaya hua, apne muqaddar ke vaar se zakhmi
Darta, ghabrata, muh chipata Bharat, ye mera ghar hota tha kabhi
Bhoola bisra tanha sisakta Bharat, ye hamara ghar hota tha kabhi
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1st September 2009, 04:53 PM
unki ulfat ne kiya aisa asar O’ Saahib
Dil dhadakna ho gaya jaise thehar O’ Saahib
Kar gayi mujko ghayal unki vo qatil_adaa
khoob hai unka vo andaz-o-hunar O Saahib
Phir berukhi se dekho umr bhar to gum nahi hai
Pyaar se dekhlo bus ek nazar O’ Saahib
Zindagi saath jene ka hai tumhara wada
Tum kabhi waade se na jaana mukar O’ saahib
Tut jayenge sukhe patte ki maafiq hum bhi
Hum kabhi raah me hi bichde agar O’ Saahib
Dard hota hai idhar chot hai kyun phir udhar
Dard ko dhundu to dhundu mai kidhar O’ Saahib
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1st September 2009, 04:54 PM
Khaab banke kabhi dar se utar nahi jana
Meri nigaah mai rehna bikhar nahi jana
Ishq ki raah mai taasuraat pe qaabu rakhna
Duniya walo.n ke sawalo.n se dur nahi jana
Mein jaanta hun tera ikhteyaar hai unpar
Ey dil hado.n se tu apni guzar nahi jana
Bulayenge tujhay har simt zamane waale
Hai mehek tu, kisi pal ko thahr nahi jana
Sarhaane mere nazuk se khaab rehte hain
Karwat lo to, nazarandaaz kar nahi jana
De do jaan jo mile tumse inkesaari se
Dehleez e ana parasti pe mar nahi jana
Jo na aati ho tera naam ka pata lai kar
Kaho hawa se yahan se guzar nahi jana
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1st September 2009, 04:55 PM
meri tadap ka kaash un par aisa asar ho jaye
pathar hai jo pighal kar maum sa jigar ho jaye
na rahene denge unki gali mein andhera kabhi
jala denge khud ko jo roshan unka ghar ho jaye
raah-e-zindagi mein na pahuchen unhe koi taqlif
unki aasuvon ki meri ankhon mein basar ho jaye
kab tak phirun main dar ba dar yu tanha bebas
unke dar par ruh nikle khatam ye safar ho jaye
mehsus ho jo unhe ik baar kabhi meri bhi kami
toh mohabbat meri bhi ya khuda amar ho jaye
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1st September 2009, 09:44 PM
Chaaron hi behad umda hai... lekin mujhe do behad pasand aayin.. ek to 1st one i.e. Nafrat ki jwala, aur 3rd one i.e. Khawab ban ke!!
My vote goes to Khawab banke!
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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Sunita ji ka mail aaya tha ke ,main hi yeh thread post kar duun,....lagta hai sunita ji yeH zimmedaari uthana nahi chahti...koi baat nahi main hi post kar deti huun.....
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Dear Zainy.....................bahut bahut bahuttttttt shukriya aapka !
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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2nd September 2009, 06:36 PM
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Originally Posted by zainy
meri tadap ka kaash un par aisa asar ho jaye
pathar hai jo pighal kar maum sa jigar ho jaye
na rahene denge unki gali mein andhera kabhi
jala denge khud ko jo roshan unka ghar ho jaye
raah-e-zindagi mein na pahuchen unhe koi taqlif
unki aasuvon ki meri ankhon mein basar ho jaye
kab tak phirun main dar ba dar yu tanha bebas
unke dar par ruh nikle khatam ye safar ho jaye
mehsus ho jo unhe ik baar kabhi meri bhi kami
toh mohabbat meri bhi ya khuda amar ho jaye
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zeny apki y gazal achi lagi muze sabse aur dusr bi ache lage par ye sachi me achi lagi.
ye do sher to bhot hi ache lage
kab tak phirun main dar ba dar yu tanha bebas
unke dar par ruh nikle khatam ye safar ho jaye
mehsus ho jo unhe ik baar kabhi meri bhi kami
toh mohabbat meri bhi ya khuda amar ho jaye
PARWANA
Abed Farooqui
Jalegi shammaye tere naam se qamar
Parwaana hun tera naam jo liya karun
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2nd September 2009, 10:06 PM
Janaab abed saheb yeh ghazal maine nahi likhi hai...yeh ghazal isi site ke ek member ki hai....
is thread per isi site ke members "ghazal of the month" contest ke liye apni apni ghazalein bhejte hai jo moderators post karte hai polling ke liye....
aap niche di gayi link tafseel se padh lijiye aapko sab pata chal jayega....
