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kaya kaber kitnay mosam simt thy rahy din guzarty rahy
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kaya kaber kitnay mosam simt thy rahy din guzarty rahy - 3rd April 2006, 09:16 PM

kaya khber kitnay mosam simt thy rahy din guzarty rahy
hum kahen asaman k talye roz milty rahy din guzarty rahy
bas yun hi hum ko awara logon ko rasty uder lay gaye
din guzarty rahy
tujh say bichre to hum ko kuch asi tanhayon ka safar darpysh tha
modaton apni perchai say baat karty rahy din guzarty rahy
gardishy qawat bhi saf ba saf aur kare jahan ki musafat ajab
hum magar apni dhun mein magan shair kahty gaye
din guzarty rahy
   
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REply - 6th April 2006, 11:00 PM

Kitna Dard Chupa Hai aapki shayri mein, shabd toh kam na they aapki explanation mein.

Keep it up................


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great job
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great job - 9th April 2006, 02:05 PM

hey dear sheeba!
tht was awesome... i had no idea u can do such a nice shayeri ..WOW pretty gud ..keep it up yaar!
so i have also joined this site
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