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I Am Sorry My Tears....

I am sorry my tears
Coz I have trapped you ,
Whenever you wanted to flow
I have always stopped you.

I know inside for you
It is very suffocating ,
But even if you flow
Nothing you will be getting .

You will flow
And get vanished somewhere ,
And till that time
People will show that they do care .

So better don't expect
Anybody's sympathy ,
You are true
You don't deserve false pity.

I know you wanna come out
To make me feel relieved ,
What you think ?
Will this make my wounds get healed?

Rather than you
Its more painful for me
My dreams getting shattered
Is what everyday I see .

Still I smile
And pretend to be carefree ,
But whats behind ?
Nobody ever tried to see .

Like a poison inside me
Still I wanna you to hold ,
Desperately I wanna breath
But my breaths have turned frozen and cold .

Through my body
Like blood you run ,
Now you are my night
And the only sun .

So don't feel hurted
And never do leave my eyes ,
A bond of love
Ours relation is so nice .

Whenever I smile - you glitter
And make my eyes glow ,
So please wait till my death
Mabbe then from every eye you will flow.

Sanskruti.


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29th March 2004, 10:31 PM

well raj i have already read that poem of urs............nice to know that u fetched an award for it............n also thanz for appreciating my poem.........well same here............when i feel depressed or lonely i make my emotions talk on the paper........i am also posting a poem which i wrote just know.........hope everybody likes it.........

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yes its true. i dont write anything.i just registered myself so that i can appreciate other ppl.actually i dont get enough time to posts reply still i some how manage it

all i can say is ur poem is very heart touching and true in everybody's case
by posting it u really made me think
thanzzzzzzzzzzzz for writing such a heart felt poem

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I will just say: Really deep & it's so meaningful. Really touched my heart. Dilki zuban aksar insaan samajh nehi paatein.......kash gehraion ko samajh saktein hotein, but it's ok. Aapki dilki zuban mehsoos karsakti hu.......Yunhi likhtein rahiyega. Dilki gehraion se shukriya kabool kijiyega. Duwaon ke sath izazat chahungi. Do take care of yourself. God bless you.

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15th April 2004, 10:20 PM

Hi Shimul Ji,

kaise hain aap..........umeed hai thik hongi......n thanz a lot..............aapko meri poem acchi lagi yeh jan kar khushhi hui........sahi kaha aapne aksar log dil ki baatein nahi samjh pate.........aur kabhi kabhi unko samjhana bhi mushkil ho jata hai........neways chalo bye n take care.

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i am so sorry sushma.........i didnt noticed ur reply..........aaj hi dekha............sorry for replying u so late..........n thanz for taking time to read my poem.......thanz a lot.........bye n take care........

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18th May 2004, 11:41 PM

Enjoyed reading your poem. dil se likhi hai, kagaz pe sab likh sakda hai. dil se sirf ek doota tara likh sakh dha hai.

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That was really touching - 9th June 2004, 03:53 AM

Hi sanskruthi,
That poem was really touching..Gudluck..and keep posting


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Hi Ashyk and Sony
1 st of all ..............sorry for replying sooooooooooooo late
sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry...........

thanz u both for reading and appreciating my work
hope i can write much better than this.........
chalo bye and take care

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hello Sanskruti ji ,


aapki poem padhai
bahut achhi likhi hai
i can understand your pain which you want to express through this poem
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hi soumya...........


thanz for ur reply........n appreciation
nice to hear that u understood what i wanted to say thru my poem.............

chalo bye n take care


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Wow..
I noticed today that a person can be so lonely..We are all here for you dear on Sayari.com...
Not you are not you..But now we are we.....


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waah!!! - 4th January 2005, 12:32 AM

koi itna acha kaise likh sakta hai :O aap sada aise hi likhte rahe...aap jaise logo ki wajah se to aaj bhi humein jeene ka mann karta hai warna yeh duniya to kab ki marr chuki hai....lekin iss poem ki tarah aap kabhi na roye yehi dua karte hain hum....take care
   
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15th January 2005, 03:25 PM

too good too good.

I have soem tears in my eyes
I have words no more to describe it.

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Thumbs up hi - 16th January 2005, 08:05 PM

hello sanskrutiji...its an amazing composition and like others i would also thank u for writing such a touching poem.....please keep writing.........take care...bye 4 now!!!!!


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really true n sooooooo touching...


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sanskruti ji sanskruti ji.... main bhi maafi chahta hu ki itne dino ke baad reply kar raha hu...waise maine kal hi aapka reply padha tha...anyways thnx for replying...aap hamesha likhte rahein aur khush khush khush rahein...mujhe zyada bolna nahi aatalekin aap khush rahein bas!! keep in touch..!! aapse milkar behad khushi hui
   
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Marvellous,really it is very touchy-------
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25th March 2005, 05:19 PM

Hi all..........

i am really very very sorry for replying sooooooo late............kya karu dostoon...........examz the yaar............padhai karti ya reply karti.........i really apologize from the core of my heart............


Hi SACHU.......

thanz for being there for me...........i liked ur last lines a lot........
Now you are not you..But now we are we.......
So sweet of u............thanz again.........bye n take care.....