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=64203
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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3rd September 2009, 03:11 AM
FiRst Of aLL I WanNa GiVe ThaNkS To aLL The Participents...iT shoUld bE MenTioNeD HeRe That All EntrieS Are SuPeRb,ExcellNt,SimPly MinD BlowiNg....But THe 1st one And 4th one ReaLLy DeseRve to BE The WinnER....Let's See WHaT wiLL HaPPen...!!!!
Bhoola bisra tanha sisakta Bharat, ye hamara ghar hota tha kabhi
this one is OUTSTANDING....it Represents the Actual condition of our Country Nw a days....very good creation...
meri tadap ka kaash un par aisa asar ho jaye
pathar hai jo pighal kar maum sa jigar ho jaye
What to say about it...very True wordings..well done
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7th September 2009, 11:09 PM
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meri tadap ka kaash un par aisa asar ho jaye
pathar hai jo pighal kar maum sa jigar ho jaye
na rahene denge unki gali mein andhera kabhi
jala denge khud ko jo roshan unka ghar ho jaye
raah-e-zindagi mein na pahuchen unhe koi taqlif
unki aasuvon ki meri ankhon mein basar ho jaye
kab tak phirun main dar ba dar yu tanha bebas
unke dar par ruh nikle khatam ye safar ho jaye
mehsus ho jo unhe ik baar kabhi meri bhi kami
toh mohabbat meri bhi ya khuda amar ho jaye
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...................................very good.............................................. .....................
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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10th September 2009, 08:40 AM
3rd one ...
i cant understand y 4th is on top ..
kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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17th September 2009, 02:47 PM
Oh Kya baat hai modretor's aaj kal bahut busy lag rahe hai jo aab tak GTM ke winner ka naam announce nahi hua, some thing wroung..... Or some body sleeping
I know ke last gazal winner hai but kiski hai yeh to bataiye....
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winner of the Ghazal Contest for the Month of August'09 -
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18th September 2009, 07:35 AM
Parneeta ji aapko bhut bhut mubaarak ho
you.n na samjhoge kinare pe khade rehkar tum
behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho
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18th September 2009, 12:50 PM
m not happy ...! maiN kya karuN..
Sorry parneeta
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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shukriya doston -
18th September 2009, 01:56 PM
Aziz doston..............salaam
ummid karti hun ki aap sab khairiyat se honge
main shukrguzaar hun unn doston ka jinho ne mujhe vote kiya hai (abed_farooqui, ajay nidaan, dr.raj, fezan, kwahish, loveforgudia, mausam, Mayank, S.R.SiNGh, Tahir kkkhan, zainy) na ki sirf iss month ke gtm ke liye balki pichle sabhi gtm par jaha maine participate kiya hai. aap hi ke saath ki wajah se mujhe likhne ki prerna milti hai.
aaj is mauke par main kuch doston ko unke ab tak ke mujhe diye hue saath ke liye aur aage bhi saath ki ummid rakhte hue tah dil se shukriya ada karna chahti hun.....
zainy.......paheli shaks jinho ne mujhe technically likhne mein madat ki hai
Mayank ji.......meri posts par reply kar ke mujhe encourage karte rahete hai
sunita di.......aap ke diye hue reps pending hai abhi dii
ail [redtears_ocean]
puri sis [ek ghazal]
diya doll [diya_jale]
vicky [stillalive]
mujeeb
dinu bhai [dineshdharvi]
Tahir kkkhan
sameer [kwahish]
naresh_mahera ji
amit widhani [ek ehsaas]
nalinmehra
mann_chand
tanha dil
pradhyuman
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agar kisi dost ka naam chhut gaya ho toh maaf kijiyega
and special mention to sacccha_pyar ji (shayad Kunaal hai aap ka naam)….aap khush nahi hai
aap ki khushi ke liye meri koshish yahi rahengi ki main kuch aisa likhu ya fir likhne ki koshish karti rahu jo aap ko pasand bhi aaye, aap ko khush bhi kare aur aap mujhe daad bhi de….ab aap mere liye ik challenge hai….bura mat maniyen par ab aap se reps hasil karna meri maqsad hai jisay pura karne ki koshish mein kuch nahi toh meri ghazals mein nikhaar zarur aayegi. You have actually encouraged me to write better….shukriya
ek baar phir se doston itna apnapan dene ke liye, iss shayri pariwaar mein accept karne ke liye aur meri achchi buri, grammatical mistakes, spelling errors aur na jane kya kya galti walen ghazalon ko pasand karne ke liye shukriya
warm regards to one n all
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
Ananthpak
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18th September 2009, 06:52 PM
mubarak ho sweety
aaj main bahot khus hu .......