Hi DIGENSOSAMA..........


no yaar .............dont worry..........i have stopped crying long back.........now i am full of positive energy.......it happens yaar..........life teaches u a new lesson everyday............i got mine.........n really learnt a lotttttttttttt............i liked each n every word of ur appreciation.......btw what does ur ID means ?.........bye n take care.........


Hi ROHIN..........

thanz dost...........when words fall short to describe............silence is the best way.............remember that.........when speaking fails.......silence persuades........bye n take care...........


Hi $HIVANI..........

i think i have already complimented u for the use of the $ sign instead of 'S' ............its really cool...........thanz for taking time to reply............bye n take care.......

Hi FeelIT...............


Thanz yaar............thanz a lot. lot lot n lot.........bye n take care...........


Hi AIZAMEHMOODKHAN..........

thanz for those words dear..........bye n take care.............



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7th June 2006, 06:57 PM

sankruti ji,
to b frank it was a gr8 post.it had a feeling which is rarely described in poetries.n very well xpressed in very simple words.i read n felt as if some1 has seen in my heart n poured down the feelings in his own words.it was a gr8 xperince reading u.hope to read more from u in reacent future.keep posting.



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tears - 8th June 2006, 09:14 AM

hi sanskurti,
u r most welcome,
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HI sanskritiji

excellent. your poem make tears flow from my eyesand touches my heart. excellent words simple and sweet. so happy to read your poem and waiting for some more keep writing like this good keep it up.

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Hi Ghayal_Shayar, aizamehmoodkhan & Mushkan


Me damn sorry for replying so late........actually i dont visit the site anymore.........morever i had forgotten my password too......


thanks a lot for ur appreciation.......thats my fav poem yaaron......whenever i feel lonely or depressed i read it.......


happy to know that u ppl liked it.......thanz once again........


c ya n take care.........


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I Am Sorry My Tears....

I am sorry my tears
Coz I have trapped you ,
Whenever you wanted to flow
I have always stopped you.

I know inside for you
It is very suffocating ,
But even if you flow
Nothing you will be getting .

You will flow
And get vanished somewhere ,
And till that time
People will show that they do care .

So better don't expect
Anybody's sympathy ,
You are true
You don't deserve false pity.

I know you wanna come out
To make me feel relieved ,
What you think ?
Will this make my wounds get healed?

Rather than you
Its more painful for me
My dreams getting shattered
Is what everyday I see .

Still I smile
And pretend to be carefree ,
But whats behind ?
Nobody ever tried to see .

Like a poison inside me
Still I wanna you to hold ,
Desperately I wanna breath
But my breaths have turned frozen and cold .

Through my body
Like blood you run ,
Now you are my night
And the only sun .

So don't feel hurted
And never do leave my eyes ,
A bond of love
Ours relation is so nice .

Whenever I smile - you glitter
And make my eyes glow ,
So please wait till my death
Mabbe then from every eye you will flow.

Sanskruti.



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1st December 2007, 12:37 AM

Hi Sanskruti,

a very beautiful poem and a very heart felt composition I was able to meet in the words penned down by you.

thanks for sharing them...

sometimes its better to let the tears flow...
when the heart feels lighter, the grey skies spirits soar,
the beauty of the world you are able to see,
which would have been obstructed by the glitter of sorrow.

take care

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lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
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Thumbs up !!tears!! - 23rd January 2008, 10:04 AM

Quote:
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I Am Sorry My Tears....

I am sorry my tears
Coz I have trapped you ,
Whenever you wanted to flow
I have always stopped you.

I know inside for you
It is very suffocating ,
But even if you flow
Nothing you will be getting .

You will flow
And get vanished somewhere ,
And till that time
People will show that they do care .

So better don't expect
Anybody's sympathy ,
You are true
You don't deserve false pity.

I know you wanna come out
To make me feel relieved ,
What you think ?
Will this make my wounds get healed?

Rather than you
Its more painful for me
My dreams getting shattered
Is what everyday I see .

Still I smile
And pretend to be carefree ,
But whats behind ?
Nobody ever tried to see .

Like a poison inside me
Still I wanna you to hold ,
Desperately I wanna breath
But my breaths have turned frozen and cold .

Through my body
Like blood you run ,
Now you are my night
And the only sun .

So don't feel hurted
And never do leave my eyes ,
A bond of love
Ours relation is so nice .

Whenever I smile - you glitter
And make my eyes glow ,
So please wait till my death
Mabbe then from every eye you will flow.

Sanskruti.
hye.. wow.. sanskrutii.. bahot achcha tha.. tumhari poem me bahot kuch apna sa dikhta hai mujhe.. bahot sukun mila padh kar.. good please keep it up. all the best.

Last Night Thinking Of you.. One tear Rolled out..I asked why R you out,
Tear said theres sumone so preety in your Eyes..so theres No place for Me."

padh ne me kitna achcha hai yeh thought.. bt truth is different.. Rone ke liye bahot himmat chahiye.


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1st October 2008, 10:09 AM

Hello Sanskrutii...

Wow! It's really beautiful and a very touchy poem....Really touched my heart &I have some tears in my eyes....

Best wishes..Keep it up.... take care......

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