apna khayal rakhna
humesha khus rahna
aapki
Diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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18th September 2009, 07:23 PM
congrats pari dear....
u deserve that...
but kyunki is bar main tumhe vote nahi kar paya..
uske liye m sorry...
vote na karne ka sirf ek hi reason nahi hota..
tumhari ghazal bahut achi thi..infact sabhi ghazal achi thi..
but i have voted only that which are a little bit different..
tumhare ehsaas bahut ache the..
so u deserve this...
or waise bhi aap shuru se hi gtmse judi ho..or shayd tabhi aap aaj is mukam pe pahunchi ho... aaj gtm me post karne ka mann tha ... so chala aaya..becoz u are one of my sweet frnd...
khush raho.or aage bhi aise hi participate karti raho..
or winner bano...
god bless u..
take care
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18th September 2009, 09:50 PM
CONGRATULATIONS.....................
PRANEETA JII
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Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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18th September 2009, 09:59 PM
Pyari Pari, huggs and lots of love
bahut khushi hue mujhe ki tum es baar vijeta ho, Pari maine tumhe vote nahi kiya reason tum jaanti ho, ki tum es se bhi kahiN behtar likh sakti ho, aur muje usi ki umeed hai, tumhe reps diye to thy...bhool gaye
chalo koi baat nahi chotte aksar bado.n ka tohfa lekar bhool jate haiN taaki phir se miley.....
Vaada raha jaroor reps mileNge.....aur bahut jaldi tum reps lene ke liye ek umda si pyar bhari gazal likhogi, dard par nahi
PARI........meri dil se mubarakbaad kabool karo
aur jaldi pyar, mohabat se bhare ahsaaso.n par kuch likho !
pyar aur duao.n ke saath
tumhari diiii
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th September 2009, 10:02 PM
Praneetaa jee:
aapko bahot bahot baDhaa'iiyaaN!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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19th September 2009, 05:11 AM
congratulations praneeta bohat bohat mubarak ho.....................
keep writing.....
Zainy
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Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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19th September 2009, 08:50 AM
Praneeta ji.......Namashkaar.......Maine abhi abhi padha toh meri khushi ka theekana hi nahi raha....... GHAZAL OF THE MONTH ki winner banne par meri aur se.....aapko bahut bahut mubarakbaad........Praneeta ji !
is pal mujhe ek purane geet ki line yaad aa rahi hai.....
"mujhe khushi mili intni ke dil main na samaye
palak band kar lu kahi chhalak hi na jaye..............."
apna khayal rakhiyega.....
khush rahiye.......
duaao ke saath.......
----naresh mehra------
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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19th September 2009, 01:21 PM
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Parneeta ji aapko bhut bhut mubaarak ho
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Diya_Jale
mubarak ho sweety
aaj main bahot khus hu .......
apna khayal rakhna
humesha khus rahna
aapki
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Quote:
Originally Posted by stillalive
congrats pari dear....
u deserve that...
but kyunki is bar main tumhe vote nahi kar paya..
uske liye m sorry...
vote na karne ka sirf ek hi reason nahi hota..
tumhari ghazal bahut achi thi..infact sabhi ghazal achi thi..
but i have voted only that which are a little bit different..
tumhare ehsaas bahut ache the..
so u deserve this...
or waise bhi aap shuru se hi gtmse judi ho..or shayd tabhi aap aaj is mukam pe pahunchi ho... aaj gtm me post karne ka mann tha ... so chala aaya..becoz u are one of my sweet frnd...
khush raho.or aage bhi aise hi participate karti raho..
or winner bano...
god bless u..
take care
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Quote:
Originally Posted by fezan
CONGRATULATIONS.....................
PRANEETA JII
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Quote:
Originally Posted by sunita virender
Pyari Pari, huggs and lots of love
bahut khushi hue mujhe ki tum es baar vijeta ho, Pari maine tumhe vote nahi kiya reason tum jaanti ho, ki tum es se bhi kahiN behtar likh sakti ho, aur muje usi ki umeed hai, tumhe reps diye to thy...bhool gaye
chalo koi baat nahi chotte aksar bado.n ka tohfa lekar bhool jate haiN taaki phir se miley.....
Vaada raha jaroor reps mileNge.....aur bahut jaldi tum reps lene ke liye ek umda si pyar bhari gazal likhogi, dard par nahi
PARI........meri dil se mubarakbaad kabool karo
aur jaldi pyar, mohabat se bhare ahsaaso.n par kuch likho !
pyar aur duao.n ke saath
tumhari diiii
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Quote:
Originally Posted by zainy
congratulations praneeta bohat bohat mubarak ho.....................
keep writing.....
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Quote:
Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
Praneeta ji.......Namashkaar.......Maine abhi abhi padha toh meri khushi ka theekana hi nahi raha....... GHAZAL OF THE MONTH ki winner banne par meri aur se.....aapko bahut bahut mubarakbaad........Praneeta ji !
is pal mujhe ek purane geet ki line yaad aa rahi hai.....
"mujhe khushi mili intni ke dil main na samaye
palak band kar lu kahi chhalak hi na jaye..............."
apna khayal rakhiyega.....
khush rahiye.......
duaao ke saath.......
----naresh mehra------
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Quote:
Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you
Praneetaa jee:
aapko bahot bahot baDhaa'iiyaaN!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
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sabhi doston ko mera teh dil se shukriya esp Dhaval ji baki doston ko toh maine pahele hi shukriya keh diya hai.
bahot bahot shukriya aap ke saath ke liye aur aage bhi aap ki saath ki ummid karti hun....mujhe farq nahi padta agar aap ne kisi aur ghazal ko vote kiya hai aap ne mujhe mere aur threads par bahot encourage kiya hai toh meri yeh jeet main mere sabhi doston ko dedicate karti hun
love n regards
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
Ananthpak
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21st September 2009, 12:48 AM
conratulations pari.
n also to the rest of the participants
sabne bohat hi acha likha.
Mera daman jalega tau jalogai tum bhi yeh samajhte ho,phir aag lagate kyu ho
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22nd September 2009, 08:28 AM
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[B][COLOR=navy][FONT=Verdana]Aziz doston..............salaam
and special mention to sacccha_pyar ji (shayad Kunaal hai aap ka naam)….aap khush nahi hai
aap ki khushi ke liye meri koshish yahi rahengi ki main kuch aisa likhu ya fir likhne ki koshish karti rahu jo aap ko pasand bhi aaye, aap ko khush bhi kare aur aap mujhe daad bhi de….ab aap mere liye ik challenge hai….bura mat maniyen par ab aap se reps hasil karna meri maqsad hai jisay pura karne ki koshish mein kuch nahi toh meri ghazals mein nikhaar zarur aayegi. You have actually encouraged me to write better….shukriya
warm regards to one n all
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ise kehte hai jazba...!
Aur samajhdaari bhi .. aap chahti to is baat ko lekar tark vitark bhi kar sakti thi .. par aapne bas accha chehra chuna baat ka aur yahaN apni baat rakh dee... sach kahuN to ab tumse umeed rakh lene ka jee karta hai.. mujhe umeed rahegi tumne jo kaha hai wo poora hoga... aur kuch tumhe bhagwaan se kya mile mujhe nahi pata... par maiN dua karunga .. tumhari soch maiN yahi pakeezgi aur saadgi banaye rakhe bhagwaan ...
waise ab meri khushi se kya farq padta hai... winner to winner hi hai ..
aapko mubarak ho ye pal .. aur aap aise hi khush rahe ...
Kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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22nd September 2009, 11:49 AM
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Gamon_ki_malika Ki Taraf Se Sirf Appke Liye
Mere Wajood Ko Mat Parakh Malika_ai_gum
Is Bout Main Jaan Haan Per Jisam Main Ruh Nahi
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23rd September 2009, 10:54 AM
Congratulations Pari...................
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23rd September 2009, 11:59 PM
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Kunaal Ji
Gamon_ki_malika Ki Taraf Se Sirf Appke Liye
Mere Wajood Ko Mat Parakh Malika_ai_gum
Is Bout Main Jaan Haan Per Jisam Main Ruh Nahi
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Kya reaction duN samajh nahi aa raha ... ye sher ka nishana mujhe kyuN banaya gaya hai...
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KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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24th September 2009, 05:21 AM
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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24th September 2009, 05:31 AM
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
Ananthpak
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24th September 2009, 02:01 PM
Khuda tumhe tarakki bakhse.. ! aur ek baat tumhe hindi likhne maiN thoda hunar ... hahaha
Kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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25th September 2009, 07:15 AM
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Khuda tumhe tarakki bakhse.. ! aur ek baat tumhe hindi likhne maiN thoda hunar ... hahaha
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Ameen................................
Shukriya
Regards
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Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
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